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pixiebuttercup
09-04-2006, 12:56 AM
Brittany:ah this is the life!
Nettie:yeah this is so realxing !
Brittany:i wish we could stay here all day !
Nettie:me too
brittany and nettie were verry rich they got everything the wanted they were smart pretty cared for the inviorment everyone thought there were simply perfect ! everyone wanted to be there friend the pretty much had their life all planed out there houses were right next to each other they lived in bell air and across the street lived some verry famos ppl there houses were amazing they were Bel- Air Mansions ! but the worst was yet to come
Brittany:ok so the first day of school is tomorrow ! we must go shcool shopping
Nettie:YAY!
Brittany:ok lets go !
they go into there limo and ask their showfer to take them to the mall
The Limo ride
brittany listened to her iPod while nettie watch TV and Brittany was singing the lyrcis To Barbie Girl by Aqua
Brittany:"I'm A barbie girl In a Barbie World When Your Plastic It's Fantastic ! "
Nettie:Shut Up ! brittany !
Brittany:sorry
Brittanylalalalalala are we there yet !!
Showfer ( lets call him howard :) )
Howard:not yet just five more min.
brittany and nettie watch TV untill they got to the mall
The Mall!!
Brittany: were here!
Nettie: i think i can see that
Brittany: right , so what do you want to do ?
Nettie: Hmm, Lets Go Eat !!
Brittany: Ok ! where at ?
Nettie: hmm what about Subway ?!
Brittany: ok
Subway
Brittany and nettie walked in the mall and then walked to Subway and when they entered eveyonev was crowding them
A Girl: Can Ihave your AutoGraph !!!
Brittany: uh sure
Brittany signs girls book
Brittany: tere you go :)
Girl AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! !!!!
brittany covers her ears
Brittany: ok this is weird
Nettie: I know I just signed some ones For head @_@
Brittany: ok ..... this is weird i am scared hold me :(
Nettie: uh no thanks
Brittany: ok :(
Nettie: ok lets go try to order
Brittany an nettie shuved there way to the cash regester
and they ordered
Subway dude (lests call him murl :) ) can i take your order ?
Brittany: ill have a one foot long sub with mayo and turkey and everything else :)
Nettie: Me to :)
Murl any thing else ?
Brittany nope
Nettie zippo
Murl your total is 8.12$
Brittany pulls money out of her purse Brittany: here you go :)
Murl thanks for coming to Subway heres your food
Brittany Thanks :)
The Table
Brittany and nettie pull out there food and unwrap then and start to eat Brittany:( with her mouth full ) mmmm mis ms moom mood
Nettie: don't talk with your mouth full plz its getting annoying you dont want to end up lke ellie !
Brittany: OMG I DO NOT WANT TO BE LIKE ELLIE !! AHHHH !! ok ok sorry well wat i was saying was mmm.. this is soo good :)
Nettie: thank you and yes it is super good !
Brittany: OMG I like Forgot to tell you about ansley and patrick !!
Nettie: OMG Like What !!
Brittany: there ... there .. going out !!
Nettie: OMG!!
Brittany: I know ! they finally got together !
Nettie: yeah finally !
Ansley And Patrick were like there best friends Besides themselves they were all like brothers and sisters ! but ansley and patrick were All A's and B's ppl but nettie and Brittany Were all A's surprisling so was Brittany :) Brittany and Nettie were finished eating then the jaintor gave Brittany a note and the janitor said : its from some guy overe there oh nvm he left
Brittany opened the note with nettie right next to her and it said : Dear,Brittany yes i know you i have been in your class since preschool and we always have had the same class together you may have not noticed me but i've noticed you meet me at our new school at lunch at the table farthest to the exit doors ill be wearing a green polo shirt and please try to keep netie behind if you can i know you to are like sisters but if you could leave her with Ansley and Patrick pretty please
love,
your lover
Brittany: ok............... thats weird hmm.. who oh who could it be .. oh i know ansley and patrick should know !!
Nettie: Yah brittany cell them!
Brittany pulls out her SLVR (this is my real phone in rl :) ) and dilled ansleys cell ( phone not jail cell )
Ansley: hello?
Brittany: Hey Ans It's Britt
Ansley:Hi!! wassup ??
Brittany: oh nothing well after me an nettie are done shopping you were sending our limo over for you and patrick ok ?
Ansley: ok :) bye
Brittany: Byes !
Nettie: OK TIME TO GO SHOPING !!!
Brittany: OH YEAH first stop limited too !
Nettie: Whoo!
Brittany littally ran to limited too they almosed missed the store

