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Old 05-30-2007, 05:03 PM
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Old 06-07-2007, 01:56 AM
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♥~Chapter 4~♥

Elizabeth looked at her watch. She knew that Max could only sleep for about one hour so she had time to sneak about the hotel. A guy in a SpongeBobSquarePants costume waved at Elizabeth. While Elizabeth waved back at SpongeBob she bumped into someone. "Oh sorry miss..... Elizabeth!?" Elizabeth got up she didn't see who she ran into but his voice was very famialiar. "Jack!?" Elizabeth was surprised. She never thought she would see Jack again! Elizabeth and Jack were best buds in 7th grade but then he moved to Orlando when his Dad got a new job. Jack opened his arms wide open and Elizabeth ran right in to give him a hug. "I never thought i would see you again!" Elizabeth said still hugging Jack. Jack and Elizabeth stopped hugging and went to sit in front of the little lake outside. "What's new?" Elizabeth asked. "Well i work at WDW" Jack said and gave Elizabeth a smile. Elizabeth and Jack had made a promise the night Jack was leaving. The promise was that they would both work at WDW for as long as they could stand it. Elizabeth and Jack were both Disney freaks. "Me and my friend are going to WDW tomorrow." Elizabeth said while looking into the water. "When I'm not working maybe we can hang out and the days im not working i can get you and your firend in for free." Jack said pulling on Elizabeth's hair. Elizabeth laughed, Jack always liked to pull on her hair like it was a chu-chu-train's horn. "Who is your friend anyway?" Jack asked while Elizabeth looked at her watch. "His name is Max and he is really nice you want to come meet him?" Elizabeth said standing up and pulling on Jack's hand.

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Old 06-11-2007, 09:20 PM
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Old 06-11-2007, 09:49 PM
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~♥ Chapter 5~♥
"How long have you known this guy?" Jack asked as Elizabeth grabbed his hand and ran to the elevator. "Two years i think you two will get along just fine!" Elizabeth said a little worried. " What ever you say Liz." Jack said while Elizabeth pushed the elevator button. While they ran out of the elevator Max heard Elizabeth's voice and wondered who she was talking to. He looked outside and saw her with a boy. " Oh, great! She found a boyfriend." Max said rolling his eyes and he closed the blinds as fast as he could while Elizabeth knocked on the door. " Come on in Liz." Max said while getting three sodes out of the mini fridge. Elizabeth slid the card in the door and opened it. "Max meet Jack." Elizabeth said smiling half nervous half excited. "Wazup?" Max said taking a drink of his soda. Elizabeth sat next to Max on cough opening her soda. "Nothing much..." Jack said sitting next to Elizabeth. Jack's phone rang and he said he had to go. As Jack left Max couldn't help but be a little mad. "Where's your boyfriend going?" Max said raising his eyebrows at Elizabeth. Elizabeth looked at Max. "He isn't my boyfriend just my friend that i bumped into while you we're asleep."


Hope you like it it's a little short because i'm tired and i can hardly stay awake!
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Old 06-13-2007, 09:54 PM
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Old 06-14-2007, 11:00 PM
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Old 06-15-2007, 04:54 AM
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Old 06-15-2007, 10:32 PM
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♥~Chapter 6~♥
"Well then who was he?" Max asked still a little confused. "He was my best friend in 7th grade but then he moved and I bumped into him down stairs in the lobby. "Ok...." Max said sitting down on the couch. " Just give him a chances he's not a bad guy i promise you." Elizabeth said a little worried. "Alright! I'll give him a chance..." Max said looking up to the celeling. "Thanks Max." Elizabeth said while she sat down next to Max and gave him a hug. Max and Elizabeth got up and went down stairs to the lobby and walked around for a while. "Hey! Hey!" Someone said from behind them. Max whipped his head around and there stood Jack hanging up his cell phone. "That was my boss he said i can skip work tomorrow!" Jack said smiling and looking from Elizabeth to Max. "Will you excuse me for a minute?" Max said turning to go to the boy's room. As Max washed his hands he said to himself under his breath ''I will not let him ruin Me and Elizabeth's vacation."

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