A Vacation Gone Wrong

[TheMagicWithin]

Chapter 1:
Haden was so excited. He was going to Disneyland! He loved Disneyland so much. All the rides and snacks and the hotels! They were leaving after school. 1 more day of school he thought. It dragged on and on. He wanted it to be over! It was finally over. He went home and got packed. They were off to the Airport!

Chapter 2: A Pink Plane?
Haden and his family got to the airport and got their tickets for their plane.
"Go to your left, down to the end please" the recepoinst said.
"Thanks" My Mom said.
We went to our left and down to the end and we saw... a pink plane.
"Mommy, I thought planes were white" my little sister said.
"I did too" my mom said.
"Well.. this is gross" I said.
We got on our pink plane with pink seats and the pilot was wearing pink clothes.
"There is too much Pink. They need to move where they think the color Pink is like the President" I said.
"That was so mean!" My sister said.
"Oh shut it Mandy" I said.
"Make me!" Mandy said.
"Kids, stop it" my mom said.
"Mom.. let me deal with this" my dad said.
"Fine.. we'll stop" I said.
"HEHEHE" my sister said.
I glare at my sister.
The plane is taking off. It's really loud. We're off to Disneyland!

[MzDiamondBubbles]

cool & i like it

[bravejacob]

yeah!! pink planes!

[lucky33325]

Nice story. A few spelling errors, though. Well, my story has a million spelling errors. So I don't really care if you change em or not.