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Monkey Man ( The Vmk Version )
Monkey Man
Chapter 1 The Vortex In His Computer One day, this person named Monkey Man found an online game called VMK. He decided to make an account on VMK. after he did, His computer went pitch black for ten minutes. He stared at it for.. ten minutes. Then a vortex was in his computer and Monkey disappered into the computer. He was in VMK. " Uh Oh.." He said to himself. He was in the VMK esplande. Some people named Hikoik, Blossomflower, And Silver_Knight was in there. Monkey Man asked them to be there friends. They did not accept it. " Please press the Ok button? Please!! " Monkey said. " Fine. " The people said. End Of Chapter 1! Last edited by lucky33325; 06-06-2008 at 12:40 AM.. |
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Is Monkey Man me? You should know Flower and I are enemies! xD
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WOW interesting story
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No monkey, your not Monkey Man.. the book Monkey Man was made before i even played VMK and this site.
Btw, did u like the story? Last edited by TooHip; 08-04-2007 at 12:49 AM.. Reason: Merged consecutive posts |
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interesting.....
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Monkey Man
Chapter 2 Playing The Pirates Game Hikoik, Flower, and Silver wanted to play pirates. Monkey Man asked " Uh ok, ill play.. " "Follow me." Hikoik said All the friends folloed Hikoik to the pirates game lobby. They joined a Ship Battle game. Monkey had a really bad feeling about it. When the game started, Monkey disappered on to a ship called The Black Pearl. " Uh oh.. " Monkey Man said to himself. "1.. 2.. 3! Time To Set Sail!" Said the computer. All of the other team went after Monkey. The people stared shooting cannon balls at him. It was wrecking his ship! Monkey fired off all of his cannons and luckly, all the ships were destroyed when Monkey did that. Monkey's team won the game! Monkey said to his friends that he would NEVER play that game again. End of chapter 2! Did all of ya like it? |
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lol.. XD poor Monkey Man.
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Chapter 3
The Evil Alien, Sticklin ( Sticklin is an alien in my real books ) After the game of pirates, there was a person in the lobby. His name was Sticklin. " I know that guy! " Monkey Man yelled. " Sure u do.. " Hikoik said. " Dude, dont be so mean to Monkey.. " Silver said " Why? WE HARDLY KNOW HIM DUDE! " Then silver and hikoik got in a fight. Monkey wondered off to try to get Sticklin banned. " Hey, Ppl!! This guy lives by meh! " Monkey yelled to the VMK friends.. Then the staff came and banned them BOTH. Monkey got kicked out of his computer. Monkey waited a day, then he logged on again. it wouldn't put a vortex in his computer. it just logged him in. Monkey Man was worried. The End Of Chapter 3. I will post chapter four the day after tomorrow.. im going somewhere for a day. Or i might just post another I today o_o |
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haha i want more. its getting better and better as it goes on.
Last edited by LittleTinkFairy; 08-04-2007 at 11:41 PM.. |
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Everyone like the story? im trying my best ppl. SO DONT SAY ANYTHING MEAN
...........................................::Thank s::............................................... Lol |
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LOL!!! yay im in it ;D
and silver and hikoik got in a fight?! ROFL!!! that's SO NEW!!! AWESOME!!! more please. LOL |
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Chapter 4
The chapter where some stuff happens.. :I Monkey did not know what to do. He tried jumping into his computer, but he just hurt his head. " Darn! How come I cant go in again?? " Monkey then tried pressing 10 buttons at the same time. Another vortex appeared on to his computer. Once again, Monkey Man disappered into the computer. " Yay! " Our hero said. " There you are! " Hikoik said. Hikoik and silver were not mad at each other anymore. " I just read the Yavn speaks and it said someone bought out VMK! " Silver said. " Uh-oh.. who bought out VMK? " Monkey asked. " Someone called Sticklin.. do u know him? " Silver replied. " Yea.. i do. Sticklin's an alien.. He's trying to destoy the VMK world. I wonder what kind of things he's going to add in VMK.. " Monkey worried. Btw, thx flower Last edited by TooHip; 08-06-2007 at 12:16 AM.. |
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OMG
- bites nails - Yay the good part WHERE I AM CAN I BE HELD HOSTAGE AND BE TORTURED BY THE ALIEN?! PLEASE?!! please i beg of you... LOL |
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A writer never tells his secrets
Chapter 5 The new VMK VMK was not safe. And you wont believe what VMK looks like now. It looked dark and scary. Now, lets go back to hikoik, flower, silver, and monkey. " This is not good. At all. " Monkey said. There was little sticklins everywhere. The sticklins had blasters. If they shoot you, you go to dungeon hanging on chains for trhe rest of your VMK life. A little Sticklin came over to the friends and started to blast with the blasters. Flower got hit with a blast because she wasn't paying attention. ( Flower wanted meh to hold her hostage with the alien dude ) " Well, well, well. Aren't you one of Monkey's friends? " Sticklin asked flower while she was in the dungeon. " Duh.. " Flower said. " Ok then, im going to send u to a worse place. Its called My Ship. Muahaha! " Sticklin yelled. End of chapter 5! Everybody liking it? Chaper 6 Sticklin's Ship Blossomflower was teleported to Sticklin's ship. There was LOTS of little Sticklins. They all had blasters. There were other big aliens in the room. they had name tags. Flower read them. One said " Hello. My name is garginfoodle. " The other said " Hello. My name is Sorclon. " And the last one said " Hello. My name is Cekomalaki. " " Those are weird name you guys have. " Flower yelled over to the aliens. " Riggle-Fliggle? " Garginfoodle said. " What? " Flower said. Garginfoodle went over to flower and got hit by a blaster again. The blaster took her out of the computer for a week. " Uh oh. " Flower said to herself in real life. End of chapter 6! Last edited by lucky33325; 08-12-2007 at 05:09 PM.. Reason: Merged consecutive posts - Use the edit button please! |
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OK......... not a bad story though :P
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