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Fairy
12-24-2006, 09:03 AM
Charecters
Fantasy, Girl, Age 16.
Ria,Boy, Age 16
Kumiko, Boy Age 16
Nami, Girl Age 16

Fantasy: Heya Mom!
Mom: Your Awake Fantasy!
Fantasy: Thats My Job In DreamLand! Just kidding Mom.
Mom: Well, This letter Came for you!
Fantasy: Thanks Mom ( Smiles And Winks)
Mom: Well Im of to the Garden.
Fantasy: oK Mom! ( Reads Letter )
( Fantasy Goes Outside)
Fantasy: Heya Ria! ( Runs To Ria)
Ria: Hiya Fantasy.
Fantasy: Oh I Just wanted To Know if you,Kumiko,And Nami Want too come with me to my first delivery!
Kumiko: Sure..( Looks away) We better get there before Night
Nami: Im With you.. Expecialy If Kumiko Is Going..
Ria: Then Were Going!
Fantasy; Lets Go!

( They walk and it suddenly becomes Dark )
Ria: Hey Who Turned Of the.. ( Ria Is Suddenly Gone )
Fantasy: Ria! Ria! ( Dark Cloud starts to Surround Fantasy)
Nami: Were Is He! Fantasy we need to go find.. ( Suddenly Is Gone)
Kumiko: ( Grabs Fantasy) There Gone and Nothing you can do can stop it. ( Eyes Turn Red) Lets Go!
Fantasy: Let me go! Let Me Go! ( Dark Cloud Starts Wrapping Around Her )

( Fantasy Falls To the ground)
Kumiko: Ha Ha!( Eyess Turn Normal ) Fantasy!
???: Theres Nothing you can do about it! ( Blinds Kumiko )
Kumiko: Ah!

( Fantasy Sent To a World Of Ice)
Fantasy: I Cant Belive what Happend.. ( Cry) I lost my friends!! Someone Help Me!
Ice Princess: Hello, Are you one Of My Moms Servents?
Fantasy: No Who are you?
Ice Princess: Im the Ice Princess. Im Lost. I Ran away because my Mothers Eyes Turned Black and Froze My Dad.
Fantasy: What?! Weve Got to help!
Ice Princess: Ok but I Must Worn You.. ( Ice Monster Apeers ) A Ice Snake!
Fantasy: Its Huge! ( It Becomes Taller Then a Sky Scapper)
Fantasy: Thats It I Call a Battle! ( Ground Become a fire Arena With Fantasy Rage) Wow I Didn'T Know I Could Do That!
???: **Thinks Evil**( Looks Like Ria) Fantasy!
Fantasy: Ria! ( Hugs ) I Have to battle.
???: Watch Out! **Ill Test her and see if i need to go even stronger with her**
Fantasy: Grr You Shouldn't Mess With Me Snake!
Snake: ( Grabs With Teeth)
Fantasy: Your Not Going to Get Past that Quick! ( Turns Yellow then Screams and fire Is Burning On Him Everywere.) Falls On Ground ) Uh.. Ria...
???: Ria? Whos He? Because Im Not Him ( Becomes Into Black Smoke and Goes Around Fantasy) Ha! You willnever beet me! ( Is Gone)
Fantasy: Come Ice Pricncess..

Blizzard Starts.

Fantasy: Ice Princess dont youu have a power that can make this go away?
Ice Princess: No.. My Mom Took It.
Fantasy: Hey Whats That?
ROAR!!
Fantasy: AND ICE DRAGON!
Ice Princess: Run!
Fantasy: Yes! Go! ( Blizzard Knocks Fantasy Into a Pilar Of Ice By a Ice Mountain And Knocks Her Out)
Ice Princess: ( Runs To Fantasy) Are you ok?
Roar!
Ice Princess: ( Mountain Starts To Have A Rummble) ( Snow Covers Ice Place)

