Tris-Remix
09-16-2006, 12:05 AM
I made a story here called baby friends and no one really liked it, so now I decided to make a new story with the same plot! hope you enjoy this one!
~Chapter 1: The Chair~
Story Telller(Me): One day in a town, there were 3 11-year-olds named Tristan, Waqas and Rachel. They had a pet tiger named Ty. Tristan and Waqas liked to play video games and watch TV, while Rachel liked to play with Ty or her brothers. Ty ate vegetables and he loved the 3 kids because they were very kind. One day, all 4 of them noticed something
Tristan: Hey, the couch feels bumpy
Waqas: I'll see what it is - looks under chair - What is this
Story Teller: They found smething that looked something like a ray, but they were not sure.
Waqas: What is this!
Tristan: I don't know?
Rachel: Whatever it is, Don't touch it
All of them: Ok
Ty: Meowme Meow Meow Meowme? (What is that)
Rachel: We don't know Ty
Ty: Meowie Meow? (Ok...)
Rachel - pats tiger on the back -
Tristan: Well what is htat thing and what does it do
Rachel: Don't touch it! - holds Tristan's hand -
Tristan: Ok Ok
Waqas: Can i just have a sneek peek
Rachel: No!!! you boys cant listen!
Story Teller: Ty then jumped on the chair and accidently activated the ray. Soon there wa a big flashing white light and bam!!! The next thing they knew, they were... they were...
~Chapter 2: They Were...~
Story Teller: They were BABIES!!! The ray turned out to be a baby ray and all of them, including Ty, was a baby! None of them could walk and they were wearing baby clothes. Tristan quickly crawled to the ray and it read "Baby Ray"
Tristan: Oh My... it's a baby ray!
All of them: Yikes!
Ty: Meow! (Yikes!)
Tristan: Ok, don't panic, maybe um, uh
Waqas: We're babies forever! - screams -
Rachel: Waqas, Tristan, don't worry, we'll be ok
Waqas and Tristan: - hugs Rachel -
Meow Meowy Meowme? (Why everything look so big?)
Rachel: It's ok Ty
Soon they all started to cry and when their mom came in, she was Shocked!
~Chapter 3: Shocked!~
Story Teller: All of the kids,who were babies, were crying! Their Mom was shocked and couldn't believe it! She quickly ran and changed their diapers and they stipped crying, then she gave them a bottle.
Tristan: Wow, this bottle is good - drinks bottle -
Waqas: Yeah,and to think i hated bottles - drinks bottle -
Rachel: Guys! We're babies and you are jsut drinking bottles!
Tristan and Waqas: Yeah... taste it - drinks bottles -
Rachel: Now why would drink a bottle
Tristan and Waqas: - takes a bottle and puts in Rachel's mouth -
Rachel: Wow, it's good
Ty: Meowme meowy (They told you it was good, I lioke it too)
Tristan: See, even ty likes it
Rachel: But Guys, we have to figure out a way to grow up
Waqas: Relax, don't worry, lets play
Story teller: They went to their toy box and they saw everything was baby toys.
Tristan: Aww man... Baby Toys
Waqas: Hello, we are babies! - throws toy at Tristan -
Tristan: Ow! hey, this toy feels cool, i want to play with it
Rachel: Guys! Your palying with baby toys!
Tristan and Waqas: Yeah, try it
Ty: Meow Meoww (Come on! Try it)
Rachel: No No No!!!
Tristan: - throws toy at Rachel -
Rachel: Ow! Hey, it is cool!
Mom: Come on babies, it's time for bed!
All fo them: Ok! Meowe(Ok!)
~Chapter 4: Bed Time~
Story Teller: When the 3 kids and the little tiger went in the bedroom, they saw their beds were cribs! Even Ty's bed became a kitty basket! When thye got in their cribs, Rachel started to complain again!
Rachel: Oh My Gosh, look at what we sleep in
Tristan and Waqas: Rachel...
Rachel: I mean come on, look at this crib!
Tristan: Yeah, it's preety comfy
Waqas: He got that right
Ty: Meowyi Meower(He got you there)
Rachel: Arg! you boys are so annoying!
Waqas: - throws a blanket -
Rachel: Hey!
Waqas: Hey what? try it
Rachel: Wow your right, it is comfy
Tristan: See, now you like it
Rachel: Ty, you ok
Ty: Meowers Meowie Meow(Yup!These sheets are so beatiful!)
Waqas: See, leave Ty alone, why don't you live a little
Rachel: Guys, don't you see that were little thumb sucking diaper wearing babies! Don't you want to be back to normal?
