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Monkey Man ( The VMK Version ) Saving VMK - Books 17-30 - |
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thx. you read the other version right? if you didn't, this story wont make much sience.
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LOL
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Chapter 7
Yavn Strikes Back Candy typed REALLY slow. I mean, REALLY REALLY slow. I mean, so slow, that pac-man probably goes slower. " Can you go any faster? " Hikoik asked. " Its not my fault Monkey poured the cement on my fingers. " Candy said. " Let me type it. " Berry said. But he typed even slower. " Umm... where's the T button? " Berry asked. A dark portal appeared behind silver. A winged one eyed weirdo stepped out of it. It was Yavn. " Give me those pieces of dimension Berry, or feel my wrath. " Yavn said. " Never! " Berry yelled. Yavn lifted his hand, and made his fingers bend. Berry started choking. " Hikoik... Type... In... The... Site...! " Berry struggled to talk. Hikoik typed faster than the wind. A portal appeared in the computer and the friends were sucked into it. Yavn didn't. " Roar! Those weirdos will never succeed. " Yavn said. End of chapter 7!
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LOL did you mean pac-man probably goes FASTER? LOL
wow, berry's a dweeeeb LOL psh i shoulda typed it to begin with. 90 average wpm babeh LOL PSH i woulda beat hikoik at it -- yeah okay im done. LOL this story entertains me greatly. |
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Chapter 8
A Chapter The friends were on a site that rates our stories. " Im tired. I haven't slept in over a year. Why is this story so long? " Hikoik said. " Not sure. Just help us find the piece. I don't feel very comftertable in here. " Berry said. Monkey jumped from word to word. He looked around when he saw something. It showed Monkey Man ( The VMK Version ) Saving VMK. It was on 3rd place. " Guys! Were on 3rd place on the website! " Monkey yelled. " Thats great. Just look for the piece. " Hikoik said. Monkey saw the piece over on the side. He picked it up and jumped to the top where the friends were. " I found it. Lets go. Im pretty sure we have 5 pieces or 4 pieces. " Monkey said. Candy took out the laptop. End of chapter 8!
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Chapter 9
Website Not Loading Candy was typing. She pressed the " ENTER " button and the friends were sucked into the computer. They were flying around, but no page was coming up. " Do you think we got disconnected from the internet? " Berry asked. " Im pretty sure your right. Lets try to find a cracked dimension. " Monkey answered. The friends floated around, looking for a cracked dimension. Silver noticed something blue over by flower. He floated over there and grabbed it. " 6 down, 4 to go. " Silver said. Candy took out her laptop, and noticed that they were disconnected. They quit out of the internet, and landed on the front of the computer backround. She looked through the applications to travel inside. She noticed the application Chess. The friends jumped into the application. End of chapter 9!
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- End of book 17 -
Chapter 10 The Last Pieces The friends were in the chess game. They walked around the board looking for pieces. Everyone was looking under the chess pieces. Berry, Monkey, Flower, and Silver found pieces. " We have enough! Lets get back! " Water Head said. Candy took out the laptop, went to VMK.com, logged in under - CENSORED -, and the friends were sucked into the game. The friends ran to the cave, where the unfinished gate was. The cracked dimensions flew out of the friend's pockets and the gate was restored. The friends walked over to the gate and opened it. They walked inside. There was a gigantic castle in front of them. The friends went inside the castle and found a cage that was filled with VMK players. " Help us! " One of the players groaned. Yavn came out of a portal that appeared all of a sudden. " So you found out. " Yavn said. He pulled a rope in front of him, and the cage went up really high, and a different thing came up. " You see, this is why you guys should know bad guys use reverse cycoligy. The cage, was actually a picture. So you guys were just owned. " Yavn said. A floor went open, and the friends were suddenly falling... falling... and falling. End of book 17!
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LOL "So you guys were just owned.'
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Chapter 1
Caged Players The friends landed on concrete. " Thats a sprang... " Berry said. Monkey noticed bars around them. They were in a cage! There were some other kids staring at them. " Who are you guys? " Flower asked. " Were VMK players. Mean ol' Yavn put us in here and locked us up. We dont know how to get out. Help us! " The kid said. " There's a backdoor right over there. " Monkey said as he pointed to the door in the cage. " Oh, I never noticed that door. Lets go! " The kid said as everyone followed Monkey to the door. End of chapter one!
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LOL "i never noticed that door" niiiiiiiiice.
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Chapter 2
To The Real World All the VMK players and the friends went into the door. They noticed they were by a laptop keyboard. Once again, they were in the real world. The author was sitting on a couch, writing this chapter. The friends and VMK players jumped on a cushon. " This is soft. Maybe we should stay here for the night. " Hikoik said. " No, we can't. Were in a fantasy book. It's not like people sleep in these books. " Flower said. Berry noticed a cup of root **** on a ledge. " Dibs. " Berry said as he ran over to it. ( By the way, if your not understanding this, I should have told you that they get all tiny when they go into the real world. ) End of chapter 2!
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Wow! Write More for Book 18 already!
( idea! : call CooAyegirl to Help ) anyways.. WRITE MORE |
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Chapter 3
A&W Root - BEEP - Berry looked at the company who made the drink. It was A&W. " Mmm! I love A&W! " Berry said. He climber to the top of the bottle and jumped in. He started to get all large. Lucky, the boy who writes this story, noticed a Monkey in the living room. " Grandma, why is there a giant monkey in here? " Lucky asked. " Not sure. Who cares? " Grandma said. " Alright, who are you? " Lucky asked. " Im Berry. A character in your story. " Berry said. Lucky fainted, and fell on his magic kit. All the kids jumped into the rot **** and got big. After everyone was the size of a human, they went out of the screen door and went down a ramp. They ran out the neighborhood. They ran and ran, until they found a burger king. All the kids wanted happy meals for the little toys in them, so Monkey lost all his 5s on his wallet. " Hey Monkey. Pass the ketchup. " Silver said. End of chapter 3! I find this funny because there really is a bpttle of A&W root - BEEP - by me and a magic kit by me.
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.......... LOL
"Why is there a giant monkey in here?" LOL |
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I need a mod's opinoion here. Is this thread gonna be deleted because Yavn is a bad guy in here and Yavn is a member of this site?
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