Limitted too
Brittany grabbed everything in her size and that was everything in the store ..
On the other hand Nettie was looking at what she liked and found her size and that was almost everything to and sat down so she could see brittany's clothes on her
brittany came out with the most beautiful dress on it was black with dimond's on it ( nettie knew she was going to replace those fakes with real ones Brittany: So what do you think ?
Nettie i love it brittany ! you look amazing !
Brittany: Aww thanks i bet you will too!
Brittany went back inside the dressing room and tried on everything else and she looked amazing in all of them so she bought them all and sat down and waited for nettie
Nettie came out wearing a shirt and pants and boots She looked so cool
Nettie: Soooooooo?
Brittany: oh my gosh nettie you look so cool !! you know we should both wear that on the first day of school !
Nettie: oh m gosh like totally !
nettie went back inside and changed and she bought every thing to
nettie and brittany went into the rest of the stores and bought one of everything at least they did not but the building ! then they got in the limo and brittany got out her SLVR and called ansley
Brittany: Hi Ans its britt!
Ansley: OMG Hi !
Brittany: yeah ok well were sending the limo for you and patrick ok ? ok byes :) ill call Patrick !
Ansley: Ok Byes !
Brittany hanged up and called patrick
Patirck: Hello ?
Brittany: Hi patrick i am sending the limo for you and ansley to come to my houe ok ?
Patrick: ok why ?
Brittany: well i got a note from this one dude and i think you would know who it was so do you mind ?
Patrick : No not at all thats weird tho about the note I'd be scared if i were you heh
Brittany: why ?
Patrick: Because it could be robert !
Nettie: Brittany get off the phone were here
Brittany: Oh well i got to go see you here :)
Patrick : Ok bye
Brittany: Bye
The limo was sent to Ansley's And Patricks house
Patrick: hi ansley
Ansley: Hey How are you today ?
Patrick: good and yourself ?
Ansley: Great do you know whay we are going to brittanys house because she had to get off the phone .
Patrick: she wanted us to help her figure out a note someone at the mall gave her
Ansley: oh ok oh m gosh were'er here already weird
Patrick : wow howard did you go super fast ? or something ??
Howard: no you guys live on the same street ..
Patrick: Oh yeah i forgot well thx howard
Ansley : Yah thanks howard !
Howard : Any time :)
Ansley and patrick walked up to Brittany's house and Miss.Antalisa (a made ) answered the door and said: good afternoon patrick,ansley how are you today ?
ansley and Patrick together: good
Miss.Antalisa: Good Good Miss.Reid And Miss.Fritz are upsairs
Patrick: Thaks Miss.Antalisa :)
Miss.Antalisa: Would you like anythink to eat ? or drink ?
Patrick: No thanks Miss.Antalisa
Patrick and Ansley went upstairs to brittany & ansley luckly Brittany and Ansley were in their secret room witch was only on the second floor they have a 5 story house @_@ they forgot about the elvator so they used the stairs they went through the closet ansley has never heard of the secret room so she said Ansley:Um whay are we in here ??
Patrick: you'll see
Patrick pulled back the close and there was a door........
Patrick opened the door and there was this great room all colorful and fuzzy It was totally The coolest room in the world and Brittany and Nettie were sitting at the table re-reading the note untill britany saw Ansley and patrick at the door .
Brittany: Hi Ans Hi Patrick
Ansley said nothing she was just amazed she has never seen this room before
Patrick: Hi Brittany I guess Ansley has never seen this room
Brittany: Nope i wanted you to show her ....... um ansley????
are you there
Ansley: OMG THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brittany: Thank you :)
Ansley went to look around
Ansley: OOOOOOHHHHH There's a bathroom!!!!!!!!!!!
Brittany: Three
Ansley : WOW
Ansley looked around more while nettie brittany & patrick look at the note
Patrick : OK.... Let's look at that note
Brittany: ok nettie can you please hand me the note
Nettie: hold on ill make copies for all of us
Nettie cane back with the copies and haneded them out
Patrick sat on the coouch
Patrick: Hmmm,just as i thought ....
Brittany: WHAT!!!!????
Patrick: it was robert who wrote it
Ansley: OMG THERE'S A ROOM WITH MY PIC'S ALL OVER THE WALL
brittany: yeah that's your room if you diden't know
Ansley: OMG NO WAY!!!!
ansley came out of her room and sat down next to patrick
Ansley: ok let's figure out this letter...................hmmm.....Robert !
Patrick: yes it is
Ansley: i am so smart !
Brittany: Uh...no comment...
nettie: well.....um...yeah i got to go with brittany on that one .
Patrick: me too
Ansley: ok so what should we do ?
Brittany: Let's go in the pool ?!
Ansley: OK
nettie: i do need a tan.
Patrick: love to
They all got into their bathing suits nettie got a tan ansley,brittany,patrick were playing marco polo
Ansley: MARCO!!!
Brittany&patrick: polo
they kept playing then it got late brittany asked
Brittany: You guy's want to spend the night ?
Ansley: ok let me call my mom
Patrick: sure
Ansley took out her cell phone
Ansley: mom can i spend the night at brittany's ?
Ansleys mom : OK but who will get your stuff because you know i can't drive.
A:hold on let me ask Brittany who will get my stuff ?
B: Howard :)
A: mom howard will get them
Am: ok
A: bye mom
Am: bye honey
Cup note: as you can see i dont wan to type out their names so i am putting their first letter but for ansley's mom i put Am for ansley's mom