13 Hours Later.

Fantasy: What Happened?
Ice Princess: We Ended Up in a cave
( Fantasy Gets Up and Wonders)
Fantasy: Whats This Door go too? (Opens)
Ice Princess: My Palace!
Fantasy: AHHH!! ( Gets Frozen)
Ice Princeess ( Gets Frozen)
Fantasy: Wow.. Your Moms Pretty.. Pretty Evil! ( Rage Turns Into Fire and Burns Ice)
Ice Queen: Your No Match! ( Makes A Poisin Ice Blade And Becomes a Giant)
Fantasy:( Sees Glass Buble Hi Up High) Ria! ( Starts To Climb Up Shoe)
Ice Queen: ( Uses Blade And Starts To Try To Hit)

Will Fantasy Be Hurt? Will Ice Princess Get Her Mom? Will Ria Be Safe? Find Out Next Week!
( I Know it hasn't been a week but im eddinting! )

Fantasy: Uh.. ( Remembers Mom Dieing from darkness cloud when Born ) (Crys) ( Is Up To Stomach)
ICE Queen: ( Make Ice darts In Side ) Ha Ha!
Fantasy: ( Gets Hit but grabs it and starts Climbing) You Know whats More Powerfull then you?
Ice Queen: Nothing! ( Makes Fall)
Fantasy ( Grabs Ice ) ( Starts Climbing To Heart ) No! ( Grabs Ice Princess With Fire and puts near heart) Love
Ice Princess: Mom! Please ( Crys) ( Tear Drop Falls IN Heart)
Ice Queen: No!!! ( Darkness Starts Coming Out of Heart and eyes)
Fantasy: ( At Top and Goes Into Bubble)
Ice Queen: What Happened?
Ice Princess: Mommy! ( Darkness Grabs Her From Behind and becomes gone.)
Ice Queen: Noo! ( Sees Fantasy Jump Out Of Bubble With Ria )
Fantasy: Ill Save Her! She Must have been Taken With The Darkness. Oh Yes This Is Ria! I Need a Favor too.
Ice Queen: Anything for the person who saved My Daughter.
Fantasy: Watch Over Ria. He Needs To Be Healed.
Ice Queen: And How will you get around?
Fantasy: I Dont Know
Ice Queen: ( Knock! Knock) Whats That?
Sia: Hi! My Name is Sia. I Need to tell Something to you Fantasy.
Fantasy: Sure
Sia: Do you know who you are? And Do you Know Were you are?
Fantasy: Yea Im Fantasy! And No..
Sia: You Are Fantasy Yes. But the Princess Of All Of the Planets..Also The Dream Holder. The Dream Holder Holds Love and FriendShip. Her Heart Is Strong. And She Has Powers That She doesn't Know. She Holds Dreams. You are In the Planet Iceyo. There are many planets in your dreams.
Fantasy: Wait does that mean none of this is real?! And My Mom Never Told Me!
Sia: Its Because you mom never knew.. You Dad Knew. Didn't He tell you?
Fantasy: No he died when i was 4..
Sia: Oh yes fighting the Dark Master.. Oh Yes This Is Real. All your dreams Are. Just in a diffrent planet. You Dad Was A King.
Fantasy: So This is real.. Cool. So weres My Planet.
Sia: Disstroed. And I See your Hurt. How about I Heal you and come with you?
Fantasy: Sounds Good.
Ice Queen: You Can Get Around On The Dream Cloud. Only The Dream Keeper Can Use It.
Fantasy: Ill try to call it. Dream Cloud Come To Me.. ( Wind Starts TO Blow Hard). There it is.
Ice Queen: Also I Looked at the things that fell from The Dark Master. Some Lava, Hard Lava. She Has To Be In Lava Syno.
Fantasy: Ok Lets Go Sia. Ice Queeny Ill be Back To Get Sia Soon.
Sia: GoodBye

( On Cloud)
Sia: Whats That Ahead?
Fantasy: I Dont Know.. So Sia.. I Dreamed You Along time ago..Why are you without your Family s I Dreamed?
Sia: The Dark Master Killed Them. He Is Trying to Kill you so No more dreams Will Be Left in the world Forever.
Fantasy: Oh My
Sia: Hey Were Approaching.
Fantasy: Ok Lets Get Out.

( On World)
Fantasy: Hey Wow.. ( FallS In Lava Hole)
Sia: Fantasy!

