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BMarie521
09-17-2006, 10:51 PM
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I can’t believe it, I always knew my parents were hiding something, but I couldn’t figure it out. It turns out my three best friends’ parents had a secret two, the same secret as my parents! You want to know the secret right? Look at the title, if you can’t read I’ll tell you, I’m A WITCH!!! So are my best friends. So I’m going to have to get out of my school and go to Westly, school for Witches.


Chapter 1

"What do you mean, 'I'm a witch'?" Morgan roads asked her parents. "Well...” her parents said looking at each other, "My mother and her mother and her mother and so on, were witches, I am a witch too. Now you got it." Her mother answered. "What about my friends were their mother and their mother and so on were witches?" Morgan asked raising her eyebrow.

"Uh...” Her mother began. "You mean, their witches too?!?!" Morgan screamed, she was mad for her parents not telling her, but she was glad her friends were witches too. "So what powers do I have?" Morgan asked. "You have Earth, Alex has Wind, Daisy has water, and Abby has fire." Her mother said.

"Are you going to tell her?" "No you tell her!" "Fine, Honey you and your friends are going to have to go to a new school." Her father began, "At Westly School for witches, it's a boarding school. You have your own room or with a friend if you'd like." "WHAT?!?!" Morgan screamed, "A new school?!?!"


Chapter 2

"I can’t believe wee have to go to a new school! And that all four of us are witches!" Abby screamed. The four girls were on the bus to Westly. So far the ride is a drag. All the girls on the bus were having their own little conversations, not paying attention to what was around them.

Everyone on this bus were one star witches, which means: You get your 1* cat, 1* broom, and other 1* items you will need...

***

Once they got to Westly, there wasn't a big welcoming comitie(sp?). It was just the teachers....

***

Once the girls found the board with the information they need, they found out they couldn't share a room with each other, they had to be with the same element they were. There was 2 other earth, fire, air, water witches here. But there was 4 time, mind, etc... Witches here too.

Morgan was assigned to room 1432, with Lucinda and Flow...
Alex room 1735, with Kelsi and Bailey...
Daisy room 1274 with Holly and Ashley
Abby room 1947 with Sam and Cally...

"What! My dad said we could be with each other!" Morgan yelled. "Might as well meet them...” Daisy said. The girls walked off to their separate rooms.

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Morgan went into her room and saw two girls, "Hi you must be Lucinda and Flow?" "I'm Flow." Said the red haired girl. "And I’m Lucinda lulu for short." Said the girl with green highlights...

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Alex went into her room and saw two girls, one with brown hair and the other with brown and silver highlights. "Hi you must be Kelsi and Bailey?" Alex asked.
"I'm Kelsi" said the girl with silver highlights, "And I’m Bailey." said the girl with brown hair...

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Daisy walked into her room and saw two girls, one blonde and blue highlights and the other black with dark blue at the end of her hair. "Hi you must be Holly and Ashley?" "I'm Ashley" said the girl with dark blue. "I'm Holly" Said the blonde.

***

Abby went into her room and saw a girl with red hair and a girl with black hair.
"Hi you must be Sam and Cally?" "Hi I’m Cally" Said the red head, "and this is Sam." Pointing to the black haired.


chapter 3


Once met the roommates the girls unpacked their belonings, and they chatted with thier roommates to get to know each other....

TheStarfire
09-17-2006, 10:53 PM
ooooooooooooooooo cant wait!

BMarie521
09-17-2006, 10:58 PM
Thank you!!!

any other comments?

AwsomeAdrienne
09-17-2006, 11:24 PM
cool! can't wait for the real story to start :)

ACWW
09-17-2006, 11:26 PM
cool cool and COOL!!!!!!!!!!!! i love mystical kind of stories plz oh plzzzzzz right the first chapter

BMarie521
09-17-2006, 11:26 PM
Thank you!!

ACWW
09-17-2006, 11:27 PM
Yw!!!!!!!!!!

