View Full Version : The Talent Show! ~Friends Or Not?~


PrincessKala
09-15-2006, 10:07 PM
Hi! This is a New Story I Just Made! Hope you like it!

~Chapter 1~
Getting Ready for School

Ashley, Carrie, Brittany, and Jordan have been friends since they were in Kindergarden! Nothing Could Serate them..Until came the Talent Show Of their school, Cherrybrook Lane Middle School.
It was a warm, Monday morning when Ashley's Alarm clock went off.DING DING!! Ashley sat up and stretched while it was 6:35 a.m. She had an hour till school had started. She stood up and went to her closet to decide what to wear. She picked out one of her Pink shirts that said,"Absolutly, ADORABLE!" on the front. She quicly put it on and grabbed her denim skirt with diamonds on the side, to match the shirt. Ashley headed toward the kitchen when she heard her mom say something.

"MORNING SWEETIE!" her mother said.
"Hi Mom. What's for breakfast?"Ashley asked.
Her mother said,"Oh there is some hot pancakes done for you on the plate! I added some chocolate chips in them! YOUR FAVE!"

Ashley laughed and said THANKS! And finished eating them.Ashley headed to the bathroom and started to comb out her messy, Curly, blonde hair. When she was done, she tied it back wtih a pink string and tied it into a pony tail. It looked cute. She sprayed on some Sweet Pea body spray and headed toward her bedroom.Ashley's phone begun to rang.She quickly picked up her pink phone.Ashley got a 4-way phone call from her 3 Best friends, Carrie, Brittany, and Jordan.

Ashley asked into the phone,"Hello??"
The three girls all responded,"MORNING ASHLEY!!"
Ashely put the phone away from her ear.
Ashley responded,"Good Morning Best Buds!"
They all laughed.
Carrie asked,"Everyone ready yet so My mom can Pick you ups?"
Jordan relpied,"TOTALLY! I've been done for about..uh..10 Minutes!"
Brittany responded,"Hold on guys give me..5 MINUTES!!"
Ashley said,"Well I guess I'm ready...All I have to do is put my jewlery on!"
Carrie said,"My mom said that we'd leave my house in about 10 minutes!"
Everyone replied Okay SEE YOU THEN!"

They all hung up and Ashley proceded with putting her jewlery on.10 minutes latter, the door bell rang. Ashley got up from watching a news cast presentation and answered the door. It was 7:15.It was Carrie.

Carrie asked,"Ready? we're all here now we can head to school.
Ashley said,"Hold on, I need to grab my backpack and turn of the t.v."
Carrie said,"Okay,I'll be in the car.

Ashley turned off the T.V. , grabed her Pink backback, and headed out the door and locked it. Ashely walked down the drive way and into Carrie's mom's car.

The girls all shouted,"Hey Ashley!"
Ashley said,"Hey! Everyone ready for school!?"
They all said different things and they were off to school!

~Chapter 2~
School
They finally arived at school it was 7:20. They all hopped out of the car and out their backpacks on. they walked through the gates as Carrie's mother drived away. The girls quickly went the computer lab and went on the computers. Ashely went on VMK, Jordan went on Google to search some stuff, Carrie went on VMK Forums, and Brittany went to Milsberry.

Ashley asked,"New Stuff in VMK!? Got to check it out..."
Carrie said,"Are you Serious!? I Can't believe MicaLica Got Banned!!"(MicaLica is made up)
Jordan said,"I Should print this picture of Zac Efron out...I CAN PUT IT ON MY BINDER!! Sweet.."
Brittany said,"I didn't know that my room was that dull.."

The girls were gazing through their favorite sites when..The Bell rang. Everyone in the computer lab sighed and quickly exited what they were doing and turned of their computer. The girls all walked out and walked towards the J- building. *The girls are ALL In the 7th grade!*

Carrie said,"Well me and Brittany should head to Science..Before Mr.Jennings yells at us for being late..."
"Yeah me and Jordan should head to L.A, Before all the Good seats are taken..." Ashley replied.
The girls waved good-bye and headed to their classrooms..

