♥Can I Be The One?♥
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This is a love story about a girl named Jasmine and 2 boys Jay and Dave. I got this idea from a RPG I was doing. No, It is not the same story just same names and they both are fighting over Jasmine. So read ahead.

~*♥Chapter 1♥*~

Jasmine woke up. It was the second week of summer vacation. She got out of bed and went to her mirror. She brushed her long,curly,blonde hair and sat at her desk. She opened her laptop and went on Instant Messager. She signed on and saw that her two best friends Jay and Dave were on. She went on a three way talk with them.


Jazhottie: Hi Boys! ;)
Jaybird: Hi Jaz! :)
Davedude: Yo! :D
Jazhottie: So you ready to go to our trip in Hawaii for the summer? :cool:
Jaybird: Yeah! ;)
Davedude: Duh! :Tongue:
Jazhottie: Well I am going to finish packing my stuff. Bye! :)
Davedude: Bye! :(
Jaybird: Bye! :(


Jasmine shut her laptop and got out her pink suitcases,backpack,and matching beauty bag and started packing her stuff. She finished packing then she got the backpack and put in her laptop,cell phone,i-pod,and chargers for each and zippered the bag. She went down stairs to have some lunch because she skipped breakfast too pack. She went to the fridge and took out a pre-made sandwich and sat down and started to eat it. Just then she heard a knock on her door. She wondered who it was and put down her sandwich. She got up and walked to the door. She opened it and it was Jay.
" Hi Jay! " Said Jasmine.
" Hi Jasmine! I was wondering if you want to go to the mall with me and get some things for the trip. " Jay asked.
" Sure! Let me grab my purse! " Jasmine said getting her backpack and shutting the door behind her.

They both got into Jasmine's convertiable and drove to the mall. She parked her car and took the keys out of the igition. She put them in her backpack and went out of the car. They walked up to the doors and Jay opened them for Jasmine.
" Thank you. " Jasmine said smiling.
" My pleasure. " Jay said shutting the door behind him.
" So where do you want to go first? " Jay asked.
" Lets go shop and meet at the smoothie stand in two hours so we can have a smoothie. " Jasmine suggested.
" Ok. " Jay said walking away looking at his watch.




~*♥Chapter 2♥*~

Jasmine went to Limited Too and got a new bathing suit and a dress. She got her bags and went to a Clarie's to get some jewerly. They were closed so she went to Macy's and went to where the braclets were. She swore she saw Jay there. He walked away quickly when he saw her with a little bag. She wondered if it was him or not. She shoke her head and kept going. She looked at her watch. It was just about two hours up so she went to the smoothie stand. She sat down and ordered a strawberry smoothie and waited for Jay to come. Ten minutes later he came and sat down.
" Sorry I was to late there was a long line in Pacsun I was there the whole time! " He showed her his big Pacsun bag.
" Oh it is ok. " Jasmine said.
Jay ordered a kiwi smootie and they got their smoothies and drank them.
" Lets get going it is really late. I want to get to bed early we are getting up at one! " Jasmine said and giggled. She flipped her blonde hair away from her big blue eyes as wide and deep as the ocean. They went to the car and drove home.
" Bye Jay! See you tomorrow! " Jasmine yelled from her porch and she shut the front door. "

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Jasmine woke up from the sound of her alarm clock beeping in her ear. She turned the alarm off and got out of bed. She brushed her hair and got dressed. Her stuff was already in her car other than her backpack. She got her backpack and drove off to the airport. She put her car on a plane to Hawaii so she would have it there. She took her keys and went inside the airport. Her two friends were already waiting for her there.
" Hey Jaz! " They both said in harmony.
" Hey Guys! " Jasmine said getting their tickets. They boared the plane and Jasmine sat in a row alone and the boys across from her.
She opened her laptop and Jay and Dave got theirs out as well.
Jasmine and Jay were Instant Messaging each other.


Jazhottie: Hi Jay :)
Jaybird: Hi Jaz :)
Jazhottie: So... remember we are landing in 5 hours! :Embar:
Jaybird: I cant wait :D
Jazhottie: Byes! ;)
Jaybird: Byes.. :confused:

They all fell asleep on the plane and they woke up by the loud noice of the plane landing. Jasmine got her backpack and went off the plane. They all got in her car.
" So what are you planning to do in Hawaii? " Dave asked Jasmine.
" I dont know Dave but I know something special is going to happen. " Jasmine said.

They got to the shore house they bought and went inside and un-packed. Jasmine placed her laptop on her desk and the boys did the same. The boys Instant Mesaged each other while Jasmine was taking a nap.


Davedude: Can you keep a secret? :confused:
Jaybird: The Question is can you keep a secret from me too? :confused:
Davedude: LOL yeah me first..
I love Jasmine. She is so hot!
Jaybird: Yeah she is pretty but I think she is a great person.
Davedude: Do you love her too? You idiot! :mad:


Dave signed off and he went on his bed and listened to his I-pod.


