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Old 05-03-2008, 06:06 PM
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John was looking through his e-mails one day, when he found one from may 21st, 2008. "Wow! That was five years ago today!" he proclaimed. He opened it up. Ah, now he remembered! He had saved this e-mail from yavn to remember the good times of VMK. He decided to check out the website. 'Hmm' he thought. The log in button was still there! He decided to try to log in, for old times sake. He put in his information, HOST_Hurricane, and his password. To his complete surprise, he logged in! Hurricane walked down main street, trying to remember his memories, when he saw esmeralda strolling along. "Host Hurry!" She yelled. "how... wha... How did you get on?"
"I dont know!" Answered hurricane, very confused. "We've been hiding" Said Esmeralda. "Yavn just about gave up on finding us." All of a sudden, she disappeared. "This cant be good!" Hurricane yelled out loud. He decided to check out the matterhorn.
He saw a big clump of snow he decided he would sit on. "BUUBALAHOOBLAGAGA!" The 'snow' yelled. It was yeti! "Yeti I'm so glad to see you!" "Grummmfff" Hurricane noticed he was sitting on yeti's head. "Oops!" The embarresed host said, looking at his feet. "No problem Hurry. This is our hide-out. Have you seen esmeralda?" "Yeah I have! She just disappeared all of a sudden." Yeti looked more shocked than when hurricane sat on him. "Oh No! Yavn has been sending out workers to find hidden NPCs. We were supposed to be deleted five years ago! Guys, come here! It's HOST_Hurriane!" Gus, Erza, Phineas, the dragon, and everyone else, but two NPCs (besides esmeralda) came out. " Hey, hurricane!" Yelled gus. "It was yeti's idea to come here, he's the smart one here!" Hurricane looked up at yeti, he was chewing on his cell-phone. "uh.... Yeti?" Hurricane asked awkwardly. "Oh, sorry. They got the gator waitor too. We haven't had food forever. 53.43 minutes exactly! Just then someone came running through the door. "Put your hands up! You are all about to be deleted by the VMS!" (virtual magic squad)



To be continued...

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Old 05-03-2008, 06:27 PM
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Oh come on gorams!!!!!! I'm sitting in your room on VMK! Finish the STORY!!!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I DONT HAVE PATIENCE!!!!!!!!

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Old 05-03-2008, 07:54 PM
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Chapter 2

"oh great..." yeti mumbled, while parts of his cell phone fell out of his mouth. 'hmm' thought hurry. He clicked on 'veryverybadboy' and pressed boot. "Woot!" Yeti yelled. "I could have done that..." Said Erza, looking emabrressed. "Ok everyone. We need to find Esmeralda and The gaitor waitor!" ordered Hurricane. "And i need to get myself a new cell-phone!" yelled the yeti.

In the office of yavn, Yavn was not in a good mood. "How could you let yourself get booted?" Yavn Screamed "Um... well. He clicked on me, and pressed the boot button" veryverybadboy said. Poof! He disappeared out of the room. "I want all of your memebers of the VMS in there, and I want them in there NOW!" Yavn pressed the fantasyland button on his map and got in right away.

"Use your invisibility magic!" Host Hurricane said, "They're coming!"


Back in the dungeon, Esmeralda, veryverybadboy, and Gaitor Waitor sat down feeling sorry for themselves. "We need to think of a plan to get us out of here." Esmeralda said. ververybadboy made a run for esmeralda "It's your fault I'm in here!" he screamed. "Whoah! Calm down! Unless you want to be my next special, we have to work together! Did i mention my feet hurt?" Gaitor waitor exclaimed, a smirk on his face. As they thought of a plan, Host_Hurricane and his friends were in big trouble.

Yavn was furiated. How did they survive this long? He quickly stole all of their invisibility magics. "What do you have to say for yourselves?" he yelled. "Uh... check out the newsletter for the vmk rules and guidelines...?" Yeti awkwardly asked. "I will have you all deleted imediately!" Yavn screamed once more

Back in the dungeon, Gaitor Waitor was cooking up a special recipie of hot sauce. "This should burn throuh the walls! I always keep some ingredients in my jacket." They were finally out. " Come on! We have to save hurry!" Veryverybadboy sat unmoved. "What are you doing?" Esmie asked. "uh... I like the mood of this room O_o" Gaitor Waitor pulled him out by his ear and started running

Yavn clicked on HOST_Hurricane. "Hurricane. We have been friends for a while. I'm afraid it's time for that to end..."

To Be Continued..

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LOL could you maybe make a new NPC named Tabitha



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Great story but sometimes hard to know who is talking. Still i like the story loads
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Old 05-04-2008, 12:15 PM
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Thank you both

If anyone wants to be in the story, I can try to fit two more people in! (CuteTabitha I'll use your NPC idea )

And lost, If you could quote the places where it is hard to see who is talking, and somehow fix it and bold, I'll make changes right away

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Chapter 3

Yavn grinned wickedly as he pressed down on the 'Delete' button. Hurricane gulped. How did he get himself into this mess? How did yavn turn evil? And how did yeti get a new black chocolate cell phone?? Just as yavn pressed the button, a volley of cannonballs flew through the air. "It's captain black sparrow!" someone yelled. "It's davy jones!" a very confused person yelled, "No! Yer all wrong! It's the pizza guy!" Yeti yelled at the top of his lungs. "Arrr, yer all wrong! Ye blumberin scurvy dogs! It's me, captain blackheart!" The captain exclaimed. Hurricane yelled to him "Why is there a head on the bow of your ship captain?" Before the captain could speak, the head yelled out. "Hello HOST_Hurricane! Have you seen the new updates in the newsletter? Bummed about missing an item? Check back for new items and great deals!" "Oh boy..." They all mumbled. Ned must have been a little delirious after all action "Aye, dont worry mateys, he's just sea-sick" the captain explained. A horrible thought just came to Hurricane "Wait! Where's yavn?" Before anyone could speak, gaitor waitor, esmeralda, and.. guest53234...? were thrown off the edge. No one could see who pushed them. A feeling of pandimonium took place on the boat. Everyone was trying to get away from the shadowed person who was pushing everyone off. Captain Blackheart tried throwing his parrot at it. Ned tried throwing one of his 'cheap' signs at it. (Which is pretty hard, considering he's a head) Just as captain Blackheart had the shadowed figure near the edge, hundreds of other people who's faces were shadowed swarmed onto the boat. Hurricane panicked. He tried to flee to the captains quarters. He was going to make it! Yes! He was so close. Just as he opened the door, his whole world went black.

To Be Continued...

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Great story and i think i just couldnt read the other day 0_o
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ok LOL. If anyone sees any errors please point them out to me
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