( Sia Runs And Jumps In Lava Hole)

Sia: Im Coming! (Tears Fly In air)
Fantasy: Siaa......

( Lava Hole starts Shaking)
Fantasy: Ah!
Sia: What Was That?
Fantasy: Lava!
( Lava Starts To Cover Hole)
Fantasy: I Cant Let this Happen!
Sia: Air! ( Air Starts Pushing The Lava Up) I Cant.. ( Gives Out)
Fantasy: ( Eyes Open Wide) AhH!!!! ( Eyes Turn Icy Blue)
Sia: (Fell On Rock)
Fantasy: ( Eyes And All Body Are Icy Blue Like Shes Ice then Wind Goes Around her)
???: You cant Stop the Lava! Mhwaaaaa
Fantasy: Yes I Can... ( Mind Sees All Past Dreams In Like Second)
???: You Wont be able to calm It! You Cant Ecscape.
Fantasy: Yes I Can! ( Ice Starts Coming Out Of Her Like Lighning)
???: Whats Happening?!
Fantasy: ( Ice Is Huge And Starts Coming Out with Bright Light And All lava is frozen)
???: Arg! ( Shoots Lava)
Fantasy: No you Dont! ( Shoots Ice)

( Ice And Lava Conbineded)
???: You Might Have Beet My Lava But you wont beet me again!( Darkness Is Surrounding him and hes gone)
Fantasy: Ria! ( Ice Comes Of Of Fantasy And is Normal)
Ria: Im All right. (Eyes Turn Black without Notice)
Fantasy: Lets Go On the Cloud.
Ria: No! Fantasy.. I Just wanna Talk To you.
Fantasy: Huh?
Ria: Like this though.. Use your ice i want to see it.
Fantasy: Ice Coffin! ( Ice Surround Fantasy)
Ria: Its Beutiful.. But This! ( Uses Lava And Fantasy is now trapped in rock)
Fantasy: Ria! Ria! Why?
Ria: Im Not Ria! ( Darkness Comes Out Of Eyes And Ria Faints)
???: You May Run away now!
Fantasy: No!
???: Yes! You Give me your Power Or ( Gets Out Nami In A Glass Ball) Ill drop her in the lava.
Fantasy: You Wouldn't!
???: Yes I Would.
Fantasy: ( Rainbow Starts Surrounding Fantasy) ( Goes Into ???'s Mind )
???: Ah!

( In ???'s Mind)
Fantasy: Wow Darkness..
???: ( Heres From outside of Mind) Its My Mind!
Fantasy: Yea And Its my friend.
???: Yea But I Can Control!..
Fantasy: ( Uses Dream Power And Makes It so He Cant do Anything) Ha! Hey What is that..It Looks Like Nami..Ria..Kumiko..
???: Yes There Trapped. And you Know What! Im Trapping You In my mind!
Fantasy: No!
Fantasy: ( Starts Too Glow) Nooooo!!!
???: ( Falls To ground As Fantasy Is Realesed)
Fantasy: Im Out Of Here! ( Grabs Sia)
Sia: What Happened?
Fantasy: Ill tell you Later! ( Jumps On Cloud And Leaves)

Then As she Left a Mysterious Person Grabbed ???)

Nami: Hello ??? Im Nami.
???: You Shall not no my name. Untill I rule the world.
Nami: ( Takes of Cape) Im Nami! Im Angry at Fantasy. I Will Help you.
???: Welcome. I Must first See your Clothing.
Nami: ( Throughs the cape of) Why?
???: You are not fit to fight!
Nami: Huh?!
???: Hold this ( Gives Jewel) Right near you chest. Now let it go.
Nami: ( Darkness Glows and goes around her body and gives her black armor) I Feel Power.. ( Shoots Darkness Out of hand)
???: Yes. Thats 10% Of the power I have.
Nami: Ok But ill only help you if...
???: Let me quess. You want to control ria??
Nami: Yes. I Can use him alot.
???: Nope. Now lets go. I want you to meet the team ( Darkness makes them gone)

Meenwhile with fantasy and ria.. )