BMarie521
09-17-2006, 11:38 PM
Any other comments?

AstroCool_Dude
09-18-2006, 12:46 AM
A real withc?!?!?!?!?!?!!

BMarie521
09-18-2006, 12:47 AM
No this is fiction, as in not real...

AstroCool_Dude
09-18-2006, 12:51 AM
Oh ok nvm then

BMarie521
09-18-2006, 12:52 AM
okay, any other comments?

Jackalope
09-18-2006, 01:04 AM
It sounds REALLY cool BMarie!

gabyta
09-18-2006, 01:48 AM
cool!!! go for it! we want to read the story :)

BMarie521
09-18-2006, 02:15 AM
Thanks you two! I might start it tomorrow though..

I added a little of ch. 1.

sew123093
09-18-2006, 11:27 PM
cool you should write more

Roxychick
09-18-2006, 11:28 PM
you should add on i love it!!!

amyflower
09-18-2006, 11:30 PM
Great! Write more!!!!

~amyflower

AwsomeAdrienne
09-18-2006, 11:32 PM
nice story so far! keep going! :)

BMarie521
09-18-2006, 11:40 PM
Thanks! I'll add more later.

pixiebuttercup
09-19-2006, 12:55 AM
plz add more it's as good as a real story !

VMKJen
09-19-2006, 12:56 AM
this is so cool! I <3 it

BMarie521
09-19-2006, 01:52 AM
Thanks! I'll probably add more tomorrow or the day after...

I'm adding more now...

does anyone like it?

Jackalope
09-24-2006, 08:14 PM
I like it, It's a very cool idea!

VMKJen
09-24-2006, 08:15 PM
wow this story is awesome!

BMarie521
09-24-2006, 09:14 PM
Yay! thank you you two!

sew123093
09-25-2006, 11:23 PM
i like, write more! (plz)

BMarie521
09-25-2006, 11:25 PM
Thank you Sew!!!

sew123093
09-25-2006, 11:29 PM
yw

(witch boarding school is dead, should i close it?)

BMarie521
09-25-2006, 11:35 PM
yeah, maybe...

Jdrizzle
09-25-2006, 11:35 PM
You had several spelling mistakes and used bad grammar. I think it's a great story but if I can't understand you, there is no point in reading it. I'm not trying to be malevolent or rude. It's just some constructive criticism.

I think you did an excellent job though and applaud you for your creativity.

sew123093
09-25-2006, 11:37 PM
but its my baby i dont want to let it go *Cries*

BMarie521
09-26-2006, 01:31 AM
You had several spelling mistakes and used bad grammar. I think it's a great story but if I can't understand you, there is no point in reading it. I'm not trying to be malevolent or rude. It's just some constructive criticism.

I think you did an excellent job though and applaud you for your creativity.

Thanks, and I'll try to make it clearer in a while...

ariellover4life
09-27-2006, 03:03 PM
cool sotry mi like it so far

BMarie521
09-27-2006, 11:09 PM
Thanks!!! too short

kittenofthenight
09-30-2006, 09:47 PM
i like it write more!

BMarie521
09-30-2006, 09:51 PM
Thanks kit!! I might write more later or tomorow...

Jackalope
10-03-2006, 11:17 PM
Write more BMarie!!

BMarie521
10-03-2006, 11:33 PM
Any Ideas? I don't have any at the moment right now, I'm writing a story on Word right now, not done with ch. 1 yet on the new one.

So any Ideas for IAW?

BMarie521
10-06-2006, 09:31 PM
Bump I guess... I promise I'll add more in the next few days...

Fattback
10-12-2006, 07:54 PM
awsome!!!! i liked the 3 chapter the best!!!.

AdventureGirlGo
10-19-2006, 07:35 PM
more more more, I demand it!!!!!

ACWW
10-25-2006, 04:30 AM
Omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love The Story Plz I Beg Of You To Write More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!