Ashley and Jordan arived at L.A. They had to write a paragrah of what they did that weekend. They also learned about persuasive essays.
Brittany and Carrie arived at Science and early. They got papers of the report they were going to do. It was about endangered species, they had to pick and endangered animal and write about them. Carrie decided to do one about Dolphins! Brittany decided to do hers about Koalas! They then were sent to the Library to get information about their animal.
The bell then rang and the girls all met infront of the gym. They all had P.E. Together. They took a seat inside the gym and then their teacher, Mrs.Casals, took role and they all got dressed into their P.E. uniforms. The three of them all had lockers together and they all got quickly dressed. Their uniforms (Or P.E. Clothes) Were Red Basketball shorts and White shirts that said,"CHERRYBROOK LANE MIDDLE SCHOOL" The girls ran to the gym and sat on the bleachers. Their class was going to play Vollyball! Mrs. Casals showed them how to hit the play and block and and all the rules. The three girls were all on the same team and they started to play. At the end their Team won!
Jordan said,'THAT WAS TOTALLY FUN!"
Carrie said,"We only won because of me!"
The girls all laughed.
Ashley said,'We won Because of Team work with everyone on the team!"
Brittany exclaimed,"I think I want to play Vollyball more Often! It's pretty fun!"
The girls laughed and agreed, they then ran to go change.

The next class the girls had was their electives. Brittany and Carrie had Band. They both played the flute! Jordan was T.A (Teachers assistant) For P.E. Ashley had A.S.B. They all waved bye and went to their electives

~Chapter 3~
Lunch Time
RING! RING!
The girls headed to go get lunch. Crarie went o the Salad bar to get a salad.
Ashley went to the Chicka Filla stand to get a Chicken Sandwitch. Jordan went to the Crazy Taco Stand to get a Taco. Brittany went to the Lunch cart to get Pizza. They all met up by the Benches under he trees to eat lunch. Carrie got there first, then Ashley, and Brittany. The girls sat down and begun to ate.
Brittany said, with food in her mouth,"Wh... i..Jor..-"
Carrie stopped her and said,"WHAT!?"
Brittany said, after she swallowed her fod,"Sorry.. I Said where's Jordan?" Ashley replied.."Yeah where is she??"
Carrie said,"Oh she went to the Crazy Taco stand.. You know how that line is LONG.."
The Girls all said,"Oh Duh.."
Jordan finally arived and said,"Sorry the line Took forever..The Lady didn't know what she was doing!"
The girls all laughed and ate their lunch.

Carrie said,"Well I'm finished..I'm going to go to the Library to get information On Dolphins, for the endangered species report!"
Brittany said,"Wait up! I'll go with you..I Have to get info on Koalas, that's my endangered species..."
Carrie and Brittany waved good-bye and quickly walked to the Library.

Ashley and Jordan sat there and finished eating and decided to go to the Computer Lab to search their endangered species animal. Ashley picked the Giant Panda and Jordan picked the Giant Armadillo. The two walkd to the computer lab and hopped onto a computer.

Jordan said to Ashley,"Did you know that The giant armadillo is classified as a member of the order Edentata (Edentates) and is a member of the family Dasypodidae! I Have no idea what it means but it sounds awesome!"
They both laughed.
Ashley said,"The giant panda is classified as a member of the order Carnivora (Carnivores) and is a member of the family Procyonidae."
Jordan said,"The Both sound Cool!"

The bell rang for Lunch to be over and the girls turned off the computers, picked up their stuff and went to class...

~MORE TO COME SOON!~.

BMarie521
09-15-2006, 10:09 PM
Nice story!

I made a story about a talent show on here, but I bet mine isn't like yours :D

PrincessKala
09-15-2006, 10:11 PM
Nice story!

I made a story about a talent show on here, but I bet mine isn't like yours :D

Thanks! lol *HILIGHT FOR SPOLLIER*The talent show is like might split them up

BMarie521
09-15-2006, 10:14 PM
Oh.....

It won't be like mine then... mines about 4 girls who heard about the talent show, make a band, popular girl hear them, they make a band....and I haven't finished yet...:D

bestroyal
09-15-2006, 10:19 PM
awesome astory sounds good so far i want more!

PrincessKala
09-15-2006, 10:22 PM
Oh.....

It won't be like mine then... mines about 4 girls who heard about the talent show, make a band, popular girl hear them, they make a band....and I haven't finished yet...:D

Oh Yeah! I read that one! It was a Nice story!
BTW:Great Job and Thanks for the Comment! Glad you like it!

~Carrie

THANKS BESTROYAL!! lol

~I ADDED A LITTLE MORE!~

Danceteamer_15
09-18-2006, 05:24 PM
Great story! Keep up the great work!

PrincessKala
09-18-2006, 09:54 PM
Thanks All!
~I ADDED MORE!~

~MORE COMING SOON!~

I'm Glad some people like it!
~Carrie

BMarie521
09-18-2006, 10:29 PM
Write more!!!!

Danceteamer_15
09-19-2006, 12:27 AM
Some people???? Many people like it Carrie they just dont post! Keep on going!

PrincessKala
09-19-2006, 09:34 PM
I Wrote More!

ENJOY!
~Carrie~