DarknessGirl
10-19-2006, 11:13 PM
Ok, i express myself through poetry. This is one of my latest, and I know you can tell the real, from the fake. Hopefully..But here it is. Comment Please.
Her Heart::
When the heart beats
The doctor say's,
"She's alive, twas never dead"
Her eyes glazed over
Her skin cold as ice
She was never sick
But was heartbroken
He crushed her hard
He never cared
He just wanted her, never fair.
She struggled on
Always fearing
Her porcilen Heart
Would break again...
Till one day
Someone she knew
Came from a distance
And their love grew...
They minced words
They joked and Laughed
Till one day they saw
Tis' was more..
She felt safe when around him
And he, kept it that way
Whenever around...
She would smile
And forget the pain
She held inside
Her porcilen heart
Gave a beat..
He held her close,
"She's in love..
In love with me.."
- Continuation of Her Heart, There is ONE More part to the Poems. You will see.. -
His Heart::
It gave a beat..
Then one more..
He felt it grow..
When he spoke the words..
Those three words..
He said to much..
But not enough..
It touched her soul..
And he knew..
This was all
It was all..
So True..
He held her close..
He watched her smile..
He loved her more..
As every day grew..
From there on in..
Their love would grow..
His lips never faultered..
When he said..
"I Love You..."
By:: DarknessGirl
Based on events I have had happened to me, or how i felt, also its dedicated to someone.
Comment Please.
Her Heart::
When the heart beats
The doctor say's,
"She's alive, twas never dead"
Her eyes glazed over
Her skin cold as ice
She was never sick
But was heartbroken
He crushed her hard
He never cared
He just wanted her, never fair.
She struggled on
Always fearing
Her porcilen Heart
Would break again...
Till one day
Someone she knew
Came from a distance
And their love grew...
They minced words
They joked and Laughed
Till one day they saw
Tis' was more..
She felt safe when around him
And he, kept it that way
Whenever around...
She would smile
And forget the pain
She held inside
Her porcilen heart
Gave a beat..
He held her close,
"She's in love..
In love with me.."
- Continuation of Her Heart, There is ONE More part to the Poems. You will see.. -
His Heart::
It gave a beat..
Then one more..
He felt it grow..
When he spoke the words..
Those three words..
He said to much..
But not enough..
It touched her soul..
And he knew..
This was all
It was all..
So True..
He held her close..
He watched her smile..
He loved her more..
As every day grew..
From there on in..
Their love would grow..
His lips never faultered..
When he said..
"I Love You..."
By:: DarknessGirl
Based on events I have had happened to me, or how i felt, also its dedicated to someone.
Comment Please.