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Sarahisme
11-03-2006, 05:14 AM
YOU CAN STILL JOIN UNTIL NOVEMBER 5TH!



Welcome to Auditions for the first ever Sarahisme's Poem Writing Conest!

What you need to do~
Send in your Audition Poem via PM or Posting.
Wait for a PM from a judge for acceptence. (You may not be ready to enter!)

What you will be judged on~
Grammar
Staying on topic
Details

I may choose people for bonus points if it's very good!

(Are you in italics? I'm sorry, but it means your poem didn't make it. :(
Members~
1. BadgerHockey
2. Sew123209
3. Bestroyal
4. Pixiebuttercup
5. AwsomeAdrienne
6. Niclk
7. I'm Design: Quit, no longer in the competition.


Eliminated
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Bestroyal
Niclk
Sorry to Bestroyal and Niclk, your poems didn't make it.

Good luck,
Sarahisme

Sarahisme

BadgerHockey
11-03-2006, 05:24 AM
Does it have to rhym? If so I'm out. If not, I'm in :D. I make good poems that don't rhym...
~Hockey

Sarahisme
11-03-2006, 05:42 AM
Sure, do what ya want!

sew123093
11-03-2006, 11:14 PM
do the poems have to be out vmk?

bestroyal
11-03-2006, 11:18 PM
VMKF Name bestroyal
Favorite Poet/Writer LIKE them all
Audition Poem: Friends



When I sat at the lunch table alone
You came over and said "Hi"
When I was sad you cheered me up
When I was alone you were my shadow
When I needed a shoulder to cry on you offered me confort
When I need someone to wipe me tears away you did it without complaining
I thought you where the best person in the world
Who I could count on but when my life got tough you ran away and you left a big footprint
In my sad little heart.

Sarahisme
11-03-2006, 11:24 PM
They don't have to be. I'd rather the poems not be, but if you want to write about VMK, you can.

bestroyal
11-03-2006, 11:30 PM
when do you give us points cnat wait to see what mine are i worked on this really hard


cna we enter more then 1 then you pick the 1 you like the best for judging

sew123093
11-03-2006, 11:33 PM
VMKF Name~ sew123093
Favorite Poet/Writer~ Shel Silverstein
Audition Poem:

Playground (free verse)

After recess all is quiet
Swing blowing in the wind
Jump ropes lay limp
Chalk smudged on the concrete
Not a single ball is bouncing
Dead silence, no movement at all.

pixiebuttercup
11-04-2006, 12:16 AM
VMKF:pixiebuttercup
fav poet: Edgar Allen Poe
Poem: I wanted to be there,
because for you I did care!
You are my bestest friend.
I hope its like that till the end.

I am going to a new school this year,
I wish I didn't have to,
Losing you,
Is my biggest fear.

Your going to have new friends,
Some new and some old,
I will make some more friends to,
Always remember they will be silver,
And you will be gold.

I think of you every time I go to sleep.
When I think of you I solemnly weep.
I remember when you told me
that I was your favorite friend.
I wonder if that's still the same???
I hope that it is, and I hope that thats not lame.


You must realize that I miss you so much.
And I hope that forever you will keep in touch!
I will miss the laughs, and all the fun.
I will miss my bestest friend a ton,
I hope that we talk to each other,
Atleast once a week, because you mean a lot to me

Sarahisme
11-04-2006, 12:47 AM
Pixiebuttercup, please write the poem yourself.

pixiebuttercup
11-04-2006, 12:49 AM
bestroyal and princess wanted me to enter it

bestroyal
11-04-2006, 12:50 AM
Cup it is o write it yourself may i enter another poem and when do we fidn out scores

pixiebuttercup
11-04-2006, 12:53 AM
ok ill make a different one

AwsomeAdrienne
11-04-2006, 12:58 AM
VMKF Name~ AwsomeAdrienne
Favorite Poet/Writer~ almost All if them :)
Audition Poem:

I Can't Write A Poem

I can't write a poem
I need ideas soon
This is my problem
Maybe I can write in the bathroom?
I would like to play a game
But I don't have time
The Solution is plain
I will not write a poem

:D

:tink:AwsomeAdrienne:tink:

sew123093
11-04-2006, 12:58 AM
good luck all

pixiebuttercup
11-04-2006, 12:59 AM
ok i finshed on my poem on my first post

Sarahisme
11-04-2006, 01:23 AM
Okays, when we got one more entry, I will post who made it and who didn't.

