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Grammar IS important xD
Ya just gotta remember..
o Punctuation - Ex: July 20, 1984, was the day Sailor Thomas spotted land, found a new indian tribe, and met his best friend.
o Grammar - Fortune, not Fourchun xD
o Detail - Instead of saying: Bob walked home. Try somethin like, Bob walked home with his red dragon jacket, blue jeans, and the torn gallaz shoes his father had given to him. (that was pitiful..)
o Imagination - Try to make it interesting, dont just use the obvious. Think outside the box. xD
... I randomly posted this o_O
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