~*♥Chapter 3♥*~

Jasmine,Dave,and Jay were walking around a fesitval and Dave saw a roller coaster. " Lets go on it! " Dave said. " I dont know.. " Jasmine said. " It will be fun trust me! " Dave said. They got on the roller coaster and the ride started. They were close to the ground and the roller coaster went up-side down. Jasmine fell to the ground! " Jasmine!! " Jay screamed running off the ride as it was stopping. Dave got off and tripped Jay and picked up Jasmine and put her in the car. Dave drove home and Jasmine annouced she was fine. " Thanks Dave. " Jasmine said.
" I am going to get ready to go to the dance tonight on the beach! " Jasmine said going upstairs. She came down the stairs in a short light pink and orange summer dress. Her long blonde wavvy hair was supported with a matching headband taking her bangs out of her big blue eyes.
" Ready! " Jasmine said. Jay and Dave whistled low and before Jay could say anything Dave asked.
" Want to go together? I always liked you. " Dave asked.
" Dave! Of course! " Both of them walked out of the house linked arms. Jay walked behind them.

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At the dance Dave and Jasmine were slow dancing. They stopped dancing because it was getting late.
" Where is Jay? " Jasmine asked.
" He is right over there. " Dave said.
Jasmine walked over to Jay.
" Hi Jay. We are going but we can talk on Instant Messager. "
" Ok. But when Dave is not around come to my room I NEED to tell you something. " Jay said quickly because Dave was coming.
" Ready? " Dave asked.
" Yeah lets go. " Jasmine said getting her keys. They all walked to her car and got in. She put the keys in the ignition and drove home.


~*♥Chapter 4♥*~

Everyone was in their rooms. Jasmine slipped out of her room quietly and went into Jay's room. " What is it Jay? " Jasmine asked him.
" Well... I always cared about you.. I love you Jasmine.. " Jay said as he placed a real siliver braclet around her hand. It had real diamond flowers on it.
" Me and Dave have begin fighting over you... " Jay said.
" What?! " Jasmine yelled running into her room slamming the door and locking it.

Jazhottie: Dave! How dare you! you jerk! :mad:

Jasmine slammed her laptop shut and went on her bed crying. Both boys were at the door.
" Jasmine! Babe! Hottie! " Dave yelled.
" Go away jerks! " Jasmine yelled at them and she thorugh the braclet across the room.
" Look! I care for you Jasmine! Dave likes you for your looks! I would have rather fell off the roller coaster then you! I love you Jasmine! "

Jasmine went to the door and opened it. She hit Dave and kissed Jay. She let go of Jay and slammed the door again.


~*♥Chapter 5♥*~

Jasmine picked up the braclet from the ground and kissed and put it on her wrist. She loved it so much. It was really late but she wondered if Jay was still up. She slipped out of her room and peeked into his room. He was at his desk. She went inside.
" Hi.. " Jay said.
" Jay.. I love you too. After you told Dave off I really was touched. Thank you. I will never take this braclet off! " Jasmine said smiling.
" Jasmine I love you too. " Jay said. Jasmine went up and kissed him on the cheek and she went back to her room and feel asleep.


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In the morning Dave left. They were kinda of happy he left because he caused so much comotion.
" Jasmine did you know that we have known each other for 19 years today? " Jay said smiling.
" Oh my gosh really? " Jasmine said blushing.
" Yeah I keep note of these things. " Jay said smiling.
" Why dont we celebrate it tonight at a moon lite picnic on the beach? " Jay asked Jasmine.
" Oh my gosh Jay! I love you thank you! " Jasmine said hugging him.
Jasmine went upstairs to send e-mails to her friend. Jay whispered:
" I really love you too Jasmine.. "


~*♥Chapter 6♥*~

Jasmine got ready for her romantic dinner. She took a shower and went to her room. She tried to figure out what to wear. She picked out a short light blue summer dress. It got darker from the top. At the top it was really light and it goes to diffent shades down the dress. It brought out her big deep blue eyes like the sky brought out the clouds. She brushed her hair then she straightened it. She put in a blue butterfly clip and put on high heel sandles. She put on glossy bright as a rose lipstick and blue eye shadow. She got her little hand bag with her phone and make-up. She went down the stairs to find Jay sitting at the couch. He gave a whistle when she appered at the end of the steps. " Wow... " Jay said looking at her in amazment. " Only took you two hours to get ready! " Jay remarked and laughed. Jasmine laughed. " If everything I said made you laugh I would talk forever.. " Jay said to her. Jay got the basket and they walked out to the shore. They set out the blanket and started eating. " Jay thank you so much. " Jasmine said eating some mini shrimp. The best part is dessert! Jay said. They finished eating their entree and Jay handed her and cupcake and he took his own. " I made them myself! " Jay said smiling. Jasmine took a forkfull and put it in her mouth. " There is something hard in here! " Jasmine said spitting it out.


