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Old 09-12-2009, 05:45 PM
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My Dance

I got up. I walked to the shower. When I got there I saw my phone ring. It was a text. From Jake. It said:
Going to the dance on friday
I texted back:
I don't know yet. If I can find a stunning dress then maybe...
He texted back:
haha very funny. You are TOO sarcastic sometimes!
I texted back:
Who said I was being sarcastic!
He texted:
Stop! r u going?
I texted:
If I can find a nice dress
He texted back:
Okay! Bi!
I texted:
Bi!
I got in the shower and out. I wrapped a towel arond my hair. And, one more around me. I got out my tooth brush, hair brush, tooth paste, hair dryer, hair staightener. My brother's friend was over that day. I have heard he likes me. I don't know why but he does. So, brought my clothes for today in with me. I brushed my hair. Then I brushed my teeth. Blow dryed my hair. I pluged in the staightener. I put on my clothes. Bright purple short shorts. A white shirt. It had a big ranbow peace sign on it. By now the staightener should be ready. I staightened my hair. My dark red hair that I dyed. I brushed my hair one more time. Then left the bathroom. I went to my room really happy. Was Jake going to ask me to the dance? I smiled tightly. He was blonde. light blue twinkling eyes! A rounded nose. He was so nice! I looked in my mirror. My staight dark red hair sat there. It had layers. A little under my shoulders. Then a again. Why would he want to ask me? I had Hazel eyes. I went over and put my makeup on. Mascara. Purple eyeshadow. Red-Pink blush. A glitter lipgloss. I frowned. I went downstairs. Loged on thye computer. I went on AIM to see if Jake was on. He wasn't I loged off. It was the first day of summer. Summer dance at school is in a few weeks. I think there is three summer dances. I went to this one messaging site. It said in big letters:
ONE NEW MESSAGE FROM MY DANCE
I read the words. Who is My dance?
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Old 09-12-2009, 10:22 PM
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Maybe "My Dance" is their secret admirer....
Lol, This story is pretty interesting so far!

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Old 09-12-2009, 11:11 PM
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Sounds like the start of an interesting story, but your sentences are really choppy. Try using some adjectives and other forms of description.
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Old 09-13-2009, 05:38 AM
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I wil this is just getting at little parts.

Chapter 2:

I opened the letter. It read:

Hi... This is My Dance! I love to dance. I got to your school. I will descibe me. You guess who I am... By replying to this message.

I have dirty blonde hair.
Green eyes.
I KINDA like you.... KINDA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A shy smile.
I know Jake.
You know me.
I always use my bike.
I love choclate.
I like to write poems and stories.
I met you once...
I don't go to your school.

I wrote the a poem:
Like rose, I like you.
I'll always miss you.
Never leave me.
I like you, alot.
I smile when I see you.
That smile means hi...
I mis you.......

That's it! Now, guess.

I replied:
Hi... I don't know... I can't guess do you like me or like me like me?

He replied QUICK! I read:
Like you. I might (might!!!!) ask you to the first summer dance... What are you wearing?

I replied:
A short dress.

He replied again:
HAHA! Jake told me about your sarcasim...

I replied:
I knew he would... I'm texting him to ask who you are...

He replied:
NO!

I pulled out my cell. And texted Jake:
Hi... Dooes anyone (of your friends) have like me or anything?
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Old 09-13-2009, 04:45 PM
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Old 09-13-2009, 04:49 PM
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Old 09-13-2009, 09:36 PM
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