Fantasy: Ive been thinking..
Sia: What Fantasy?
Fantasy: That Im not all of me..
Sia: Huh?
Fantasy: Ive been having these wierd dreams.. And at first Im just myself..But then Part of me.. Leaves. I see it
leaving but I cant catch it..My hands go through it. But then that part gets captured in the darkness.
Sia: Wierd..
Fantasy: Hey..Look... ( Points too bed)
Sia: The bed is alive?
Fantasy: ( Goes up to bed and finds Little Fairy) Hi..
Fairy: Call me Gabriella. Im a Fairy but my planet got taken by the darkness.
Fantasy: Thats.. ( Crashes)
Sia: We have landed.. And I Dont think were where we were suposed to be.. ( Wind Blows HARD)
Gabriella; Were in Wisla, The windy planet. Its weekness is Lightning and darkness..
Sia: Smarty Pants...
Fantasy: No time for..Ria! ( Ria Is Sitting on a rock)
Ria: Fantasy! ( Hugs) I Found you! Ive been looking ever were.
Fantasy: Im so happy now.
Nami: You shouldn't be.. ( Hits fantasy with darkness)
Ria: Uh..Hi Nami?
Nami: Ria. YOUR Mine! ( Darkness starts blowing around them)
Fantasy: No He Isn't! ( Yellow Magic starts Going around fantasy)
Nami: Ill Show you Fantasy!
Fantasy: ( Fantasy Hits Nami With Lightning) Hmm? Ha.
Ria: Fantasy Look Out!
Nami: ( Hits Fantasy Of Edge of Wisla) There you go! Back to were you came from.
Fantasy: * Still falling but is out cold*
Nami: Time for darkness!! ( Surrounds Ria and herself with darkness and there gone)
Sia: Fantasy!!
Gabriella: Fantasy!!
Sia: ( sia makes wind and Wind grabs fantasy.) I Got...( Wind is so strong sia Trips)
Gabriella: My Turn! ( Wind Blows her on a rock)
Ice Princess: I will help! ( Catches Fantasy With Ice)
Sia: Hey Ice princess why are you here?
Ice princess: I know Fantasy needed help so I came. Ill leave in the morning.
Sia: Ok.
Fantasy: What Happened?
Sia: I.. Oh My Gosh! ( Big Wind Eagle Trieing to hit them)
Fantasy: ( Sees A Castle) Hurry! Grab me!
Sia: (Grabs)
Fantasy: ( Being carried on the eagle)
Eagle: ( Flies to castle)

( At castle)

Fantasy: KUMIKO!
Kumiko: Im Ok.. But the wind is about to be turned into darkness..
Fantasy: Huh?
Kumiko: The Wind kings cepter holds the wind. But the darkness Has made the king evil.
Wind King: ( Holds Cepter out under the moon)
Fantasy: Time to Charge! ( Yellow Magic goes around her and gives her Lightning armor)
Wind King: So. you are Fantasy? I thought you would be a little taller.. Like 6.2!
Fantasy: Who cares.. Im as tall As a normal girl! ( Hits with lightning)
Wind King: Naughty Naughty! ( Turns Like Giant and so does house)
Fantasy: Ah!
Wind King: ( Picks up Fantasy) I Like to bake! ( Puts in pie and puts it in oven)
Sia: Fantasy!
Kumiko! ( Gets Grabbed) Ah! ( Fire goes around Kumiko) Take this! ( Hits with fire)
Wind King: This will be a good cake! ( Puts Kumiko and sia in cake)
???: ( Appears And wind King is good again Then ??? Turns Like Giant and Puts him in pie)
Nami: Why Pie?
???: It will send them to a world that will turn them into food..


