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Penguinz
09-04-2006, 07:09 AM
Chapter 1

“Mom! He did it again!” I screamed down the stairs angrily. My older brother, David, took my Diary... Again. This was the 3rd time this week! I can’t stand him!
“David! Give her back her Diary!” this was a normal line from my mother. David never listened though. He ran though-out the house giggling and reading my diary as I dashed after him.
“The pictures of his glowing eyes floated in my dreams,” David yelled loudly.
“DAVID!” I screamed trying to tackle him to the floor, instead I was on his back trying to snatch the Diary away. “Give it back!” I screamed in his ear. He dropped the diary and plugged his ears.
I dove for the journal and ran in to my room, locking the door. “How does he always seam to find the key?” I said among myself. I searched where the key used to be, it was gone. I groaned loudly. “DAVID!” I screamed running to his room.
I banged on his door loudly. “DAVID OPEN UP!” I could hear his computer starting up. “DAVID!!” I yelled practically breaking the door knob. He ignored me and I knew he was up to no good.
“TO THE SCHOOL WEBSITE!” He yelled trying to get me angry. Suddenly, I knew what he was doing. At that very moment I kicked the door so hard that it came flying opened. He spun around quickly, not understanding what happened. Typical for his brain. “Wha-“
I cut him off, tackling him to the floor. “Give me the key or you won’t get hurt” I said calmly. Instantly he flung me off of him and raised the key high in the air, so I couldn’t reach it.
“You want it?” He said swinging it back and forth. I jumped up trying to grab it from his grasp. “Go get it!” He said flinging it out of the room and down the stairs. I dashed down the stairs, tripping along the way. I tumbled down the stairs and ended up right next to the key. I sat up and ran my fingers along the key and tucked it in my pocket.
“I have all the information I need,” He whispered, writing an article to the school newspaper. I smiled, unaware of what was going on. I went in to the kitchen to eat some breakfast before school.

What happened next was something so…. So…. Unspeakable….

To Be Continued!
© Copyright: Not Stealing

ariellover4life
09-04-2006, 07:13 AM
wow! awesome story

Penguinz
09-04-2006, 07:15 AM
Thanks, I just wrote it...

Hey, weren't you at my other story? Haha, I have fans. ;)

Sarahisme
09-04-2006, 07:16 AM
Nice!
Good thing my brothers don't steal my diary.
My mom did once, it was so embarrasing!

Penguinz
09-04-2006, 07:19 AM
Lol!! Trust me, it get's worse! -evil grin-

I will update it tomorrow. Let's see how many people check it out ;)

BTW: My other story is "The New Girl" if you wanna check that out.

Mermaidviolet
09-04-2006, 10:57 AM
Awesome so far. Two thumbs up -puts ten fingers up- I think that's right. :D

Penguinz
09-04-2006, 07:19 PM
lOl! Thanks!

drama_girl
09-04-2006, 08:08 PM
Really good write more!!

Penguinz
09-04-2006, 09:01 PM
Thanks! Wow, your another fan for both stories....

I'VE GOT 3 FANS! YAY!

Dannygirl
09-05-2006, 02:45 PM
That's very cool

Penguinz
09-08-2006, 04:03 AM
Why thank you. I still need to update it.

Graw..

I shall do that sometime this week... mostly this weekend.... I have school, don't blame me..

It's not like I WANT to go... I am forced....

TealAnimal
09-10-2006, 04:40 AM
i dont get it no one posts about how good my story is! your lucky!

Penguinz
09-10-2006, 04:49 AM
Lol! Let me read your story, I will comment on it.

PunkGuitarQueen
09-10-2006, 04:52 AM
Woo, awesome! I can't wait to hear more :D

~Queen~
:wave2:

TealAnimal
09-10-2006, 05:48 AM
Lol! Let me read your story, I will comment on it.

mines called Shorty but the title says: Shorty the story of a lead dog in the Iditarod race...




the Iditarod race is a race in Alaska just to let you know

Penguinz
09-10-2006, 06:18 AM
Thanks GuitarQueen!

Okay I will look.

BnyKty
09-10-2006, 01:10 PM
Interesting story :).

Penguinz
09-11-2006, 02:31 AM
Interesting in a good way or bad lol

BnyKty
09-12-2006, 07:41 PM
In a good way, of course :D! Keep writing, please xD there's nothing new yet!

Jackalope
09-13-2006, 12:11 AM
It's pretty cool, I think i know where it's going.. Reminds me of a Disney Channel Movie..

Penguinz
09-14-2006, 04:14 AM
Heeheee, sorta. Not exactly but a little....

Sorry i haven't updated been busy. I promise I will update by Sunday

Penguinz
09-18-2006, 05:17 AM
Bumpish

Sorry I haven't updated.... been very busy