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BMarie521
09-03-2006, 06:55 PM
This is all I have so far, this is my 2nd story....


Bio:

This is a story about 6 kids who follow a rainbow to a pot of gold, where when they pick up a piece of gold each, and one by one they disappear. They then end up in a place called ‘Gold Ridge’, they then find out they’re in the mysterious land of leprechauns……


Characters:

Alex Brown

Raven Brown

Lucinda ‘Lulu’ Jones

Morgan Lock-Heart

Hannah Roads

Holly Summers


The story:

Chapter 1: The rainbow.

“Hey guys look a rainbow!” Hannah Roads said to to her friends: Alex& Raven Brown, Lucinda ‘Lulu’ Jones, Morgan Lock-Heart, and Holly Summers.

It had just stopped raining, a nice fall rain. They were somewhat by the end of the rainbow. The girls were in the forest, playing around. “Hey guys let’s go see if there’s a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow!” said Lulu.

“You have to be crazy to believe that there’s a pot of gold!” Holly said, climbing one of the trees by her.

“Well Lulu is crazy Holly, remember?” Morgan said, climbing right up by Holly.

“Well, let’s find out!” Raven said getting up from a log she was sitting on.

“Yeah, there might be gold! You never know!” Raven’s twin, Alex said also getting up from the log.

The girls set off towards the rainbow. They were almost there. It would just be about ten more minutes.

Once just close enough the girls sat down on a log.

“Just a few more minutes!” Lulu said excitedly.

“My feet hurt!” Hannah moaned.

“We’ve only been walking for ten minutes though!” Morgan said.

“I know, but my feet have blisters already!” Hannah moaned again.

“It will only take, like, three minutes tops.” Raven said.

“Well it better…” Hannah mumbled.

“Well let’s go, no time to waste!” Alex said getting up.

Everyone else got up, even Hannah with her blisters.

“Hey look guys I found the...” Lulu said stopping midsentence. They had found the end of the rainbow alright, with the pot of gold right next to it…

ariellover4life
09-03-2006, 10:32 PM
sounds cool

BMarie521
09-03-2006, 10:57 PM
Thanks....:Embar:

BMarie521
09-04-2006, 11:39 PM
Sorry for double post, but I added Chapter 1..

Softball_atTheDisco
09-05-2006, 01:56 AM
Leperacauns ARE THE COOLEST YO!!

BMarie521
09-05-2006, 10:14 PM
Uh... Thanks softball?