Tristan and Waqas: Yeah, but I like being a baby, everything is so cool!
Ty: Meowie Meow (I like being a baby tiger)
Tristan: Now Good Night and Sleep Tight
Story Teller: They all fell asleep, but Rachel kept on twisting andTurning, Rachel had a weird dream.
~Chapter 6: Rachel's Dream~
Story Teller: Rachel fell asleep, but she kept on twisting and turning. She was regular, but she didn't seem like it. She had a bad dream that freaked her out!
[Rachel]: Hey, where am I?
: Why your in the land of babies
[Rachel]: What! Why am I here
[Baby]: Your here to become us
[Rachel]: No! I will not!
[Baby]: If you don't, I will cry
[Rachel]:Whatever, go ahead and cry
[Baby]: - cries so loud -
[Rachel]: Ah! My Ears!
[Baby]: - cries louder -
[Rachel]: - runs away -
[Baby]: We will find you
[Rachel]: Ah!
[Baby]: One of us! One of us!
[Rachel]: Never Never!
Story Teller: Rachel woke up and she saw Tristan, Waqas and Ty were surronding her.
Tristan and Waqas: Rachel, what's wrong, you were twisting and turning all night
Ty: meowers (Yeah, you ok)
Rachel: Well I had.. I had.. a bad Dream! - cries -
Tristan: it's ok, don't cry, we're here for you, tell us what happened
Rachel: Well, a bunch of babies were attacking me and started to cry and and... - cries more -
Waqas: It's ok, come on, lets get breakfast
Rachel: - wipes tears - ok
~Chapter 7:Breakfast~
Story Teller: At the breakfast table, Their chairs had turn into little baby chairs. This time Rachel didn't complain, she just gt in the chair and sat down quiet. the others wanted to know what was wrong.
Tristan: Rachel, what's wrong
Rachel:...
Waqas: Rachel, tell us
Rachel:...
Ty: Meowie! (Rachel)
Rachel...
Tristan: Hey Waqas, what's with Rachel
Waqas: I don't know? Hey Rachel, why are you not complaining?
Rachel: What's the Point of compalining if we're babies and we do baby stuff.
Tristan and Waqas: Huh?
Ty: Meowi? (Huh?)
Rachel: Hey, lets just eat
Mom: Here kids, your food, some baby food for you 3 and little veggies for Ty
Tristan and Waqas: Yuck!
Ty: Mieeow! (Yuck!)
Rachel: Mmm... come on guys, try it
Tristan and Waqas: Rachel, are you ok?
Ty: Meowits (You ok?)
Rachel: Why wouldn't I be?
Tristan: Well yesterday you were complaining and now your quiet
Rachel:...
Rachel: Ok, i'm done, i'm going to go play
~Chapter 8: Deja Vu~
(Couldn't think of a better chapter title :Tongue:)
Story Teller: When all of them were done, they got their bottle, but this time Rachel liked it and the kids were annoyed.
Rachel: Mmm... Good Bottle
Tristan: - spits out - What!!!
Waqas: Ugh... more bottles
Rachel: Come on, it's taste good
Tristan: Yeah...
Story Teller:Then they went to play with the toys
Tristan: Oh great, more baby toys
Waqas: Ugh...
Ty: Meow... (Ugh...)
Rachel: Come on guys, it's fun!
Tristan: - drops toy - What!!!
Story Teller: Then it was bed time
Tristan: Yay... the crib
Waqas: So comfy... ugh
Ty: Meow... (Ugh)
Rachel: So comfy! So comfy!
Tristan: - falls out of crib - What!!!
Story Teller: The next day, Tristan, Waqas and Ty were more board, before breakfast, Waqas had a plan
Waqas: That's it! I miss being a kid again!
Tristan: Ditto
Ty:Meiow (Ditto)
Waqas: Lets fidn out a way to turn back into kids, hey wait, where is the ray
Tristan: Under the couch, go get it
Story Teller: When Waqas got the ray, it read: [B]Property of City Science Centre
Tristan: And I may ask why?
Waqas: Oh, when we went to the Science centre, I was checking out rays and maybe one fell in my pocet
Story Teller: Waqas knew where that was, when Rachel came downstairs, All 3 of them pulled her
Rachel: Hey! I didn't get breakfast
Tristan: Oh well, your coming with us
~Chapter 9:Back to Normal or Not? ~
Story Teller: When Tristan told Rachel the plan, she started jumping for joy, she was so excited because she never liked being a baby. When they went to get there bikes, the bikes were trikes. This time all of them complained. Waqas and Ty shared a bike (Ty in a basket) and Rachel and Tristan shared one.