A: she said yeah but can howard pick up my stuff ??
B: Of Corse ! he can pick up patricks stuff to
P: my mom said yeah
B: ok ill send howard :)
brittany pickes up a pretty fuzzy orange phone
Howard: hello ?
brittany: hi howard can you pick up ansley's and patrick's stuff ?
H: yes madem
B: thanks howard your the best !
H: why thank you miss.reid good bye :)
B: bye
howard got ansleys and patricks stuff and came back
Howard : here you go miss.ansley
ansley: Thanks howard!
howard no problem miss.ansley :)
Haward: here you go mr.patrick
patrick:thanks howard
howard :your welcome mr.patrick
brittany: ok guys lets go to patricks room to talk is that ok patrick ?
Patrick: yeah sure :)
all of brittanys friends had there own room in her house
Patrick: ok so what to talk about ?
Brittany: ok patrick so tell me more about this robert dude
Patrick: ok ..well he has always been in our class ever since preschool!
and he has brown hair...
Nettie: EWWW Brown hair !!
Patrick: whats wrong with brown hair ? Brittany has brown hair
Nettie:no she has Burnette hair !
patrick: there is a difference?
Nettie: DUH!!!
patrick: Oh well he is BRUNETTE hair ..
Nettie: thank you
Patrick: green eyes 5ft 5in. braces
Brittany:i dont remember him
PAtrick: do you nettie ?
Nettie: nope :)
Patrick: i didn't think y'all did
ansley has been searching the house
Ansley: BRITTANY YOU HAVE A POOL IN YOU'RE ROOM ?!?!
Brittany: YEA ANS NOW CAN YOZU COME BACK DOWN HERE!
Ansley:Coming !
ansley ran to patricks bedroom wehrere everyone was
Ansley: Here !
Brittany: good now do you know robert ?
Ansley: Brittany i've known alot of roberts ! what's his last name ?
Brittany: Patrick?
Patrick: Vogle
Ansley: Oh him ! yeah i dated him a long time ago i broke up with him
Brittany: OMG no way !
Ansley: WAY!
Nettie: Brittany stand him up dont got to where the note said !
brittany: i think he deseves it !
Nettie,Patrick,and ansley all together: Yeah !
they all went to sleep in there own rooms excpt for ansley she kept looking arount her room and went to her closet and saw all of these preety clothes she almost screamed the were just so prety and they were in her sizie ! all se said was
Ansley: wow
she looked at the tag of the clothes to see where they were from and it said Made Special For Ansley Woods

bestroyal
09-04-2006, 03:18 AM
whats the worst whats the worst1 let me guess they go poor! no wait they move away! i cant guess! more more more !

pixiebuttercup
09-04-2006, 03:19 AM
nope :) it's a secret :)

bestroyal
09-04-2006, 05:01 PM
love it i wonder what happends at subway ?

pixiebuttercup
09-04-2006, 05:15 PM
hmm .. .......

bestroyal
09-05-2006, 11:06 PM
awesome i wonder what the note says i think i allready know @_@

ariellover4life
09-07-2006, 02:59 AM
please write more

pixiebuttercup
09-07-2006, 08:03 PM
ok i will asap :) i wish more ppl would post !! lol

pixiebuttercup
09-09-2006, 01:21 AM
addeed toooooo shoooort

bestroyal
09-09-2006, 01:53 AM
aww i wished your key boared did not break more more more!

pixiebuttercup
09-10-2006, 11:25 PM
my keyubored is working !

bestroyal
09-10-2006, 11:33 PM
now that kEYBOARD works i think it is the right time to say this but... ADD MORE MORE MORE!

pixiebuttercup
09-10-2006, 11:37 PM
hmm ill think about it lol ok

ariellover4life
09-11-2006, 12:04 AM
cool!story

Proracer1
09-11-2006, 12:18 AM
Add more more more please and thank you

pixiebuttercup
09-11-2006, 09:19 PM
ok i am hoing to add right now brb !

bestroyal
09-11-2006, 09:40 PM
more more more..

pixiebuttercup
09-11-2006, 09:50 PM
More More More .... well if i get more ppl to post then i will add lol

Proracer1
09-15-2006, 05:18 PM
More more more! (Who gave her that note who who who!) sorry about that

pixiebuttercup
09-15-2006, 07:33 PM
lol it's ok writeing more right now :)

bestroyal
09-15-2006, 08:42 PM
yo arA 5 STAR WOOT WOOT :) SO PPL DO LIKE IT! MORE MORE!

Proracer1
09-16-2006, 01:22 PM
I voted 5 star because i want to read more more more lol

pixiebuttercup
09-16-2006, 08:20 PM
lol sorry i did not add but i am going to right now :)

Proracer1
10-16-2006, 11:26 PM
Wow i never noticed how long its been

pixiebuttercup
10-16-2006, 11:32 PM
lol i think ive ben adding while u wernt on

Bump!!

Btw:i Added !

bestroyal
10-23-2006, 11:43 AM
Uh i am confused i think maybe you should put in chapters becuase i just can not figure ot where the new part you added starts

pixiebuttercup
10-23-2006, 09:17 PM
ok i will do that asap :)

Danceteamer_15
10-23-2006, 11:05 PM
Good job! Keep writing!

pixiebuttercup
10-24-2006, 11:50 PM
thank You so much :)

pixiebuttercup
11-04-2006, 02:00 PM
i added ! to my story