~*♥Chapter 7♥*~

Ow! Jasmine said looking through her mess. She pulled something out and wipped it. It was a ring! It was siliver with one big flower in the middle that matched the braclet! Jasmine was thirlled. " You wont make me put this on myself wont you? " Jasmine said laughing. Jay knelled down and put the ring on her finger. " Jasmine will you marry me? " Jay asked.
" Uh... I really dont know... " Jasmine said with things running around in her head. " What about my family? What will we do? Move here? Do we have the money? What about the kids college.. " Jasmine said. " Jasmine! Stop please! Think about it please. I love you very much. I would give my right arm for you to be mine. Can I Be The One? " Jay asked. " I dont know.. " Jasmine whispered. They packed the stuff up and Jasmine gave Jay the ring.
" For now. " Jasmine said going back to the house and she went to sleep.


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The next morning Jasmine went into Jay's room. " I was thinking Jay.. Yes I want to marry you! " Jasmine said. She looked on the floor. There was Jay in a trance! " Jay! " Jasmine yelled running to him. She picked him up and put him in her car and they went to the hosptial. He went into a room and a doctor took x-rays on him while Jasmine was in the waiting room. An hour later the doctor came out. " He can be released but I am sorry to say he has colin cancer. " The doctor said. Jasmine burst into tears like a waterfall flowing down in a hurricane.



~*♥Chapter 8♥*~

Jay was to say at the hosptial for a few days. Jasmine brought him his laptop so they could talk. But Jay was typing something for a long time. When Jasmine came in he hid his laptop. " What are you doing? " Jasmine asked.
" Just talking to freinds Jaz! " Jay said. " How are you feeling? " Jasmine said as a nurse walked in. " He is doing better and today we are doing alot of tests on him. So he might be home in two days or less. " The nurse said.
" Ok thank you. I will get going so I dont get in the way. Bye! " Jasmine said walking out.

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Jasmine was lonely at home. Like a bird without its worms. The clouds without the sky. Even though Jay was coming home in a hour she still felt like it was forever. Jasmine went on her bed and cried herself to sleep. Then she heard " Honey! I am home! " the sound of Jay made her run down the stairs.
" Jay! " Jasmine said and she hugged him. " Hi Jasmine! I missed you! " Jay said hugging her back. " You got home really late! It is 10:00 at night! Lets go to sleep. " Jasmine said as they went upstairs. Jasmine was in her room and she fell asleep with the door open. A little while later Jay came in and put something in one of Jasmine's drawers and slipped back out of the room.



~*♥Chapter 9♥*~

Jasmine woke up in the middle of the night. She got up and wanted to get a sweater because it was chilly. She opened her drawer and got out a sweater. Something white came flying out of the drawer. She picked it up and opened it up. It was a note from Jay. It said:

Dear My Dear Jasmine,
I know we are soon to be married. But I must tell you I am deadly sick. If I never get better,and I go to a place up there... Well all I know that it is not a better place because you are not with me. If you are not with me I am incomplete, sorrow, and words can not explain it. I love you so much Jasmine.... so you know my will is hidden in my bedroom somewhere if I ever go. I hope I dont go. If I do I dont want you to be sad. Because I will see you again someday. And I will always be waiting for that day sweetheart.
I love you,
Jay

Jasmine finished reading the note and burst out in tears. She ran to Jays room to wake him up. He was not there! " Jay!!!! " Jasmine said running around the house like a lunitic. " Jay!!! " Jasmine yelled. She got dressed and went to the hospital. She ran into the hospital room he was in before and there he was laying in a bed.
" Hi Jasmine... " Jay said.
" Jay!!! I got the love note! I love you to Jay! " Jasmine said running to hug him. A nurse came in the room. " I have good news!! " She said exitctedly.




~*♥Chapter 10♥*~

" What?! " Jasmine asked loudly. " Yes what is going on!? " Jay asked the nurse. " Well we looked at the x-rays wrong. He does not have cancer! There was a thumb print on the x-ray that made it look like it! You only had an ashma attack! " The nurse said. Jasmine hugging Jay so tight. " Jay! You know what this means? " Jasmine said. " Yes! Tomorrow? " He asked. " Yes tomorrow Jay! " Jasmine said leaving the hospital.


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The next day Jasmine and Jay went to a church and got ready for their wedding. Jamsine was getting ready while Jay was in another room with Dave his best man. " Sorry about everything man.. You two belong together. " Dave said. " Apoliage acceted. " Jay said happlily. " Oh no time to go out! " Jay said walking out. He was standing in front of the alter waiting for Jasmine to come. Then music came on and everyone started to stand. The doors open and Jay almost fell over. Jasmine was in a floor length dress and a long train. It was white and had flowers out of glitter on it. She walked slowly down the aisle and she finally came to him. " I love you. " Jay said to her as they held hands. " Do you Jay take Jasmine to be your lawfull wedded wife? " The preist asked. " I do. " Jay said. " Jasmine do you take Jay to be your lawfull wedded husband? " " I do." Jasmine said. They turned facing each other. " Repeat after me. " The priest said. " Jasmine take this ring, as a sign of my love. We will be together in good times and bad, and in sickness and in health. " Jay repeated it and slipped a beautiful ring on her finger. Jasmine did the same. " You may kiss the bride! " The priest said and they kissed. Jay picked up Jasmine and carried her out of the church.



The End!!!


( Can I Be The One 2 is coming soon! )

Wow, that's great so far. Keep it up!

write more :) i like it :)

wow thats great so far write more :)


i think 1 of the best stories you have ever wrote :)

Woot! I like it! One question? Why is all your character names Jasmine?