Sorry People, gotta go bed, i will add more.
~Chapter 1: The Chair~
Story Telller(Me): One day in a town, there were 3 11-year-olds named Tristan, Waqas and Rachel. They had a pet tiger named Ty. Tristan and Waqas liked to play video games and watch TV, while Rachel liked to play with Ty or her brothers. Ty ate vegetables and he loved the 3 kids because they were very kind. One day, all 4 of them noticed something
Tristan: Hey, the couch feels bumpy
Waqas: I'll see what it is - looks under chair - What is this
Story Teller: They found smething that looked something like a ray, but they were not sure.
Waqas: What is this!
Tristan: I don't know?
Rachel: Whatever it is, Don't touch it
All of them: Ok
Ty: Meowme Meow Meow Meowme? (What is that)
Rachel: We don't know Ty
Ty: Meowie Meow? (Ok...)
Rachel - pats tiger on the back -
Tristan: Well what is htat thing and what does it do
Rachel: Don't touch it! - holds Tristan's hand -
Tristan: Ok Ok
Waqas: Can i just have a sneek peek
Rachel: No!!! you boys cant listen!
Story Teller: Ty then jumped on the chair and accidently activated the ray. Soon there wa a big flashing white light and bam!!! The next thing they knew, they were... they were...
~Chapter 2: They Were...~
Story Teller: They were BABIES!!! The ray turned out to be a baby ray and all of them, including Ty, was a baby! None of them could walk and they were wearing baby clothes. Tristan quickly crawled to the ray and it read "Baby Ray"
Tristan: Oh My... it's a baby ray!
All of them: Yikes!
Ty: Meow! (Yikes!)
Tristan: Ok, don't panic, maybe um, uh
Waqas: We're babies forever! - screams -
Rachel: Waqas, Tristan, don't worry, we'll be ok
Waqas and Tristan: - hugs Rachel -
Meow Meowy Meowme? (Why everything look so big?)
Rachel: It's ok Ty
Soon they all started to cry and when their mom came in, she was Shocked!
~Chapter 3: Shocked!~
Story Teller: All of the kids,who were babies, were crying! Their Mom was shocked and couldn't believe it! She quickly ran and changed their diapers and they stipped crying, then she gave them a bottle.
Tristan: Wow, this bottle is good - drinks bottle -
Waqas: Yeah,and to think i hated bottles - drinks bottle -
Rachel: Guys! We're babies and you are jsut drinking bottles!
Tristan and Waqas: Yeah... taste it - drinks bottles -
Rachel: Now why would drink a bottle
Tristan and Waqas: - takes a bottle and puts in Rachel's mouth -
Rachel: Wow, it's good
Ty: Meowme meowy (They told you it was good, I lioke it too)
Tristan: See, even ty likes it
Rachel: But Guys, we have to figure out a way to grow up
Waqas: Relax, don't worry, lets play
Story teller: They went to their toy box and they saw everything was baby toys.
Tristan: Aww man... Baby Toys
Waqas: Hello, we are babies! - throws toy at Tristan -
Tristan: Ow! hey, this toy feels cool, i want to play with it
Rachel: Guys! Your palying with baby toys!
Tristan and Waqas: Yeah, try it
Ty: Meow Meoww (Come on! Try it)
Rachel: No No No!!!
Tristan: - throws toy at Rachel -
Rachel: Ow! Hey, it is cool!
Mom: Come on babies, it's time for bed!
All fo them: Ok! Meowe(Ok!)
~Chapter 4: Bed Time~
Story Teller: When the 3 kids and the little tiger went in the bedroom, they saw their beds were cribs! Even Ty's bed became a kitty basket! When thye got in their cribs, Rachel started to complain again!
Rachel: Oh My Gosh, look at what we sleep in
Tristan and Waqas: Rachel...
Rachel: I mean come on, look at this crib!
Tristan: Yeah, it's preety comfy
Waqas: He got that right
Ty: Meowyi Meower(He got you there)
Rachel: Arg! you boys are so annoying!
Waqas: - throws a blanket -
Rachel: Hey!
Waqas: Hey what? try it
Rachel: Wow your right, it is comfy
Tristan: See, now you like it
Rachel: Ty, you ok
Ty: Meowers Meowie Meow(Yup!These sheets are so beatiful!)
Waqas: See, leave Ty alone, why don't you live a little
Rachel: Guys, don't you see that were little thumb sucking diaper wearing babies! Don't you want to be back to normal?
Tristan and Waqas: Yeah, but I like being a baby, everything is so cool!
