Tris-Remix
09-02-2006, 01:55 AM
Hi! I decided to make a VMK story about a character around a land in VMK. Hope you enjoy! it's my first adventure story.
Chapter 1:Magic Kingdom
Story teller (me): One day, there was a young lady named Esmeralda was walking. She was no ordinary girl. she had magic powers! While she was walking, she saw a sign above her called Magic Kingdom. She walked in and saw that she was in a place called the Esplanade. she saw many signs and she saw lots of people who had name tags that were named Guest. Esmeralda asked why they had that name. Lets see what the Guests say
Emeralda: Hi! I'm new
Guest111111: Cool, we are too, how come you have a regular name
Esmeralda: I don't know? Why do you have Guest on your name?
Guest111111: Magic Kingdom wants to approve our name.
Esmeralda: Oh! It says I'm in a land called Main Street
Guest111111: Yes, there are 6 different lands
Esmeralda: I'll just Explore
Guets111111: ok, bye Esmeralda
Esmeralda: - Waves -
Chapter 2: Sci-Fi Dine In
Story Teller: Esmeralda saw a bunch of cars and flashing lights. She went into the place which was called Sci-Fi Dine In. She saw four cars that were different colours and she also saw the Hollywood sign. Esmeralda sat in a Blue Car. She got some popcorn and a movie called Pirates of the Carribean 2 was showing. Then and boy came and sat next to her and asked her something. Lets see what he said
Boy: Hey girl
Esmeralda: Hi!
Boy: Your cute
Esmeralada: Thanks... I guess
Boy: Are you taken
Esmeralda: Your a bad boy - takes out magic wand and turns him into a monkey -
Esmeralda: My my, everyone is doing that here, they must be monkeys.
Story Teller: All the monkeys ran to Adventureland
Esmeralda: Ah! peace and quiet
Chapter 3: Town Square
Story Teller: when Esmeralda was done watching the movie, she saw a place named Town Square. She saw a picture of a mouse's head on the wall made out of grass. She knew it was Mickey Mouse because she always remembered the head. Then she sat down and said somethinfg silly. Lets see what silly thing she said.
Esmeralda: Why is this called Town Square when it's a circle?
Everyone: - Laughing -
Girl: That's the joike, lots of people think it's a square
Esmeralda: Oh! That's silly
Girl: But it's funny
Story Teller: Esmeralda walked to the trash can and threw her popcorn bucket in
Trashcan: Hey! why did you do that?
Esmeralda: What!! You talk! your a trashcan tha people use to put garbage in
Trashcan: I'm Push! the Maigc Trashcan
Esmeralda: Oh, well hi Push
Push: Hi! I feel so sorry for me
Esmeralda: Why?
Push: I use to have an article in the Magic Kingdom Newsletter called "Push Trash talk" but now it replaced with "Yavn Speaks"
Esmeralda: Oh, well maybe next week you'll have your spot.
Push: Thanks
Chapter 4:Main Street
Story teller: After talking to push, Esmeralda saw a place called Main Street.
She saw a big balloons that looked like Mickey Ears. She sat down an thought this was a beautiful place. Then she saw some boxes and wondered what was inside. Lets see what was inside
Esmeralda: Hmm... What are Boxes doinng in Main Street, I better throw them out.
Story teller: Esmeralda went to the boxes and picked one up and when she was about to throw them out, she herd crying
Esmeralda: A box is crying?
Esmeralda:- opens box and sees it's a baby -
Baby: - cries -
Esmeralda: What's wrong?
Baby: Me have no mommy or dada because they left me on Main Street in a Box
Esmeralda:Aww :(
Baby: Me so poor, can me have your stuff?
Esmeralda: How could you! I bet all you babies do that - takes out magic wand and turns the baby into a monkey -
Story Teller: All the babies did that, so Esmeralda turned them into monkeys, They ran off to Adventureland.
Esmeralda: Ah! No more boxes.
Chapter 5:Street Party Music Game
Story Teller: After turning the babies into monkeys, Esmeralda wanted to Dance, then she went into the Street Party Music Game. She started danicing to the other people's tunes and wanted to make her own tune. She used the shapes in the Music Mix Machine and played her song. Lets see what some people said.
Esmeralda: Hi everyone
Everyone: Hi Esmeralda! nice song
Esmeralda: Thanks
Everyone: Woot Woot!
Boy: Boo! Boo!
