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snowgalsnow
12-22-2006, 10:07 PM
BOOK 1: MY new life Chapter 1
The scercet been told
On one hot summer day i was outside playing with my 2 older sisters and my little 3 year old brother. My mom was inside talking on the phone with an angent.Then i heard her say something about moving on the 20th of december. So i ran to my older sister stephine. When i told her she said " sis you did not know how mom is getting married to a person that lives in Florida?" I was shocked to hear that but why in two days?
Chapter 2
The move
'Come on kids, Stephine get your brother we are movieng!" We all got in the car as we drove to Florida. When we got there after a very long drive. I saw my almost new step brothers, two of them! Their house was big.But somethin still felt odd that i did not say by to my friends. My mom told me to get over it and just make new friends, but how can i do that." Sis over here is are new room." I ran to her, the room was so cool it had 3 floors in i. First floot beds,2ed floor play room, 3ed floor TV room!

Charcters in book 1:
** SORRY COULD NOT ADD THE BROTHERS AND THE DAD THEY DID NOT HAVE MUCH SHOW IT IT**
*** ONLY SHOWING STEPHINE ( BIG SISTER ) AND MILEY( little sister ) ***http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r99/cjagr2001/PICPICPICpicjdkslfhjkasd.jpg- BIG SISTER
http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r99/cjagr2001/vmkpic1.jpg-LITTLE SISTER

PrincessKala
12-23-2006, 06:06 AM
Nice beginnng of a story..

There are Alot Of spelling mistakes...

:tink: Carrie :tink:

BlueJalepeno
12-23-2006, 06:14 AM
Might want to fix the spelling mistakes.
Those are pretty small chapters.

PrincessWall
12-23-2006, 09:11 PM
I recommened the use of some Spell check, but other than that it's great :)
♥Wall

snowgalsnow
12-23-2006, 09:35 PM
it is small chapters cause i made the story in school in do now after the test so i just made a story and sorry i guess i spelt alot wrong