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sew123093
10-08-2006, 02:29 AM
Intro

Years ago an evil witch took over The Land of the Fairies. One brave fairy stood up to the evil. She summoned forth all of her power and destoryed the force. Weaken from the fight, she used the last of her strength to save the land from the scars of war. The land was renewed, the fairies reborn. The land was sent into silence. One hundred years later the fairies awoke from their rest. One by one they regained they powers...

Chapter 1: Aiyana Rosena Steel

Aiyana was peaceful sleeping when a voice interupted her dream. "Awake my child." the voice said. Aiyana opened her eyes and saw a beautiful fairy floating by her bed. "Who are you?" she asked. "I am the spirit of the fairy Calida, the saver of this realm," she responded, "now, I must go and awake the others." And with that she disappeared in a bright flash of light.

Aiyana walked out of her home and walked to the village center. "Why are you walking, my child?" Calida asked. "Why wouldn't I?" Aiyana asked. "Because thou has wing." the fairy said. "I do?" Aiyana asked turning to look at her back. "I do!" she said excitedly. Once agan the fairy disappeared.


I hope you like it!

BMarie521
10-08-2006, 02:30 AM
AWSOME so far, but I think that part would be the bio, not the part of the chapter..:D :h-tongue:

sew123093
10-08-2006, 02:34 AM
ok thanks :D

BMarie521
10-08-2006, 02:38 AM
Welcome bud!

sew123093
10-08-2006, 02:39 AM
did you make the rpg yet?

BMarie521
10-08-2006, 03:05 AM
No, but you did :D

RubyRubia
10-08-2006, 03:08 AM
I absolutely love fantasy, and this is a story I'm looking foward to to read! :D
Great use of vocabulary.

Ru Ru~

sew123093
10-08-2006, 03:20 AM
thanks Ru Ru

BMarie521
10-08-2006, 04:13 PM
When are you gonna post some of the story? I want to read it! :D

sew123093
10-08-2006, 04:30 PM
soon i have to think first

EDIT: Chapter 1 added

BMarie521
10-08-2006, 06:31 PM
Add more!!!

sew123093
10-09-2006, 01:47 AM
i will soon...

BMarie521
10-10-2006, 12:36 AM
Write more!

sew123093
10-10-2006, 01:54 AM
i did going to write more now

any more comments?