Because I love that name ;) Thank you so much everyone!

OOO.. I Can't wait for more!
Keep up the great stories!

I Always LOVE Your stories! :D

~Carrie

Thank you! And you are in luck i am writing more now!

Yayz!!!!!!!!!!!!

alright here is a NEW and JUICY chapter! sorry if it is long..

wow jucicy ! more

LOL you really like it that much? what do you like about it?

hmm BOYS ! BOYS CATCH MY ATTENTION LIKE ALL GIRLS :) BOYS ARE HOT!

LOL Best really? my actual writing detail what do you like about it? What catches your eye? Makes you read more like a great book you cant put down?

like i said before BOYS and detail like in your story

you put : jasmine had long blonde cury hair

in other story they will just write

blonde hair

and i like books that i have im in it they all ways are intresting

and people can actully realte to the story those are the things like i hope you understand what i am saying

I understand even though you have typos :)
I re-read my post before i edit it so there is no mistakes.

i have small typos in my story @_@ i actully re read my story once a week to look for them but i use spell check for stories :) i love typoes :) wirte moer please !

OOOO I Love it! Can't wait to see what the Boyz Do!!

GOOD JOB!
~Carrie

Cool!!!!!!!!!

I love this story, keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Tmkttt, I believe you and your cus. Dudejoejoe are two of the best writers on this site. You both use the best detail and always check to make sure everything makes since. Give me a few days to think of a flaw, because it will take a while :D
Great work!

WOW! These are the kind of books I spend HOURS in Barnes n Noble looking for! I love it! I didnt read your other story, but this is turning out great. Great details like "Blue eyes as wide and deep as the ocean". KEEP IT UP! Im bookmarking this story, teeheehee.

More i love it i want MORE!!

OMG this brings a tear to my eye that you really think this! Since I am going to school tomorrow and probely wont be on the computer all week I will surely write a few chapters today ;)

this stoory is so AWESOME AWESOME this is like the books i LOVE TO READ :) i would not be surprised if this becomes a book i know i would buy it :)

Really? i would autograph it for you lol!

really a autograph would be awesome :) my story that i was writing was so good that my parents told me they will take it to a editor :)

wow................ take mine too HEH

You have a few typos, actually. But your story is awesome xD!


Chapter 1:

i-pod = iPod
down stairs = downstairs
too = to
convertiable = convertible
igition = ignition


Chapter 2:

Clarie's = Claire's
braclets = bracelets
to = too
smootie = smoothie
noice = noise
un-packed =
Instant Mesaged = Instant Messaged
I-pod = iPod


Chapter 3:

fesitval = festival
up-side down = upside down
annouced = announced
wavvy = wavy


Chapter 4

rooms = room
siliver = silver
braclet = bracelet
begin = begun
thorugh = threw
braclet = bracelet

thanks kit.. I think LOL

tmktt just a quetion why does she kis jay then slam the door in his face again she should kiss jay then pull him in her room rather then slamming the door again


and will you ever write more!

Because she is till kinda mad at Dave that is why.

if she is mad at dave she does not need to be mad at jay to @_@ just dave


pps: are you going to write more

right now ;)

:) AWESOME :) JUST A QUICK QUESTION I THOUGHT THEY WHERE 16 AND Are they going to collage or soemthing and why did dave left was he upset about janie or jay

It is JASMINE and he got upset and he did not want to stay :P

sorry for double post but so you know
JAY IS 24
JASMINE IS 20

So you know during the story....

oh i thought they where the same age @_@ please add more

OMG you want even more NOW?

YEA i do >_< it is so tottaly awesome :) in my story i wrote about 4 chaptors a day becuase pople wanted more >_< but it is so good i need to know more!

Alright but the best part is in this chapter if you REALLY want me to do it..

I just read it but it so lovie-Dovie! It's more of a chick story, But good anyways :)

i REALLY WANT you to do it :) never save the best for last :)

LOL best I can safe you for last LOL jk....

alright if you INSIST!

Sorry for double post but a cliff hanger is here...

i know i know :) more more more i got tin find out what had happen i think i knw but PLEASE PLEASE write more!

what best said Lol


~Loops

Why do you make the boys like stupid? Like with all the whistling.. Now alot of boys do that @_@ Oh and what about this Cheesy Line "If ever word i said made you laugh forver" Oh Please! Anyway, Cool clifhanger but probably a ring ;)

LOL you might have to wait till the WEEKEND! haha... heh......

Keep Adding!! XD

The Week End That Is 3 Whole Days Tmktt You Cant Do This To Me You Cant! IF I KNOW THAT I WOULD HAVE EVER WANTED TO KNOW PLEASE JUST 1 MORE CHAPTOR 1 MORE

ok ok .... ONE MORE! gosh you really like this dont you @_@

aww how cute-.- why aren't i in your stories? ( also im not a lover ) lol

Don't make it so Sappy please!!!

