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07-17-2008, 12:57 AM
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**CHA-CHING$!** |story|
 CHA-CHING$! |the story of 5 kids who needed money for an XTREME 2000...and some.| Meet the characters. Randy Brenton - Group leader. He is CRAVING for the new XTREME 2000; along with all the other kids in the universe. Carol Brenton - Randy's sister. She likes to help; especially someone like her own brother. But just too look good. She needed the money for the new Snake Skin Pink Purse at Melonie's. Only the best shop in the world. Alexandria Lewis - Carol's best friend. No more to say except: BOOKWORM. Jared Lucas - Randy's best friend. He loves singing; and maybe that's a way they can get some dough. Jamie "Jelly" Dowenuht - Not the fastest shoe in the shelf, but she still remains the coolest kid--not to mention girl--in the 6th grade. - pRoLoUgE - Randy looked into the window at Harold's Bikes & Spare Parts. The XTREME 2000. Wow. But no way he was going to pay $454.00 for some bike! Well, now that he thought about it; it wasn't just "some bike". It was "THE bike". He needed money though. Money was all people needed these days! Uhg! Why not...bottlecaps? Or lolipops? Those were only 15 cents each down at Candycorn's Candy Center. But that was money, too. Man, what would he do?! Just then, in the cool Fall breeze, the ADS PAGE from the Tree Ledge Times came flying by. Like it was perfectly planned, Randy looked exactly at: LOOKING FOR SOMEONE WHO CAN HELP ME OUT, O.K.?! If you want to try out to help me and get some serious $$$, then I.M. me: Twistaboychachingchachowlolhihi I'll be on at like 3:50 PM. Okee?? -Twistaboy Yes, this could be some serious cha-ching! *Uh, O.K., if I get less than 3 comments, I won't write any more...so comment if you want to see more of CHA-CHING$!
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07-17-2008, 01:50 AM
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Would you like me to review your story? It sounds pretty good.
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 ^^ Made by an awesome artist: taylorswiftfan13 =]
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07-18-2008, 12:16 AM
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Just because people don't comment on your story, doesn't mean you ahve to shut it down...
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Although my comments goal is not going very well...if not 3 comments by Monday, I'm going to shut down the story 
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