( In Food world And all drops on pie)
Fantasy: I feel Like a cake.. ( Is cake) AH!
Kumiko: Im a Pie!
Sia: Im a Cookie!
???: Time to attack!
Fantasy: ( Is In Her Own Memory) ( She sees a Girl. With Black Long Hair and a Red Small Dress) Who are you.
Shadi: Im Shadi. Im You Best Friend.
Fantasy: Didn't you die along time ago?
Shadi: Yes but i was still you heart. And I will be free soon. I need Help. I can help you. Ive been stuck In Dream Land too.
Fantasy: This PLace is called dream land?!
Shadi: No the Universe your In Is Dream Land. Now Trust your heart. And Open It Too Dreams.
Fantasy ( Does it and Big Black Light Hits Fantasy)
Shadi: We Not in you Mind Anymore.
Sia: Fantasy! ( Everyones Normal.)
???: How did we appear Back With the King..Shadi!
Shadi: ??? Remember Me?
Fantasy: ( Has Been Turned Heart into Darkness)
Kumiko: Her Heart. Its Gone. She will be Like that Forever Unless..
Shadi: Darkness! ( Everyones Somewere Else But Fantasy Just Lies there)

( The Darkness Heart Would)
???: Hello Shadi. Its been along time.
Shadi: When I got Killed I was Taken With Fantasy. My Heart Is Now Black.
???: You were Good to her. You had Pink Clothing. And You were Freinds.
Shadi: NO! I Was always this way.
???: You dont know this. When you died You took Shadis Place.. I know your real Idenity. I will realse you.
Shadi: Ok.
???: ( Reales And Black Hair,Clothes, And Sword girl comes out.)
Shadi: Uh ( Falls To ground)
Darcy: Im Back In My Body! Lets PUT Shadi in a Glass Container Because..
???: Why?
Darcy: The Memorys Of Fantasy. If we get thoughs We can Bring Fantasy To Darkness..
???: Because there will be No Love in her heart... I Just Took her heart...
Darcy: Correct. We Need The Other 6 Memorys That She Has Not Found To Get Her Power! And Rule The WORLD!
???: Ok! Lets Go!

( Far Away)

Fantasy: ______________ ( Starts Dissapearing Into Darkness)
Ria: Fantasy! Do you remember Me?
Fantasy: ( Just falling in Darkness And turns Into Monster, A Dark One. A Little One.)
Dark Little Monster: (Hugs Ria)
Ria: I Know thats You Fantasy..( Holds) I see you are This..
Dark Little Monster: Hugs Ria.
Ria: I Know thats you. ( Holds Out Shoulder) Climb On.
Fantasy: ( Still Monster) Climbs On)
Ria: We Will Find How too turn you back!
Sia: Ria! Monster!
Ria: Its Fantasy. Call The Cloud.

( On Cloud)
Sia: Were About too Fall On Wateress. ( A Water world)
Ria: Ok.

( In Wateress In Submarine)

Sia: Lets get in the water.. Only You and Me.
Ria: But Fantasy...
Fantasy: ( Holds Out Little Plastic Ball And Goes in it.)
Ria: ( Adds String to it) See Sia? We can..
Sia: Ok Then! Lets Go! ( Jumps In)
Ria: ( Holds Fantsey String And Swims)
Sia: Whats That Ahead.. ( Cant Hold Breath.. Much Longer)
Ria: Sia!
Sia: ( Starts Too Sink Into Coral) ( Bubble Comes Up)
???: ( Grabs Sia And Goes)
Ria:.. Someone took her.. ( Then Gets Capptured By Guards)
Ria: How Can you breath?
Guards: These Neclaces Let you breath.. Here have one.. Were taking you to the king.. You have a monster..
( In Coral Kingdom)
King: A Moster! I Wanted One for My Birthday...
Ria: But Shes A Humen Girl!
King: Whats Her Name? ( Takes Plastic Ball)
Ria: Her name is Fantasy. She Is..
King: A Fine Pet. Now Why are you here?
Ria: Too Turn her Normal..
King: No! Arrest Him!
Guards: ( Swim Him To Coral Dugeon)
Fantasy: ( IN Head) Who Are you! ( A Girl That Has Short Hair thats Sea Green And a Sea Blue Dress.)
Brigit: Im Seamer. Im You Sister!
Fantasy: I Have a Sister?!
Brigit: Remember In the Past. I Got taken And Turned into a sea creture
King: Pet! Im going to name you Fantasy!
Brigit: ( Becomes Real) She Is Not A Pet!
King: !! Princess!! My Daughter!
Brigit: Dad.. That Realy Is Fantasy My Sister. Her Heart Let Me free From Darkness..
King: Ok then. ( Green Magic Comes Around Fantasy)
Fantasy: ( Is Held In Water And Turns Humen)
King: FANTASY ( Hugs) I Thought I sent you to earth.. With your Fake Family..
Fantasy: I Came to Save Dream! Let Ria Go Please..
Ria: Im Right Here!
Brigit: Daddy! Fantasy Got the Power!
Fantasy: I dont know what one!
King: Its A Power. You Need to find it in your heart.. Brigit!
Brigit: ( Darkness Takes Her)
???: Theres Nothing to do here But.. ( Turns King Into Dark Little Monster) Im Done! ( Is Gone)
King: ( Cries)
Fantasy: Daddy! Brigit!! ( Cries)
Ria: Hurry We Got too go! ( Darkness Is Turning water Black)
Fantasy: No! Not Without Daddy! ( White Magic Makes fantasy Have White Clothing and Gloves) What The..? ( Her Hair Turned Blonde)
Ria: Omg! Your hairs Not Pink anymore.. And your Outfit isnt just purple and White No More!
Fantasy: ( White Comes Out Of Outfit but her skin turns white and Big Light shines Out)
Ria: Ah! Light!
???: The Water! Its Protected! ( Is Gone)
Fantasy: Falls Too ground)

