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10-05-2006, 11:47 PM
Ok ok, i am not taking any credit for this. Bestroyal stated on one of her posts that she was trying to edit her stories for better spelling. I thought i would take one thing off her to-do list :)
And i kind of edited them a little too, with grammer.
Bestroyal story one
The day my life was turned upside down
Brittiny decided to wear the Bebe shirt. Brittiny went into the bathroom, changed, and looked into the mirror. She loved the way her hsirt looked on her body, and how it brought out her hazel eyes and brunette hair. She went downstairs and got in her convertible. She drove to school with the cover of the car down, and the wind blowing in her face. When she arrived at school everybody complimented her outfit.
Nicole: Love the shirt!
Brittiny: Thanks, me FOREVER to pick it
Nicole: You are so lucky you have so much clothing...
Brittiny: I told you to never say I am so lucky, remember?! Now go get me some cookies from the lunch room now!
Nicole walked to the lunchroom excitedly. Something about get Brittiny's cookies made her feel special. She thought she was the luckiest girl in the school to be giving the most populuar girl in the school cookies.
Nicole: I got the cookies!!
Brittiny: Eww... there are raisings in that! Get them away from me!
Nicole: Sorry...
RING RING!! The warning bell was ringing. TIme to go to first period.
Mr. Lexmark: Class, we have a new student today. Her name is Janie, please treat her kindly. Janie, please sit next to Brittiny, the one with the Bebe shirt on.
Janie sat down in her seat next to Brittany.
Janie: Hello
Brittiny: Who are you?
Janie: My name is Janie. Nice to meet you. Oh, who is that boy over there?
Brittiny: That's Reeve
Janie: I like his name.
Brittiny rolled her eyes.
End of chapter one.
If bestroyal doesn't want me to do this, i will delete it all. Remember, don't give me any credit for the story. It was all bestroyal.
And i kind of edited them a little too, with grammer.
Bestroyal story one
The day my life was turned upside down
Brittiny decided to wear the Bebe shirt. Brittiny went into the bathroom, changed, and looked into the mirror. She loved the way her hsirt looked on her body, and how it brought out her hazel eyes and brunette hair. She went downstairs and got in her convertible. She drove to school with the cover of the car down, and the wind blowing in her face. When she arrived at school everybody complimented her outfit.
Nicole: Love the shirt!
Brittiny: Thanks, me FOREVER to pick it
Nicole: You are so lucky you have so much clothing...
Brittiny: I told you to never say I am so lucky, remember?! Now go get me some cookies from the lunch room now!
Nicole walked to the lunchroom excitedly. Something about get Brittiny's cookies made her feel special. She thought she was the luckiest girl in the school to be giving the most populuar girl in the school cookies.
Nicole: I got the cookies!!
Brittiny: Eww... there are raisings in that! Get them away from me!
Nicole: Sorry...
RING RING!! The warning bell was ringing. TIme to go to first period.
Mr. Lexmark: Class, we have a new student today. Her name is Janie, please treat her kindly. Janie, please sit next to Brittiny, the one with the Bebe shirt on.
Janie sat down in her seat next to Brittany.
Janie: Hello
Brittiny: Who are you?
Janie: My name is Janie. Nice to meet you. Oh, who is that boy over there?
Brittiny: That's Reeve
Janie: I like his name.
Brittiny rolled her eyes.
End of chapter one.
If bestroyal doesn't want me to do this, i will delete it all. Remember, don't give me any credit for the story. It was all bestroyal.