Yup we do LOL she likes it ALOT LOL


~Loops

THAT WAS AWESOME!!! MUST WRITE MORE.. Please ^.^

~Yasmin ^_^

i g2g eat dinner leave comments!

he has cancer will he die will he loose his hair what will happen to him you need to write more on the bright side your hands are getting excercise :)


#1 story fan

~ bestroyal ~


i got to say this is ALMOST better then mine :) ALMOST nothing is better then mine :) but if i had to choose the best story on the site i would have never choosed to much good 1

moo id be the 1 with cancer looooool no way id be a doc if i were in there -.-

he has cancer will he die will he loose his hair what will happen to him yo need to write more on the bright side your hands are getting excercise :)


#1 story fan

~ bestroyal ~


i got to say this is ALMOST better then mine :) ALMOST nothing is better then mine :)


I hope he dosen't die. I was jay in that RPG tmkttt got the idea of the story from.

What about my storys Best @_@ And thats Mega Bragging Right there >_<

heh Alpha... anyway more coming LATER

can i be in the next story you make? i dun wanna be a lover-.-

oh i am sorry i think i might have offended some ppl

omg!this story made me cry it is amazing please write more

That's so sweet..

OH MY! I Can't Believe Jay Has CANCER!

What will happen!? I CAN'T WAIT!

WRITE MORE! GREAT JOB!

~Carrie

Thanks! sorry i had school today so you probely wont see more till the weekend SO sorry....

THE WEEKEND WOW cant you like write mre like now really fast or soemthing please i want to know what happens this is the first place i came to when i went on fan today :)

Aww... best... but the best part cant be rushed! there is still alot of chapters to be written but i want to take my time on these.

PLEASE you dont have to rush it just start working on it

I'm gonna read all of the chapters you put xD keep adding!

I just got home from a long 2 first days of school!! So tonight i have soccer practice and tomorrow morning i have a game and so maybe tomorrow afternoon i can write some if i am not too out of it....

aww that will be like for ever and ever and ever :(

Best do you want me to stop writing ALL TOGETHER?

NO!!! i am just anxious i mean you have a cliffhanger i just want to know what happens i am sorry i just really REELY want to know what happes !

Wow.....

Interesting....

Cancer? That's a little sudden....

LOL today i WILL write more maybe even finish it....

:ddd Please Finish This!

Dont worry i will soon :)

yay :) i cant wait !

I can't wait either xD! Before, I wasn't into reading stories... but now... ;).

Do Chapter 8 Already

yea i have been loking back and fortt here every hour nothing change ?

OMG!! WILL HE DIE OR WHAT?!?! My uncle had colin cancer

ROAR how long will we wait?!

=( I'm going to cry if you don't update, LOL. Please? =3 (Great you've made me start to beg, what next? xD)

Wow! that was really good! i cant wait to hear the rest! its very exciting :)

Omg plz add more!!!!!! Im going to scream and cry!!

I think I'm going to hold you hostage if you don't type more. >_<

I second that!

lol i third that! if th makes any sense at all.. lol

is CHAPTOR 8 COMMING :) i cant wait i waited like all day and now you filled me up with complete excitmemnt

Alright Alright I WILL ADD MORE NOW!

Teehehe...and I'm going to refresh every second...starting now! :)

ia m going to refresh the page 2 starting now ! cant wait to see what your going to post

sorry i got busy and i have to go in a moment so tomorrow morning

aww i waited all day but at least it is TOMARROW MORNINGi will be sure to check

Alright! A new chapter!

i demand you write more ! i am just joking


write more write more! i need to know i think it is a...

She's not on -.-.

Ah!! NEED MORE! WHAT HE PUT IN THE DRAWER?! :D

Yea! what did he put in the drawer??? =Do


~Loops

♥Can I Be The One?♥
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This is a love story about a girl named Jasmine and 2 boys Jay and Dave. I got this idea from a RPG I was doing. No, It is not the same story just same names and they both are fighting over Jasmine. So read ahead.

~*♥Chapter 1♥*~

Jasmine woke up. It was the second week of summer vacation. She got out of bed and went to her mirror. She brushed her long,curly,blonde hair and sat at her desk. She opened her laptop and went on Instant Messager. She signed on and saw that her two best friends Jay and Dave were on. She went on a three way talk with them.


Jazhottie: Hi Boys! ;)
Jaybird: Hi Jaz! :)
Davedude: Yo! :D
Jazhottie: So you ready to go to our trip in Hawaii for the summer? :cool:
Jaybird: Yeah! ;)
Davedude: Duh! :Tongue:
Jazhottie: Well I am going to finish packing my stuff. Bye! :)
Davedude: Bye! :(
Jaybird: Bye! :(


Jasmine shut her laptop and got out her pink suitcases,backpack,and matching beauty bag and started packing her stuff. She finished packing then she got the backpack and put in her laptop,cell phone,i-pod,and chargers for each and zippered the bag. She went down stairs to have some lunch because she skipped breakfast too pack. She went to the fridge and took out a pre-made sandwich and sat down and started to eat it. Just then she heard a knock on her door. She wondered who it was and put down her sandwich. She got up and walked to the door. She opened it and it was Jay.
" Hi Jay! " Said Jasmine.
" Hi Jasmine! I was wondering if you want to go to the mall with me and get some things for the trip. " Jay asked.
" Sure! Let me grab my purse! " Jasmine said getting her backpack and shutting the door behind her.

