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DinoVan
09-30-2006, 06:00 AM
howdy.......YES its the great vanhornviking [space-bar] dork


and yes.........im writing a story.....called untitled....lol thats the name of it.....but, im gonna be writing it, lol.

well yea anyways, its coming VERY soon.........and i will write whenever i can...........:)

so yea.....:)




EDIT: Main Characters:
Alison: alison is the silly, care free kinda girl, she loves to be a dork (lol sounds like me, but nope my name isnt alison, i wish)
[Authors Note: im basing most of these characters on people i know and my self, but keep in mind, these ARE NOT theyre real names.....]
alsion could care less what the preppy's think about her.

Brian:the smart sportsy kind of guy, alison is tottaly crushing on him! he gets good grades in every class and loves some sports, he is a dork also!


William: brian's annoying friend, he always makes fun of alison, and teases her about pretty much everything, william is smart but a idiot when he tries to make up fast come backs and quick jokes........


Lindsey: the preppiest girl on this earth, well thats what alison thinks, she is a total brat and gets everything she wants..........she lives in a HUGE mansion.....


Other Characters:
random people: yea theyre random.........and theyre people...yea

Teachers: not really my teachers................

[Authors Note:

Ok, now lets get to the story:

Chapter 1:
alison ran to her locker, she was late....again, this was the FOURTH time. "omg......MY LOCKER IS STUCK!" she yelled pounding her foot down, "alison, whats yuor flipin problem?" william asked "well, for your information, im late for the fourth time and my locker wont open......" she said with attitude fiddling with her locker "what is your combination?" william asked "and....i should tell you why....??" she asked still trying to get her locker open, william looked at her with a glare "just tell me your flipin combination!" he yelled "fine!! its 21-0-32" she said, frowning with disapointment. "there! now can i go!?" william yelled with a stupid smirk on his face "FINE! GO!" i yelled.....as a hall monitor walked by, "yelling! in the hall way! a definet vilotion" the monitor yelled "sorry...." alison said with a frown.
alison ran to her first period class......social studies.....alison already missed the time for bellwork and mrs.wilson already started a movie, alison tried to slip in her seat un-noticed but mrs.wilson yelled "ALISON! stop disturbing the class and sit down NOW!!!!" alison felt like crying.....she definetly didnt want to start her day this way.
1 period finally ended, it felt like a week, alison sat there holding back tears ad smiling, but what was the point, the first time she came to this school it was ruff [author note: didnt know how to spell it] william ruined her life, got her in trouble more times than she could count, but one thing got her through the time at school....Brian. the smartest, nicest,cutest guy alison has ever met,he was perfect, well, thats what alison thought atleast. but...he was also alisons best friend [authors note: lol foust if your reading this, this is gonna sound familar] "howdy" she whispered hoping brian wouldnt hear her sad sounding voice and tear rolling down, but he did..."whats wrong?" brian asked [authors note: if i type: chipy or logan, just remember its brian....lol] "ummm...nothing" she whispered "are you sure?" he asked "yea...." she whispered. alison got out her planner and wrote down her homework and class shecdule, then....william came over..he was in the same 2 period class. "cry baby!" he yelled "idiot" alison yelled back, trying to sound stronger, but alison was weak, she was sad, her grades were bad, she day dreamed in class, william was always a jerk.


and thats the beggining..........im gonna write more soon

DinoVan
09-30-2006, 07:06 PM
ok, i added the first part!

take a look