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bestroyal 10-25-2006, 12:13 PM i entered a poem contest and i win and it wll be pubished in a book and they look at thosands of poems and my was picked here is the poem
You took my heart By : Bestroyal
You took my heart teared it in two
i thought i could trust but i cant
i thought you were by my side
when i needed you the most the
person who would help me when
i am down the person who would
brighten my day but i guess it is to
but it is to late now you took my
heart and ran away
DizzyDaisy 10-25-2006, 01:16 PM Congratulations!!:11:
sunnyskye 10-25-2006, 01:29 PM Congrats! What is the book called?
BlueJalepeno 10-25-2006, 01:34 PM Wow! Good poem, could be a song ;)
Keep up the excellent work!
Penguinz 10-25-2006, 04:09 PM My sisters poem was in a book...
It's about a little red monkey...
MsBehave 10-25-2006, 04:12 PM :mickbar:
awesome! good job
you can write great poems, but you spelled 'were' wrong? you said 'where' instead lol.
-CL_MsBehave
PrincessKala 10-25-2006, 09:44 PM :party-smi :party-smi :party-smi :party-smi
Wow Best! Congratulations!
I Hope I see More of your poems and stories in Books to come!
:party-smi :party-smi :party-smi :party-smi
:tink: Carrie :tink:
Bellezza 10-25-2006, 09:48 PM congrats bestroyal
you are a great great GREAt poem and story writting
all the best,
~Lauren
vmkstar99 10-25-2006, 11:46 PM Awesome job, bestroyal! I can see why your poem is chosen!
Anielmz 10-25-2006, 11:49 PM I knew you were always a fantastic story writer and poem writer! :)
Congrats, you deserved it!!
Jackalope 10-25-2006, 11:57 PM Congrats Best :D I knew you would win something :)
bestroyal 10-26-2006, 11:46 AM Thanks Everyone book is called imervse verses\it is a poem book but it is expensive
BnyKty 10-26-2006, 01:55 PM Excellent work, bestroyal.
Congratulations!
Ilovevmk998 10-26-2006, 03:18 PM OMG Congrats Best!!
Please Join the Save the American Alligator Club
Save them before their dead!!:(
startstart 10-28-2006, 02:29 PM YAY BEST!!! great poem :D
~Loops
nintendog1221 10-28-2006, 02:35 PM WOOT great job best!
bestroyal 10-28-2006, 02:37 PM thanks they are stull judging who gets the 10,000 prize and the 1,000 and the 1,000 prize but they told me that my poem was awesome and that i am going to get alot of giftcadrs to the mall and what not :) SO i cant wait
WDWLinny 10-31-2006, 01:07 AM Wowzza Your Good At Poetry And Story Writing!
LinnyLinny :skellington:
keyshiacolefan 10-31-2006, 01:17 AM congrats best ur amazing!
winniesdapooh 10-31-2006, 01:18 AM yeah really good job! my sister writes poems like that and turns them into songs and some she keeps just poems. she actually has a pretty well known band called: Silhouette Of A Feeling.
King Biscuit 11-01-2006, 04:23 AM Sorry to say it but it's a scam. They publish every poem submitted then resell it to everyone who entered for profit.
There's lots of articles about those kinds of sites, I'm not saying your poem is bad I think it's good but they "publish" every poem that's submitted to them.
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