Is Fantasy Ok? Did she Help, Did Ria Get Hurt..? Will she Find them..?

PrincessWall
12-24-2006, 04:40 PM
It's very good, I just don't like how its written like a play. Instead of putting parentheses you could always just say "And then Fantasy started to climb up the shoe".
♥Wall

Fairy
12-24-2006, 11:47 PM
No thanks. I like it This Way.. Sorry :) Yes So do you get the concept?

Dudetteroxs
12-24-2006, 11:56 PM
It's alright. I'm not trying to be rude- but one of my pet peeves is capitalizing almost every first letter in a word.

I'm a grammar freak, yeah. Nice work, though.
- Rocks

Fairy
12-25-2006, 12:26 AM
Ill Get It Fixed :) Sorry I Always Press caps.. for some Wierd Reason.. Like Right Now For Example? I Just always Press it.. Its So Wierd!

Dudetteroxs
12-25-2006, 12:52 AM
Lol, your caps lock and shift key is haunting you. Haunnnting youuu.

But- I'm not saying its bad! It's really good! My story stinks. Worse than my art. Which reminds me, I should close my art shop, I'm too tired to go to the other computer.

Fairy
12-26-2006, 10:58 PM
Bump! Any Colpaments? Any Ideas? ETC!

Fairy
12-27-2006, 10:00 PM
Bump! I Made More :)

Fairy
01-01-2007, 12:59 AM
Bump! I Added WAY More

Fairy
01-02-2007, 06:37 AM
Bump! Adding More! Any Ideas?

CCparisgirl
01-03-2007, 04:03 AM
I love your story fairy!
It's very cool, it lets your imagination run
wild :D Keep up the good work!

Fairy
01-05-2007, 12:59 AM
Thanks CC.

Fairy
01-07-2007, 11:14 AM
BUMP I Added More!

8th or 7th Bump... @_@ I wish you all would commet..

Dudetteroxs
01-09-2007, 03:25 AM
DON'T CLOSE IT! I LIKE IT! I just haven't seen the Stories forum in a while that's all! YOU HAVE A FAN! BEWARE! MWAHAHa... I mean... erm. Haha... Heh...
*Runs*

Fairy
01-09-2007, 03:30 AM
@_@ Lol.. Your lucky.. I WAS ON THE BUTTON! Thank you....

Fairy
01-12-2007, 04:28 AM
Bump! I Need Ideas.

EDIT: If some of you wonder. Kumiko Is Still Blind.. and Gabriella Is Stuck In Wind World With The King.

Penguinz
01-12-2007, 07:34 PM
Is Fantasy supposed to be me? Because then theres Kumiko, which is also another member...

Fairy
01-13-2007, 01:50 AM
No..And NO! Kumiko..I just thought it was cool.. Fantasy Is My Kittys Name. ^>^

~~One Sky~~
~One Destiny~
~We Will Be~
~Together ~
~Forever~