View Full Version : It's More Then Meets The Eye


Dudejoejoe
09-19-2006, 12:33 AM
Chapter 1
Derek turned to 33 on his lock and pulled the metal handle. Flying out came his Science book.He bent down to pick it when 'Bam!' He smacked heads with someone. "Oww" Derek said falling to the ground. "Oh my god i'm so sorry" The voice said helping him up. "I'm Kelsi" She said. "Derek" Derek said grabbing his note book. "So what team are you on?" Derek said. Derek slammed his locker shut and turned back to Kelsi. "I'm on A you?" Kelsi said. "Same, Well i have to go to Science" Derek said. "Really? Me to" Kelsi said. "Cool" Derek said as he began walking. As they both walked through the doorway there hands touched and Kelsi blushed. Mrs. Burke stared at Derek and Kelsi. "Well class please start you Do Now and get ready to move seats" Mrs. Burke said. Derek answered the question and stood up. Mrs. Burke kept calling names and people ran into each other. Some people got mad because of who they where sitting next to. "Derek and Kelsi" Mrs. Burke said pointing to the front to desks. "Wow, This is weird" Kelsi said taking a seat. "You can say that again" Derek said. Mrs. Burke smiled at Derek. Derek raised his eyebrow. "Hey Derek do you know this question?" Kelsi said. "Oh yeah, Well what you have to do is" Derek said. Derek explained the question to Kelsi and went back to his work. "Just call me cupid" Mrs. Burke thought simling.

To Be Continued!

CubbyDoggie
09-19-2006, 12:36 AM
Wow.. That's great! Can't wait for more my gifted friend!

Dudejoejoe
09-19-2006, 12:38 AM
Aww Thanks Cubbers.

CubbyDoggie
09-19-2006, 12:40 AM
You're very welcome. :)

RubyRubia
09-19-2006, 01:00 AM
Hmm..Im still wondering about this Team A thing.. I wonder..

Ru Ru~

CubbyDoggie
09-19-2006, 01:01 AM
Some schools have teams, which helps them pick what teacher they have. My cousins that are in middle school have 'Rocket Teams' it's been like that for them since that they were in the 3rd grade.

RubyRubia
09-19-2006, 01:05 AM
Ah, ok. My school doesnt seem to have these " teams ".

For a moment I thought these teams were from-

Never mind.

Anyway, the story seems like young love is blossoming. :D Keep going strong Dude!

Ru Ru~

CubbyDoggie
09-19-2006, 01:08 AM
Yes, neither do I. Pfftt... hopefully my middle school won't have stupid teams like that..

Sarahisme
09-20-2006, 12:57 AM
You love my RPG names, don't you? LOL
Nice story!!!

Dudejoejoe
09-20-2006, 01:11 AM
Kelsi s one of your RPG names? Anywho more coming later!!

CubbyDoggie
09-20-2006, 09:25 PM
Yep, that's one of her names. She has it i one of my RPG's...

Heh.. Isme.. You're always in my RPG's XD

Sarahisme
09-21-2006, 01:36 AM
I'm in too many RPGs.

170 subscribed threads... ooooooooh!

you need to write more "Jaden"!!

CubbyDoggie
09-25-2006, 08:31 PM
Joe.. WRITE MORE. Or else I'll steal your new Pokemon Mystery Dungeon game...