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| Magic Kingdom Memoirs Where dreams are buried, but not forgotten. |
A Long Goodbye
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08-18-2006, 06:08 AM
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A Long Goodbye
Chapter 1
--------- It all started when a girl name Sarah walked into the class room, she was new. She looked down at her bright green converse and then scanned the room. A bunch of people got up and ran over to her, considering that she only switched classes they where confused. "Are you going to be here the rest of the year?" "Who are you?" "Sarah! Your here!" is all that flooded through the class. I was the talk of the school that day, and whenever I would walk back into the class to pick something up people would stand up and clap. Sarah, a little weirded out from the behavior just smiled and played along. She bowed as people started clapping louder, the reason she moved classes just stared her down with a glare of envy in her eyes. Sarah smiled and walked out the door, returning to her new class. She saw him. The guy this story is about. Chapter 2 ---------- "Sarah, you'll have to sit at the back table over there until I get another desk. We'll rearrange then." Mrs.U said, pointing to the back table. She was the nicest teacher in the school. Sarah looked back at the boy she saw and smiled, he smiled back and continued talking to his friends. Apparently he was a jock, because she always seen him on the football field during free period. Sarah put down her backpack and stuff and sat down. It was time for math, she was pretty good at math so her hand was usually raised. After free period, Sarah came to the class amazed that her desk was set up.. right by the guy she had her eye on. "Codi, can you help her out?" The teacher asked, he nodded and smiled at her. So his name is Codi.. Sarah thought, she sat down as he started explaining everything. It was time for a partners science test. "Sarah, you work with Codi." The teacher said. Sarah was amazed with how much they where getting paired up. They started working on the test. |
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#7
08-18-2006, 02:32 PM
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wow great story i cant wait till more
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#8
08-18-2006, 02:55 PM
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The chapters are a bit short.
I think you should join Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 together for a full chapter, though. The story is great though.. A bit like my own life. |
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#9
09-02-2006, 04:28 PM
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Awwww dont delete it. It was getting good. PLEASE WRITE MORE
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