They both got into Jasmine's convertiable and drove to the mall. She parked her car and took the keys out of the igition. She put them in her backpack and went out of the car. They walked up to the doors and Jay opened them for Jasmine.
" Thank you. " Jasmine said smiling.
" My pleasure. " Jay said shutting the door behind him.
" So where do you want to go first? " Jay asked.
" Lets go shop and meet at the smoothie stand in two hours so we can have a smoothie. " Jasmine suggested.
" Ok. " Jay said walking away looking at his watch.




~*♥Chapter 2♥*~

Jasmine went to Limited Too and got a new bathing suit and a dress. She got her bags and went to a Clarie's to get some jewerly. They were closed so she went to Macy's and went to where the braclets were. She swore she saw Jay there. He walked away quickly when he saw her with a little bag. She wondered if it was him or not. She shoke her head and kept going. She looked at her watch. It was just about two hours up so she went to the smoothie stand. She sat down and ordered a strawberry smoothie and waited for Jay to come. Ten minutes later he came and sat down.
" Sorry I was to late there was a long line in Pacsun I was there the whole time! " He showed her his big Pacsun bag.
" Oh it is ok. " Jasmine said.
Jay ordered a kiwi smootie and they got their smoothies and drank them.
" Lets get going it is really late. I want to get to bed early we are getting up at one! " Jasmine said and giggled. She flipped her blonde hair away from her big blue eyes as wide and deep as the ocean. They went to the car and drove home.
" Bye Jay! See you tomorrow! " Jasmine yelled from her porch and she shut the front door. "

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Jasmine woke up from the sound of her alarm clock beeping in her ear. She turned the alarm off and got out of bed. She brushed her hair and got dressed. Her stuff was already in her car other than her backpack. She got her backpack and drove off to the airport. She put her car on a plane to Hawaii so she would have it there. She took her keys and went inside the airport. Her two friends were already waiting for her there.
" Hey Jaz! " They both said in harmony.
" Hey Guys! " Jasmine said getting their tickets. They boared the plane and Jasmine sat in a row alone and the boys across from her.
She opened her laptop and Jay and Dave got theirs out as well.
Jasmine and Jay were Instant Messaging each other.


Jazhottie: Hi Jay :)
Jaybird: Hi Jaz :)
Jazhottie: So... remember we are landing in 5 hours! :Embar:
Jaybird: I cant wait :D
Jazhottie: Byes! ;)
Jaybird: Byes.. :confused:

They all fell asleep on the plane and they woke up by the loud noice of the plane landing. Jasmine got her backpack and went off the plane. They all got in her car.
" So what are you planning to do in Hawaii? " Dave asked Jasmine.
" I dont know Dave but I know something special is going to happen. " Jasmine said.

They got to the shore house they bought and went inside and un-packed. Jasmine placed her laptop on her desk and the boys did the same. The boys Instant Mesaged each other while Jasmine was taking a nap.


Davedude: Can you keep a secret? :confused:
Jaybird: The Question is can you keep a secret from me too? :confused:
Davedude: LOL yeah me first..
I love Jasmine. She is so hot!
Jaybird: Yeah she is pretty but I think she is a great person.
Davedude: Do you love her too? You idiot! :mad:


Dave signed off and he went on his bed and listened to his I-pod.


~*♥Chapter 3♥*~

Jasmine,Dave,and Jay were walking around a fesitval and Dave saw a roller coaster. " Lets go on it! " Dave said. " I dont know.. " Jasmine said. " It will be fun trust me! " Dave said. They got on the roller coaster and the ride started. They were close to the ground and the roller coaster went up-side down. Jasmine fell to the ground! " Jasmine!! " Jay screamed running off the ride as it was stopping. Dave got off and tripped Jay and picked up Jasmine and put her in the car. Dave drove home and Jasmine annouced she was fine. " Thanks Dave. " Jasmine said.
" I am going to get ready to go to the dance tonight on the beach! " Jasmine said going upstairs. She came down the stairs in a short light pink and orange summer dress. Her long blonde wavvy hair was supported with a matching headband taking her bangs out of her big blue eyes.
" Ready! " Jasmine said. Jay and Dave whistled low and before Jay could say anything Dave asked.
" Want to go together? I always liked you. " Dave asked.
" Dave! Of course! " Both of them walked out of the house linked arms. Jay walked behind them.

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At the dance Dave and Jasmine were slow dancing. They stopped dancing because it was getting late.
" Where is Jay? " Jasmine asked.
" He is right over there. " Dave said.
Jasmine walked over to Jay.
" Hi Jay. We are going but we can talk on Instant Messager. "
" Ok. But when Dave is not around come to my room I NEED to tell you something. " Jay said quickly because Dave was coming.
" Ready? " Dave asked.
" Yeah lets go. " Jasmine said getting her keys. They all walked to her car and got in. She put the keys in the ignition and drove home.