sew123093
11-04-2006, 01:27 AM
yeah! good luck again everyone

niclk
11-04-2006, 01:28 AM
Audition Form
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VMKF Name niclk
Favorite Poet/Writer~ ?
Audition Poem:


Oh the sky is so blue
my friends are so good to me
i just wish it wuld rain on this
oh sn sunny day all i need is my
firnrind by my side maybe mytrats
will og way i ope there is no test in
math

Sarahisme
11-04-2006, 01:28 AM
I read through the poems, and i'm posting whose eliminated right now.

BadgerHockey
11-04-2006, 01:32 AM
Wait for me!
VMKF Name~BadgerHockey
Favorite Poet/Writer~Kimee Manther
Audition Poem:

A tear rolled down her icey cold cheek,
Her head facing towards the sky,
The clouds began to cry,
He came running towards her,
She shook her head not even looking up,
The birds fell silent,
Goodbye the word her lips formed,
Her destiny was somewhere else,
Or maybe its even
Gone.

sew123093
11-04-2006, 01:32 AM
i made it through. wow.

Sarahisme
11-04-2006, 01:32 AM
Ok, the last person to join is BadgerHockey, 'cause you were the first to ask.

BadgerHockey
11-04-2006, 01:41 AM
My poem is done.. I wrote it a LONG time ago. I was just lookin for it. :D
~Hockey

Sarahisme
11-04-2006, 01:42 AM
Ok, i'm now posted who's eliminated.

BadgerHockey
11-04-2006, 01:46 AM
OMG! I made it! >_<
I'm so surprised...

I think everyones poems are awesome!
~Hockey

sew123093
11-04-2006, 01:51 AM
go Badger! i made it too.

BadgerHockey
11-04-2006, 01:54 AM
:D Your poem rocked XD.
Hmm.. for the next round, do we just post another poem? Or does it have to have a certain theme now.. O_o
~Hockey

Sarahisme
11-04-2006, 01:55 AM
Congratulations, everyone.
Sorry bestoryal and niclk, don't stop writing!
Your next poem will need to be two verses long, and about something you can see in winter.

Sarahisme
11-04-2006, 01:56 AM
I'm sorry, no.

sew123093
11-04-2006, 02:00 AM
k ill work on it

I live in (check location) and winter is never white >.<

here's my poem!

Winter

Winter wind blows icy cold.
It's nipping at my face.
Snow will fall soon I'm told,
Hiding the grass in icy lace.

Walking down the streets in town,
I see holiday decor.
Winter sales all around.
It makes your spirit soar!

hope you like it!

Sarahisme
11-05-2006, 01:06 AM
Very nice work!

sew123093
11-05-2006, 02:44 AM
thanks, anyone else sent one in?

Sarahisme
11-05-2006, 03:44 AM
Nope, but I'm_Dream quit, since she/he is in the US Navy.

sew123093
11-05-2006, 03:52 AM
oh ok, who's still in?

Sarahisme
11-05-2006, 04:16 AM
Everyone on the list on the first post.

sew123093
11-05-2006, 04:18 AM
coolio. i love writing poems

crazycrazyfrog
11-05-2006, 04:41 AM
i have a good poem but i didn't join in enough time :(

Sarahisme
11-05-2006, 04:42 AM
You can still join until tomorrow at midnight.

crazycrazyfrog
11-05-2006, 04:45 AM
Yes!! count me in! ill PM my entry poem

Sarahisme
11-05-2006, 04:46 AM
Nice audition poem, your in.

Task: Write a two verse poem about something you can see in winter.

crazycrazyfrog
11-05-2006, 04:49 AM
ok will do. Here is my first task:

Wintery Wonderland, by Blackdeathl:

I walk over to my window and look out.
Where did my world go?
I only see whiteness.
Whiteness falling. Whiteness cooling the earth.
I step outside.
Cold Marshmallowy whiteness meets my feet.
I look around.
The Pond is frozen over.
Are the fish still there?
I wonder when this whiteness will stop.
It's another world here.

I look around once more.
Frozen, white, wasteland.
Hmm.
Better get started.
I've got a plan here.
Snowman Park.
Better get working.

sew123093
11-06-2006, 02:45 AM
now what??