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Bellezza
09-26-2006, 01:59 AM
This is a made up story i have been working on for a long time in a journal i got i said what other place should i put it but vmkf so here it is give me credit no negative but fully state your opinion thx ~Lauren

MODEL LIFE
CH1.A Model...
Dixe was getting ready for school when the T.V had a commercial for a model of AMerica,the old model of America was talking about all the responsibilities while Dixie was dreaming of being a model of America she stopped when the said the nimber to call in she quickly wrote it down and left to get breakfast but she did not eat she just dreamed and it was a good dream a nodel dream her mom got worried she never turned down cinnamon rolls,her father did not care he thought she hated cinnamon rolls. Finally Carre,her baby sister threw frosting in her face and Dixie woke up covered in frosting she left the house and started off to school. She could hear her two twin sisters Kailey and Meghan (Age:8)
fighting but today she did not care she was in a Dream Mode a model dream mode. At school she could hardly find her locker it was like she was in some kind of trance The bell wrang for Pre-Algebra she hated it but today she did not care she didnt care if she fell in front of all the popular kids which of coruse she did after she hurrily ran off she was in a model mode.!

CHAPTER 2 IS COMING SOON STAY TUNED NOW POST AWAY
(CH. 2 IS DONE I AM JUST TO LAZY TO WRITE RIGHT NOW LOL)

~Lauren;)


ALRIGHT HERE IS CHAP THREE SEE BELOW FOR CHAP 2 THX!

CH.3 A DAY NEVER ENDS!
AT HOME DIXIE SAW A NOTE IN THE KITCHEN IT READ:
Dear Dixie,
I have an important clinet who came in on short notice so i am at work watch the girls for me. I wont be home for dinner so feed the girls at put them to bed neither will dad be home he is on a buisness trip!
Love you
mom
Dixie was so desperately depressed first of all she wanted to go to the mall,second of all she hated baby-sitting,and third knowing her mom she knew she would not get payed. She went to go check on the girls they were sleeping meaning meghan and carrie, kailey was doing her homework and she knew while kailey did her homework every day she always wanted a snack but Dixie was not in the mood today she she sent her off with 3 bucks to the ice cream parlor across the road.Dixie went to her room and played some music got showered up and relaxed until... she hears the doorbell. 'who could that be "dixie said it was the Flower Bites kailey and meghan's girlscout group how could dixie forgot today they were holding there camp campout in the living room at the Dixie"s HOUSE!But again she could care less she let them do there thing and went back in her room. she just turned on MTV watching TRL when she heard a cry blah and campfire songs. The cry was from carrie who woke up- because of the campfire songs from the FLOWER BITES and the blah was meghan throwing up. "Oh boy" dixie gulped She just couldnt take it!

Chapter 4 Magical Seen
Dixie screamed everything went silent. Dixie quickly cleaned up the mess and told the girls to call their mothers and go home. When everything is normal she put Kailey ,Meghean to bed and rocked Carrie to sleep. Then she lay in her bed and cuddled her dog Summer.!
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In the morning Dixie got up changed her clothes and went downstairs.Before she left for school she asked her mom if her Heidi,and Renee could all got to the mall. "Sure honey be home by 7"said her mom "gotcha"said Dixie and she grabbed her JanSport backpacka nd was out the door for school.Once in school she basically had to hide herself because of her incedent yesterday.All day was a drag finally it was the end and tomorrow was school picnic day last week ofschool till summer break. "Yes"said Dixie to herself looking at the calender on the gym door. Then Dixie forgot about everything.........

bestroyal
09-26-2006, 02:01 AM
:) AWESOME ! btw you miss speled model and number :) just wanted to give you a little head ups :) WIRTE MORE WRITE MORE

pixiebuttercup
09-26-2006, 02:03 AM
cool wirte more !!

Bellezza
09-26-2006, 02:29 AM
thx bestroyal i hate grammer and thx will do buttercup

bestroyal
09-26-2006, 02:40 AM
:)yea i hate it to :) but pretty good 2 miss spell words i found


and america is is supposed to be

America

not


AMerica

just thinking

Bellezza
09-26-2006, 02:47 AM
yeah i know i dont pay attention when i write and am to lazt to correct ok here comes the next chapter it is pretty funny at least i think or not..(thinks) ah to much pressure lol

daisymoomoocow
09-26-2006, 03:22 AM
Cool story! WRITE WRITE WRITE MORE! lol i want to see what happens

Bellezza
09-26-2006, 03:39 AM
bestroyal sorry i kept looking for the right section could not find it here is the next chap. anyway



CHAPTER 2Life ends at age 19
At the end of pre-algebra she completely lost it she was still in her seat. On reg days she would be up and out. mrs diamond was confused but she did not care she left for lunch.You may think by knowig Dixie she never become
face to face with mrs.diamondbit today she was in a dreaming weird but cool sleep mode.But what she did not know was that when everyone was at lunch the popular kids came in and took pictures for the year group.But thankfully her friends Renee' and Heidi came and rescued her into shape. Once they told her what happened she knew she would never be at the popular table which was #20 she was at 16 so close!But by tomorrow she would be at table 1 which was terrible for a girl like her.

By the end of the day she had Gym.They were going to play dodge ball she knew her team would win but little did dixie know she was her team. yup you guessed it 1 against 22 she was out in about 2 mins. as she walked home Kailey started ot make fun of her good thing it was not Meghan she went home sick,bad thing her little sis was teasing her. She knew this day could not get any worse

bestroyal
09-26-2006, 03:44 AM
why not add this to the top ?


but anyways chaptor to is ok :)

mis speled words

Mrs.Diomond

KNOWING

Bellezza
09-26-2006, 03:46 AM
lol i stink at grammer yes this was not my fave chap either but more is coming dont worry and next time i will add at top

bestroyal
09-26-2006, 04:30 AM
I Dont Like It Eatiher But I Am Just Helping You Fix Some Words!~! :)

Bellezza
09-27-2006, 12:35 AM
chap 3 is here ppl look at top thx
~Lauren

bestroyal
09-27-2006, 12:37 AM
i dont se chaptor 3 ?

Bellezza
09-27-2006, 12:50 AM
it is there now lol

bestroyal
09-27-2006, 12:55 AM
yup it is there aweosome!

Bellezza
09-27-2006, 12:56 AM
thx hey no mistakes Go me! oh yeah. lol

OK I havent been posting the next chapter so here's number 4 on its way!

~Lauren<33
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