~*♥Chapter 4♥*~

Everyone was in their rooms. Jasmine slipped out of her room quietly and went into Jay's room. " What is it Jay? " Jasmine asked him.
" Well... I always cared about you.. I love you Jasmine.. " Jay said as he placed a real siliver braclet around her hand. It had real diamond flowers on it.
" Me and Dave have begin fighting over you... " Jay said.
" What?! " Jasmine yelled running into her room slamming the door and locking it.

Jazhottie: Dave! How dare you! you jerk! :mad:

Jasmine slammed her laptop shut and went on her bed crying. Both boys were at the door.
" Jasmine! Babe! Hottie! " Dave yelled.
" Go away jerks! " Jasmine yelled at them and she thorugh the braclet across the room.
" Look! I care for you Jasmine! Dave likes you for your looks! I would have rather fell off the roller coaster then you! I love you Jasmine! "

Jasmine went to the door and opened it. She hit Dave and kissed Jay. She let go of Jay and slammed the door again.


~*♥Chapter 5♥*~

Jasmine picked up the braclet from the ground and kissed and put it on her wrist. She loved it so much. It was really late but she wondered if Jay was still up. She slipped out of her room and peeked into his room. He was at his desk. She went inside.
" Hi.. " Jay said.
" Jay.. I love you too. After you told Dave off I really was touched. Thank you. I will never take this braclet off! " Jasmine said smiling.
" Jasmine I love you too. " Jay said. Jasmine went up and kissed him on the cheek and she went back to her room and feel asleep.


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In the morning Dave left. They were kinda of happy he left because he caused so much comotion.
" Jasmine did you know that we have known each other for 19 years today? " Jay said smiling.
" Oh my gosh really? " Jasmine said blushing.
" Yeah I keep note of these things. " Jay said smiling.
" Why dont we celebrate it tonight at a moon lite picnic on the beach? " Jay asked Jasmine.
" Oh my gosh Jay! I love you thank you! " Jasmine said hugging him.
Jasmine went upstairs to send e-mails to her friend. Jay whispered:
" I really love you too Jasmine.. "


~*♥Chapter 6♥*~

Jasmine got ready for her romantic dinner. She took a shower and went to her room. She tried to figure out what to wear. She picked out a short light blue summer dress. It got darker from the top. At the top it was really light and it goes to diffent shades down the dress. It brought out her big deep blue eyes like the sky brought out the clouds. She brushed her hair then she straightened it. She put in a blue butterfly clip and put on high heel sandles. She put on glossy bright as a rose lipstick and blue eye shadow. She got her little hand bag with her phone and make-up. She went down the stairs to find Jay sitting at the couch. He gave a whistle when she appered at the end of the steps. " Wow... " Jay said looking at her in amazment. " Only took you two hours to get ready! " Jay remarked and laughed. Jasmine laughed. " If everything I said made you laugh I would talk forever.. " Jay said to her. Jay got the basket and they walked out to the shore. They set out the blanket and started eating. " Jay thank you so much. " Jasmine said eating some mini shrimp. The best part is dessert! Jay said. They finished eating their entree and Jay handed her and cupcake and he took his own. " I made them myself! " Jay said smiling. Jasmine took a forkfull and put it in her mouth. " There is something hard in here! " Jasmine said spitting it out.


~*♥Chapter 7♥*~

Ow! Jasmine said looking through her mess. She pulled something out and wipped it. It was a ring! It was siliver with one big flower in the middle that matched the braclet! Jasmine was thirlled. " You wont make me put this on myself wont you? " Jasmine said laughing. Jay knelled down and put the ring on her finger. " Jasmine will you marry me? " Jay asked.
" Uh... I really dont know... " Jasmine said with things running around in her head. " What about my family? What will we do? Move here? Do we have the money? What about the kids college.. " Jasmine said. " Jasmine! Stop please! Think about it please. I love you very much. I would give my right arm for you to be mine. Can I Be The One? " Jay asked. " I dont know.. " Jasmine whispered. They packed the stuff up and Jasmine gave Jay the ring.
" For now. " Jasmine said going back to the house and she went to sleep.


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The next morning Jasmine went into Jay's room. " I was thinking Jay.. Yes I want to marry you! " Jasmine said. She looked on the floor. There was Jay in a trance! " Jay! " Jasmine yelled running to him. She picked him up and put him in her car and they went to the hosptial. He went into a room and a doctor took x-rays on him while Jasmine was in the waiting room. An hour later the doctor came out. " He can be released but I am sorry to say he has colin cancer. " The doctor said. Jasmine burst into tears like a waterfall flowing down in a hurricane.



~*♥Chapter 8♥*~

Jay was to say at the hosptial for a few days. Jasmine brought him his laptop so they could talk. But Jay was typing something for a long time. When Jasmine came in he hid his laptop. " What are you doing? " Jasmine asked.
" Just talking to freinds Jaz! " Jay said. " How are you feeling? " Jasmine said as a nurse walked in. " He is doing better and today we are doing alot of tests on him. So he might be home in two days or less. " The nurse said.
" Ok thank you. I will get going so I dont get in the way. Bye! " Jasmine said walking out.

