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Magic Kingdom Memoirs Where dreams are buried, but not forgotten. |
Story of a girl:) Chapter 1 |
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i love this story!!! its so good. i can exactly imagine how Ellen would feel! great job
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THANKS
----------- A mini chapter: "Come on Car! Tell ONE way, im better than her." I frowned and scraped a peice of paint off my chipped up bike. "I love the smell of your hair." He smelt it, "Woops." He shrugged and giggled. "WHAT?" I asked. "Nothing, i just got some pink paint in ur hair." He shrugged. "Omg." I laughed, "TAKE THAT!" i splattered him with orange paint. We cracked up in laughs.
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Carter drove me home, so i could shower and change from our paint fight. I guess while i was upstairs, he became friends with my brothers by them showing him their cheap video games. We watched movies at his place and then he took me back home. Blueberry and I went to sleep. I had school the next day and knew i would hang out with Carter, my new best friend...
"Ellen!" My mom called. I awoke and looked at my cheap hello kitty clock, the one my ex-best friend got me for my 5th birthday. It was 6:30, i picked up my pink baseball bat (another gift from her, for my 8th birthday) and crashed the clock into peices. "What was that?" My mom asked. "My clock fell and broke." I lied, then i got dressed in my brother's old basketball sweatshirt, and a old pair of jeans with my mom's old black flipflops. I grabbed my monkey backpack (a gift from her) and ran downstairs. "Good Morning." My oldest brother turned to me. "Hey." i yawned. "School's cancelled." he turned on the tv. "Yah right." I bit my toast and opened the door. Snow up to my knees. "Oh." I slammed the door shut. "Have a good day." My mom grabbed her purse, "Go over to Maxie's house. I love you." I stepped out into the snow. Maxie drove by on her orange bike with Kevin, the freshman on the back of her bike. Maxie saw me and her hazel eyes windend. She pecked his freckled cheek and kept riding. but, then she stopped her bike and grabbed an apple out of her basket and pelted it at my stomach. I fell to the snow and cried myself to sleep. "Ell, Ell?" I heard Carter's voice. I was laying in the snow. I sat up, "Car!" "Hey, Maxie's parents caught her throwing the apple and your parents were called, the ambulance is here and everything." "My parents? NO!" I yelled. "Yes, your dad's here." "DAD!" I frowned.
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