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Waterelement
09-07-2006, 11:57 PM
Hey guys, I know how many pirate fans there are out there, So Im now writing a story based on a pirate's life. Enjoy!

Chapter 1
The Wretched Life

Suddenly, a man walked into the soiled Parlor, he hastily took out a vise, and walked over to one of the tables. Pulling a leg off the table, he carved a large Basin in the center of the leg.
"Fill this up with rum," He ordered the bar tender, in his deep, scratching voice.
"Yes sir,' The bar tender said, taking out a bottle of rum, and pouring it into the basin.
"Give me the bottle," He snapped, snatching the bottle from his hands, and also taking his basin full of rum.
"Thats two gold pieces," The bar tender said.
"I take what I want, when I want," The man said, pulling out a sword, and holding it the Bar tender's neck.
"Yes, you do as you please," The bar tender said, with panic in his voice.
A scream in the night, a corpse on the ground, and a pirate on the run.
The Man came to some reeds outside, rustling through them as quickly and quietly as possible. Everyone on the seas now new RumLips The Pirate.
"Arggg... I reckin you get caught again," One of his crew mates asked, Smirking.
"Why you bother? You know you you'll will be thrown over board for the kind of talk," RumLips said.
"Heh, by the end of your life, everyone will know RumLips the Pirate," The crewmember continued.
"Aye, that they will, that they will," Rumlips said.
RumLips walked down to the lower deck of the boat.
"Aye, we be setting sail at dawn," He said to the crew.
"Aye, but what if they found us by then," One asked.
"Then git rid of them of course! Thats what us pirates do best," RumLips replied.
"Arggg," The all yelled.
RumLips went into the Captin's Quarter, putting his Pirate hat on the table, looking out of his window, at the great open sea.
"I can't remember a time when I was Happier. I know it a bit rough bein a Pirate, buts Its the way I live and Want to live. I better get some rest, before we set sail that is," RumLips, walked towards his bed, sitting down, and pulling his wooden leg up on the bed, putting his head on his pillow.
"Aye, this be the life matey haha yes it is."
The Evening came, bringing the brisk ocean to a halt. The Water was smooth, looking like a mirror.
"Its a calm one, Aye Matey," RumLips asked a crew member.
"That it is captain. Any ideas when we should put her sails down," The Crew Member asked.
"Put her sails down and we will set sail," RumLips said.
The Crew Pulled the sails down, and pulled the ancor up. They ship went with the winds, out to sea.
Pete watched the ship pull away from the shore. He sighed, looking at his feet in the soft Sea Sand.
"Peter, come in soon," Peters Moother yelled.
"Coming," Peter said, walking off into his home.
"Dinner is ready, sweety," His mother said, putting some corn, Mashed Potatos, and Water on the table.
"Why such a little share, mother," Peter asked.
"Your father is Ill, and hasn't been able to go to work. So for now we will have smaller limits Okay Peter," His mother asked.
"Yes, Ma'am," Peter said. Peter quickly ate his share and walked outside. He ran down to the shore, the wet, soggy sand sinking into his toes, as he reasched the shore.
"What is that," He said, looking out at a ship, casting a light in the chilly night. "A Ship..?"
Suddenly, the Ship Came closer and closer to shore. Peter walked back away from the aproching ship. The Ship's bow pushed through the sand, ripping the shore's waters apart, and stopping. A man, very chubby, with a beard that looked like it hadn't been brushed for years and a pirate hat that was slightly torn jumped from the ship. Weighed down with his many clothes, he slowy aproached Peter.
"Im scared," Peter cried, starting to run away.

Note: This is not the entire chapter. I dont write stories with those really short chapters.

Please comment.

Waterelement
09-08-2006, 05:39 PM
Umm... Im adding on to the story.

RumLips walked down to the lower deck of the boat.
"Aye, we be setting sail at dawn," He said to the crew.
"Aye, but what if they found us by then," One asked.
"Then git rid of them of course! Thats what us pirates do best," RumLips replied.
"Arggg," The all yelled.
RumLips went into the Captin's Quarter, putting his Pirate hat on the table, looking out of his window, at th great open sea.

WafflePrincess
09-10-2006, 09:50 PM
Its good Water its good! :D Keep going! :)

Waterelement
09-10-2006, 09:50 PM
FINALLY! I GET A RESPOND! Thank you.

WafflePrincess
09-10-2006, 09:51 PM
FINALLY! I GET A RESPOND! Thank you.

Hehe your welcome :D

TomorrowAlpha
09-10-2006, 10:45 PM
RumLips... lol um.. ORIGINAL name:D it's good keep writin'

EDIT*
Just something that was kinda bothering me...
every time I refresh this page, a different signature of yours comes up...
I don't know why it does this, is it my computer or is it just VMKF??

Waterelement
09-11-2006, 12:31 AM
Thank you.

and I have a a signature rotation, I know, Im awesome. :)

ariellover4life
09-11-2006, 03:10 AM
cool story

Waterelement
09-12-2006, 01:32 AM
Thank you.

SimbaRocks
09-12-2006, 01:33 AM
Nice story Water!

Waterelement
09-12-2006, 01:34 AM
Thanks Simba, my teachers always said I really should consider a career in writing when Im older, so I just want to try alot of genres ( Fantasy, Adventure, Realistic Fiction )

TomorrowAlpha
09-12-2006, 01:36 AM
That's not fair.... Your too awesome for me!
Become less awesomer.. or be doomed to flying monkeys in Bornio:D
No joke, I am NOT kidding, I swear:mellow8:
I don't see more story!
Less commenting, more story-writing..(trails off)
DO YOU HEAR ME??
HUH???

EDIT*
It's going to be REAL hard to be an author if you don't write stories!!!

Waterelement
09-12-2006, 01:38 AM
calm down there buddy, lol.

Ok, I will add some on.

TomorrowAlpha
09-12-2006, 01:44 AM
-breathes in, breathes out- ok, I'm fine now.
But I'm still watching you :shifty:
I'm just a LITTLE HYPER!!!:uglyhamme

Waterelement
09-12-2006, 01:49 AM
I added a little bit... If I get some ideas I will write more tomorrow.

Good night all.

P.S. BuddyBo, if your frustrated with me not adding alot, check out my guide, the link is in my Sig :D

Tyrannosaurus
09-12-2006, 02:16 AM
nice so far water

Waterelement
09-12-2006, 07:40 PM
Thank you, Im trying to think of what next to write :shifty:

TomorrowAlpha
09-12-2006, 08:03 PM
Thanks water... and I've already read it... good advice though.
You should have like them find a 'haunted' shipwreck or something interesting like that, just a little idea to jump-start your brain.:D

rockclimbing
09-12-2006, 08:08 PM
man ill read story soon just that you are a fast sig changer, how do you do it?

Waterelement
09-12-2006, 08:18 PM
Sig Rotation :)

gabyta
09-12-2006, 09:58 PM
thx for the story Water!!

Waterelement
09-12-2006, 11:14 PM
No Problem. I have alot of homework lately so I cant really add alot right now.

VMKJen
10-05-2006, 10:59 PM
great story, ill read it soon :) its great i hear!

Waterelement
10-06-2006, 11:47 PM
Thank you, EditGirl.

VMKJen
10-07-2006, 12:39 PM
yw water. ill read that story very soon!!

ParkerS Aka Park
10-14-2006, 10:03 PM
Wow Water.
It's cool, keep on writing and trust your ideas :)