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Magic Kingdom Memoirs Where dreams are buried, but not forgotten. |
♥~Best Friends Forever~♥ |
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♥~Best Friends Forever~♥
Introduction: Max and Elizabeth are Best Friends and have been for two years. The first day of summer Max has a surprise for Elizabeth. What will happen nobody knows.
♥~Chapter 1~♥ "Best Friends Forever" Max said putting his arm around Elizabeth. Elizabeth smiled at Max then looked down the hall of the high school. Max's green eyes glittered in the sun light comming from the window next to their lockers. "I can't believe this is the last day of school!" Elizabeth said excitedly. "Yeah! Next year we'll be seniors!" Max said smiling. "Seniors..." Elizabeth muttered to herself. As the bell rang Elizabeth and Max ran to the cafeteria where they would have a party till school got out. When they entered the cafeteria music came over the speakers, people were asking their friends what their phone numbers and e-mail addresses were. Some people were dancing, some even doing the chicken dance! Max smiled and grabbed Elizabeth's hand and walked over to the middle of the dance floor. Elizabeth and Max talked, danced, and sang. Time flew by fast all of a sudden the bell rang and shouts filled the air as people ran out the door full of excitement. "Get on your IM ok?" Max said to Elizabeth as they got in their cars. Should i keep writing? Last edited by PerfectPirateEyes; 05-29-2007 at 09:44 PM.. |
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Ooo i like it keep goingg.
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Glad you like it
I'll write more if i can get three more post plz
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keep on writing! I need to know more!
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Great so far! Keep going!
Daizy |
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Keep writing. That's all I have to say.
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Keep up Keep up GO PIRATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ok you asked for more! :) ( yay ) LOL
♥~Chapter 2~♥ ElizabethLaughs2Hard has signed on. Elizabeth scrolled down her buddy list and looked for Max."That's odd..." Elizabeth muttered."He must be getting a cookie...". MaX♥'sCookies has signed on. Max clicked on Elizabeth and a window popped up. ElizabethLaughs2Hard: You're Late MaX♥'sCookies: Calm down i was getting a cookie! ElizabethLaughs2Hard: Ok ok...so what did ya want to tell me so badly? MaX♥'sCookies:Ok well your parents are out of town and they didn't want you to stay home all alone....I have already talk to your parents about this and they said i could.... ElizabethLaughs2Hard: You could what?! MaX♥'sCookies: Elizabeth your comming with me to Disney World!! ElizabethLaughs2Hard: Awesome!!! LOL you rock Max! MaX♥'sCookies: We're driving there tomorrow so get packed up and ill pick you up at 7:00 am ok? ElizabethLaughs2Hard: Ok! What Hotel are we staying at? MaX♥'sCookies: We're staying at the Nickelodeon Hotel.... ElizabethLaughs2Hard: Aren't we a little old for that Hotel? MaX♥'sCookies: Your never 2 old to have fun Besides you know it will be fun ElizabethLaughs2Hard: I guess your right...g2g pack mister spongebobsquarepants... Max♥'sCookies:Ok Bye see ya tomorrow! ElizabethLaughs2Hard has signed off. Max♥'sCookies has signed off. I Hope you like it....It's a short chapter...Can i get five comments then ill post more if ya want! |
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PLEASE POST MORE!! its good!
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Sounds good so far, keep writing!
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Glad ya like it im going to go ahead and write more i can't stand the wait either LOL
♥~Chapter 3~♥
Elizabeth couldn't sleep that night she was so excited! Max didn't sleep much either he kept going over the directions to Disney World in his head. Max was afraid he would take the wrong turn tomorrow. In the morning Elizabeth grabbed her suit case, locked the front door to her house and sat in the grass till she saw Max's car pull up. "Im tired" Max yawned as he got out of the car. Max grabbed Elizabeth's suit case and put it in the back of the car then pulled her car door open. Max and Elizabeth got in and looked around. Elizabeth smiled at Max then turned down the radio. " How many hours will it take to get their?" Elizabeth said with a sigh. " Five hours at the most..." Max yawned and looked at Elizabeth then back at the rode. Elizabeth pulled out her portable DVD player and watched Potc1. Max couldn't watch the movie but he could listen and imagine the picture. At eleven a clock they stopped for lunch at McDonalds. Elizabeth ordered a salad while Max stuffed his face in his quarter pounder. Elizabeth Smiled at Max she knew they would be at the hotel very soon. At eleven thirty they pulled up to the Nickelodeon Hotel. "Stay here ill go get the key to your room and my room and ill help you carry your stuff up." Max said walking away to the front entrance. Elizabeth looked around and sat straight up with excitment. Max came back to the car shaking two keys in his hand. Max opened Elizabeth's door and got her stuff out. They took the elevator up to Elizabeth's room which was on the very top floor and Max's room was right underneath it. Elizabeth told Max to go take a nap till three a clock because he was starting to be grumpy. While Max was sleeping Elizabeth thought she should walk around the hotel and see what all was there. LOL hope you like it,It took a while to type but it was worth it! Any comments?! |
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It awesome! most deffinately keep writing!!
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keep on writing!! you know you should publish it.. I would buy it..
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Keeeeep wriiiiiting...@_@
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Nice.
But, every time a new person talks you make a new paragraph. ~Penguinz |
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