Ty: Meowie Meow (I like being a baby tiger)
Tristan: Now Good Night and Sleep Tight
Story Teller: They all fell asleep, but Rachel kept on twisting andTurning, Rachel had a weird dream.
~Chapter 6: Rachel's Dream~
Story Teller: Rachel fell asleep, but she kept on twisting and turning. She was regular, but she didn't seem like it. She had a bad dream that freaked her out!
[Rachel]: Hey, where am I?
: Why your in the land of babies
[Rachel]: What! Why am I here
[Baby]: Your here to become us
[Rachel]: No! I will not!
[Baby]: If you don't, I will cry
[Rachel]:Whatever, go ahead and cry
[Baby]: - cries so loud -
[Rachel]: Ah! My Ears!
[Baby]: - cries louder -
[Rachel]: - runs away -
[Baby]: We will find you
[Rachel]: Ah!
[Baby]: One of us! One of us!
[Rachel]: Never Never!
Story Teller: Rachel woke up and she saw Tristan, Waqas and Ty were surronding her.
Tristan and Waqas: Rachel, what's wrong, you were twisting and turning all night
Ty: meowers (Yeah, you ok)
Rachel: Well I had.. I had.. a bad Dream! - cries -
Tristan: it's ok, don't cry, we're here for you, tell us what happened
Rachel: Well, a bunch of babies were attacking me and started to cry and and... - cries more -
Waqas: It's ok, come on, lets get breakfast
Rachel: - wipes tears - ok
~Chapter 7:Breakfast~
Story Teller: At the breakfast table, Their chairs had turn into little baby chairs. This time Rachel didn't complain, she just gt in the chair and sat down quiet. the others wanted to know what was wrong.
Tristan: Rachel, what's wrong
Rachel:...
Waqas: Rachel, tell us
Rachel:...
Ty: Meowie! (Rachel)
Rachel...
Tristan: Hey Waqas, what's with Rachel
Waqas: I don't know? Hey Rachel, why are you not complaining?
Rachel: What's the Point of compalining if we're babies and we do baby stuff.
Tristan and Waqas: Huh?
Ty: Meowi? (Huh?)
Rachel: Hey, lets just eat
Mom: Here kids, your food, some baby food for you 3 and little veggies for Ty
Tristan and Waqas: Yuck!
Ty: Mieeow! (Yuck!)
Rachel: Mmm... come on guys, try it
Tristan and Waqas: Rachel, are you ok?
Ty: Meowits (You ok?)
Rachel: Why wouldn't I be?
Tristan: Well yesterday you were complaining and now your quiet
Rachel:...
Rachel: Ok, i'm done, i'm going to go play
~Chapter 8: Deja Vu~
(Couldn't think of a better chapter title :Tongue:)
Story Teller: When all of them were done, they got their bottle, but this time Rachel liked it and the kids were annoyed.
Rachel: Mmm... Good Bottle
Tristan: - spits out - What!!!
Waqas: Ugh... more bottles
Rachel: Come on, it's taste good
Tristan: Yeah...
Story Teller:Then they went to play with the toys
Tristan: Oh great, more baby toys
Waqas: Ugh...
Ty: Meow... (Ugh...)
Rachel: Come on guys, it's fun!
Tristan: - drops toy - What!!!
Story Teller: Then it was bed time
Tristan: Yay... the crib
Waqas: So comfy... ugh
Ty: Meow... (Ugh)
Rachel: So comfy! So comfy!
Tristan: - falls out of crib - What!!!
Story Teller: The next day, Tristan, Waqas and Ty were more board, before breakfast, Waqas had a plan
Waqas: That's it! I miss being a kid again!
Tristan: Ditto
Ty:Meiow (Ditto)
Waqas: Lets fidn out a way to turn back into kids, hey wait, where is the ray
Tristan: Under the couch, go get it
Story Teller: When Waqas got the ray, it read: [B]Property of City Science Centre
Tristan: And I may ask why?
Waqas: Oh, when we went to the Science centre, I was checking out rays and maybe one fell in my pocet
Story Teller: Waqas knew where that was, when Rachel came downstairs, All 3 of them pulled her
Rachel: Hey! I didn't get breakfast
Tristan: Oh well, your coming with us
~Chapter 9:Back to Normal or Not? ~
Story Teller: When Tristan told Rachel the plan, she started jumping for joy, she was so excited because she never liked being a baby. When they went to get there bikes, the bikes were trikes. This time all of them complained. Waqas and Ty shared a bike (Ty in a basket) and Rachel and Tristan shared one.
Sorry People, gotta go bed, i will add more.