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Jasmine was lonely at home. Like a bird without its worms. The clouds without the sky. Even though Jay was coming home in a hour she still felt like it was forever. Jasmine went on her bed and cried herself to sleep. Then she heard " Honey! I am home! " the sound of Jay made her run down the stairs.
" Jay! " Jasmine said and she hugged him. " Hi Jasmine! I missed you! " Jay said hugging her back. " You got home really late! It is 10:00 at night! Lets go to sleep. " Jasmine said as they went upstairs. Jasmine was in her room and she fell asleep with the door open. A little while later Jay came in and put something in one of Jasmine's drawers and slipped back out of the room.





ARG Cliff hanger @_@ noo!!!! what was it what was it!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!! Keep going!!! You are doing GREAT!!!

=( He got banned! -cries for 60 hours-

Yay! But what could he have put inside... maybe a message or letter? I mean, he was typing in his laptop...

=( He got banned! -cries for 60 hours-



Its a SHE.


(I also thought she was a he when i first heard of her.)

CLIFFHANGER-.- sorry i just wanna know more

she is banned rock :(

she is banned rock :(

o darn i have to wait 3 days for this cliffhanger to end

Its a SHE.


(I also thought she was a he when i first heard of her.)
Woops. Heh heh heh. :Embar:

No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She cant be banned, this is how I get through school! Ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am BAAAAAAAAAAACK!

yay more more more!

Ooooo...I Wonder what Jay did.. I Can't wait for more!
Please write more!

Great Add on!
I Love it!
Great Job!!
~Carrie

what's a cliffhanger?!

nice story but what did he put in the drawer

Great story is there another part? To it

write more @_@ what did he put in the drawer!??


~Loops

What a cliffhanger! What Is In That Drawer! WRITE MORE! MUST READ!

I like the story, keep going!! :)

Alright I am writing more on the weekend because this is REALLY REALLY hard and long and great and sad and happy chapter so I need some time :)

Yay!! :D i cant wait!! ive been checking everyday :D

Tmkttt will you help me with my story? Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i really like the story
i know a good story when i read it. i dont write storys, i read them @_@

im such areader id rather read some thing over and over again than play soccer or a sport or like swim. some times i chose other wize. i m getting wayyy off topic. I love your story! its i little rough around the edges but if if with help of a proffesionall editor and probaly when your like older, it colud be more then a story. some day.

OK hope u under stand what i like type

more more i am hungry for this story!

Alright I am going to write more NOW!

TMKTTT when will i get accepted into your RPG?!

New chapter added!!!!!!!!!!! Bestroyal where are you ? LOL Join my RPG fans!

- searches - BESTROYAL where oh where are you? can i have pie?

Whts Good News! You Better Sit Down Adn Wright Missy! Right Now!


ROCK YOU WANT PIE ? i only have blueberry

ok gosh gosh.......

Whts Good News! You Better Sit Down Adn Wright Missy! Right Now!


ROCK YOU WANT PIE ? i only have blueberry

-.- tmkttt made a new rpg and can i have your blueberry pie??

you cant HAVE IT but you can have THE CRUMBS

ok it is finished!! Second one coming soon!

Awesome Awesome Story This Should Be A Book Cant Wait For The Sequal



PS : ROCK I LEFT YOU CRUMBS OF MY PIE
PS ; JOINED YOUR RPG TMKTTT

Bestroyal are you taking yours to an editor? Wondering... and sequal will come soon enough......

no tmktt not until about 2 years i got to writting it the right way add more detials and all those things and i am waiting for 2 years becuase my parents might not like that i am __ years old and writing love stories


if you look at my profile you can see my age

same here Best :( :) You are the same age and you live completly south from me :( Lucky! Do you know a girl named Taryn? She is my friend who moved from here to Flordia !

No i want to send mine to the editor on the computer but if i do my whole family will HAVE to read it and buy it :(

oh...... they should anyway LOL.

i know but i should wait to i am little bit older maybe the editor might take me more serieoulsy i read somewhere a 13 year old girl wrote a story gave it to a editor they liked it and now it is a award winning book :)


and also if i do mkae a book the WHOLE SCHOOL might read if it goes into the libary and i wil be all over school and on the morning shows how embercing over a book @_@

I would love it :)

i would HATE IT but if i DO make it into a story it can go on my application for collage not like thatt any where near the future -_- i would make another story abd pubkish it just not a love story as good as it is i cant my family will kill me -_-

Nice ending :)

Thanks Alpha :) Do you think I should it to my mom?

me personaly i am not but yours seems ok mine has a tiny bit more love in it so yeah you can

Omg I Love It Cant Wait Till Second Story!!!

such a happy ending :) I can't wait for the next story :)

so so happy man this is sorta like my dog that has cancer but it helped me im going to go hug my dog

AWWW!! How Cute!!

GREAT STORY!!
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE SECOND ONE!!

GREAT JOB!
~Carrie

OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD!! :D that story was defiantly worth the wait! theres gonna be a second one?! :D

awww i love happy endings! great story!!! i can't wait for the next part!

aww!! That's cute!! I can't wait for the next story either!! lol