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06-19-2008, 07:26 PM
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Wow, when I'm hungry, I'm HUNGRY! lol
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06-19-2008, 07:38 PM
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Chapter 9: The Meeting with TravisSch
We stepped into VMK Town. It was dark.. No buildings.. No people except.. "Why hello there my travelers". TravisSch said. "Hiya Travis, we came here for those documents". We said. "Not without a fight". Travis said. All of a sudden, The Yeti must of heard that, because he came charging in like a buffalo with the speed of a cheetah. He plummited Travis to the ground and the documents went flying up. "I got them!" Glitter said. Glitter almost had them when.. TRIP!! She tripped on a rock. "OW!!!!" She screamed "I'm coming Glitter!!" Flower screamed. "Uh... I guess I'll get the documents". I said. Meanwhile the Yeti was having a lightsaber battle with Travis. "You shall never win Yeti!" Travis said. "RAWR!!!!!!! I will WIN!" Yeti screamed. "Ow.. I think my ears exploded". Flower said. "OK.. OK.. I give up" Travis said. "YAY!!!" We all screamed. We all traveled back home safely with the documents.. including TravisSch, who agreed to help us now.
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06-19-2008, 07:53 PM
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Lol! I love lightsabers!
Write more!
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06-19-2008, 08:08 PM
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Chapter 10: Hurricane on Our side
"OK this is how to move the Vortex, we need a rope, a mythical creature who posses strengh(sp?), and knowledge. We also need 6 people to help move the vortex". Travis said. "We have me, flower, travis, glitter, defre, and Tagmann. 6 people yes!" defre said. "And we also need the creator of the BuzzMotron 2000. "Didn't Host_Hurricane invent that?" I said. "He did indeed". Flower said. "Is Hurricane having an event today" Tagmann said. "He is and I will go and get him" Travis said. "OK!" we all said. So Travis went and explained our situation to Hurricane. "I will do it. I hate that thing being there anyway, I have the perfect idea where to put it". He said. "OK we need to report back to blossomflower's room. "You said blossomflower right?" Hurricane asked. "yep, why?" Travis asked "I'll explain on the way back". Hurricane said.
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06-19-2008, 08:11 PM
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Nice story! Write more!
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06-19-2008, 09:25 PM
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Chapter 11: A Reunion
It was time to get off for the night. The next morning they got on to plan again. So they all met in Travis's room this time. While they were talking, a mysterious figure entered the room. "Hello?" said the mysterious figure "BOAT!!" they all yelled. "Hi guys, I had to go out of town yesterday, I am so sorry." Boat said. "Np, np. Well we will tell you all that happened." they said. - tells all that happened - "Ah I see. Well nice to meet ya Travis." Boat said. "Nice to meet you too Boat". Travis said. - a while later - "A have a.. secret". Travis said. "What is it Travis?" Tagmann said. "I can not join you on your quest to move the vortex. I can only help you." he said. "Oh my.. then we only have 5.." defre said. "EXCUSE ME, I am right here.." Boat said angerily. "Oh, hehe I forgot". defre said. "I got your hehe..." Boat moaned. "Now gentleman, let's not get in a cat fight now" Glitter said. "Cat fight? More like a bore fight.." Flower said. "So.. Travis, did you incounter any injuries"? I asked. "Actually, yes I did. Mr.Yeti - glares - broke my leg. "OMG!! That blue monster did.. I will get him" defre said. - defre runs off to go fight the yeti with lightsabers - "Hmm.. random he is." Boat said. "So we shall start tomorrow." Flower said. "OK!!!!!" defre yelled. "Wow.. we can still hear him.." Tagmann said. "I'll be getting off now. Lunch Time!" Travis said. "Yum, lunch". Tagmann said EDIT: I am still accepting people to be in the story(for my idea to work, I need more people LOL) EDIT2: That's what I excatly need Vienna
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06-19-2008, 09:31 PM
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LOL!!! ROFL!! I love lightsabers! And boy am I LOUD!! LOLOLOLOLOL!
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06-19-2008, 09:40 PM
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Chapter 12: Vienna the Nightmare
The next day arrives and we are all sitting except one person.. "Where is the world is defre.." I ask. "Sleeping in probably". Flower said "He acts like her never sleeps". Tagmann said "And he yells too much" Glitter said. "Is it just me or.." Boat starts to ask. "HI GUYS!!!" defre screams at the top of his voice. "Man, could you keep it down.." we all say. "Sorry, I am just so excited for today". defre says. "Oh OK then I guess we should go" Flower says. So they head on over to the vortex in Castle Forecourt. "CHECK-OFF!" Glitter says. "Rope is here" I say. "6 people are here". Tagmann says. "And the mythical creature is here!" The Yeti says. "Great, now lets.." Flower says "MUAHAHAH, stop where you are when you can". says.. VIENNA THE NIGHTMARE. "OMG.. I've heard of her.. she's worse than porkey pines in the winter". defre says. "Huh?" we all(including miss evil)ask. "It's a saying like she's worse than something horrible". defre explains "Oh, so like worse than worst?" Boat asks. "Excatly". Vienna says. "Prepare to be.. EXTERMINATED!!" we all yell. - we all get out lightsabers - "Prepare to fight!" Vienna yells.
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06-19-2008, 09:45 PM
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Lightsabers........ YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWESOME story so far!!
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06-19-2008, 09:59 PM
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Chapter 13: The Power of Hurricane
"Hazzah!!" HOST_Hurricane said. Vienna tried to block his attack but she failed. "I will NEVER GIVE UP." she said She went in for the attack on Hurricane, but defre blocked it. "Ah...." defre said. "DEFRE NO!!!!!!!" we screamed. "Keep going.." he said "We NEED you defre" Boat said. "OK.. I'll try to hang in" defre said. Meanwhile Hurricane and Vienna were in a tense fight until Hurricane remembered his powers. "Prepare to be blasted away". Hurricane said "Huh?" Vienna said - Hurricane pressed BOOT button on Vienna - "No!!!!" she screams. "Wow.. thanks for helping Host". Tagmann said "Yeah what she said". Glitter said. "Ah, it's nothing". He said "Time to move this thing". Flower said. So they used the rope and moved it to... End of Chapter 13. Don't worry the story ain't over... by a longshot.
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06-19-2008, 10:07 PM
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Wow, this story is going FAST!
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