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luckymagiccharm
10-04-2006, 04:44 PM
Mr Low: Goodday Mr Clay!
Mr Clay: Hello Mr Low!
Mr Low: What can i do for you?
Mr Clay: Can i have some pea's please?
Mr Low: Would you like some ceese with your pea's?
Mr Clay: Why are you giving me letter p's for? i want pea's please!
Mr Low: What kind is in your mind?
Mr Clay: Pea's in a bag you old hag
Mr Low: Ok coming right...
Mr Clay: No!! pea's in a pod and maybe some cheese please
Mr Low: Oh hey Mr Clay do you want anything else?
My Clay: Can i have an ose with a nose
Mr Low: Here's a 20ft hose complete with a nose!
Mr Clay: No! i wanted the letter o with a nose!
Mr Low: We don't sell o's with noses! Ok Mr Clay anything else?
Mr Clay: Why?
Mr Low: Why what?
Mr Clay: Can i have the letter y with an eye
Mr Low: Here you go Mr Clay!
Mr Clay: Can i have fork handles please i don't want any sandals i've seen the special offer
Mr Low: Here you go four candles with no sandles
Mr Clay: Why have you given me four candles?
Mr Low: They're what you asked for master!
Mr Clay: i asked for fork handles with no sandals!
Mr Low: why didn't you say so?
Mr Clay: I did did ou put on a bid or something!
Mr Low: there you go and now get going!

By LuckyMagicCharm and GalaxyGalaxyGal
Hope you enjoyed it because we worked so hard in class and got a level 6 for it which is way above a 12 year olds target! Thank You! By the way happy halloween :) :17: :17:

sacura288
10-04-2006, 05:00 PM
lol that is awesome :)its funny ;)

luckymagiccharm
10-04-2006, 06:42 PM
ty took me a while to think of it