Esmeralda: My My your a mean boy - takes out wand and turns him into a monkey -
Story Teller: Esmeralda played songs for everyone and when some people said boo, they turned into a monkey and ran off to Adventureland
Chapter 6: VMK Central
Story Teller: Esmeralda decided to sit down and relax, so she went into VMK Central. She wanted to learn about Magic Kingdom, so she read the kiosk. She was amazed of all the stuff that she never knew of. She also wanted a camera, so she bought one. Lets see what happened next
Esmeralda: Wow! I love this music, hey mister, can I take a picture of you
Piano Guy: Sure
Esmeralda: - takes picture -
Esmeralda: Hey kids, can I take a picture with you?
Kid: Sure
Esmeralda: - takes picture -
Story Teller: Esmeralda read about 50 hidden mickeys, so she ran all about finding them and when she came back, she got some gold furniture. She was happy anbd told the others about it. The others quickly found all too.
Chapter 7: Central Plaza
Story Teller: Esmeralda wnet to Central Plaza and was sitting on the bench. Then Donald Duck came up to her, lets see what they said
Esmeralda: Hi Donald
Donald: Hi Esmeralda
Esmeralda: How you doing
Donald: Good, hey you want to see my place
Esmeralda: Sure
Story Teller: Donald and Esmeralda went to the building, which was Donald's house and sat down and talked about the Magic Kingdom. Soon they looked out the window and saw some fighting. esmeralda and Donald quickly went outside and asked what happened.
Boy: she's a ### and wont be my ###
Girl: Well he's not ### and wont give me his ###
Esmeralda: My My, You too are both bad - takes out magic wand and turns into monkey -
Esmeralda: There we go
Chapter 8: Castle Forecourt
~To Be Continued~
Chapter 1:Magic Kingdom
Story teller (me): One day, there was a young lady named Esmeralda was walking. She was no ordinary girl. she had magic powers! While she was walking, she saw a sign above her called Magic Kingdom. She walked in and saw that she was in a place called the Esplanade. she saw many signs and she saw lots of people who had name tags that were named Guest. Esmeralda asked why they had that name. Lets see what the Guests say
Emeralda: Hi! I'm new
Guest111111: Cool, we are too, how come you have a regular name
Esmeralda: I don't know? Why do you have Guest on your name?
Guest111111: Magic Kingdom wants to approve our name.
Esmeralda: Oh! It says I'm in a land called Main Street
Guest111111: Yes, there are 6 different lands
Esmeralda: I'll just Explore
Guets111111: ok, bye Esmeralda
Esmeralda: - Waves -
Chapter 2: Sci-Fi Dine In
Story Teller: Esmeralda saw a bunch of cars and flashing lights. She went into the place which was called Sci-Fi Dine In. She saw four cars that were different colours and she also saw the Hollywood sign. Esmeralda sat in a Blue Car. She got some popcorn and a movie called Pirates of the Carribean 2 was showing. Then and boy came and sat next to her and asked her something. Lets see what he said
Boy: Hey girl
Esmeralda: Hi!
Boy: Your cute
Esmeralada: Thanks... I guess
Boy: Are you taken
Esmeralda: Your a bad boy - takes out magic wand and turns him into a monkey -
Esmeralda: My my, everyone is doing that here, they must be monkeys.
Story Teller: All the monkeys ran to Adventureland
Esmeralda: Ah! peace and quiet
Chapter 3: Town Square
Story Teller: when Esmeralda was done watching the movie, she saw a place named Town Square. She saw a picture of a mouse's head on the wall made out of grass. She knew it was Mickey Mouse because she always remembered the head. Then she sat down and said somethinfg silly. Lets see what silly thing she said.
Esmeralda: Why is this called Town Square when it's a circle?
Everyone: - Laughing -
Girl: That's the joike, lots of people think it's a square
Esmeralda: Oh! That's silly
Girl: But it's funny
Story Teller: Esmeralda walked to the trash can and threw her popcorn bucket in
Trashcan: Hey! why did you do that?
Esmeralda: What!! You talk! your a trashcan tha people use to put garbage in
Trashcan: I'm Push! the Maigc Trashcan
Esmeralda: Oh, well hi Push
Push: Hi! I feel so sorry for me
Esmeralda: Why?
Push: I use to have an article in the Magic Kingdom Newsletter called "Push Trash talk" but now it replaced with "Yavn Speaks"
Esmeralda: Oh, well maybe next week you'll have your spot.
Push: Thanks
Chapter 4:Main Street
Story teller: After talking to push, Esmeralda saw a place called Main Street.
She saw a big balloons that looked like Mickey Ears. She sat down an thought this was a beautiful place. Then she saw some boxes and wondered what was inside. Lets see what was inside
Esmeralda: Hmm... What are Boxes doinng in Main Street, I better throw them out.
Story teller: Esmeralda went to the boxes and picked one up and when she was about to throw them out, she herd crying
Esmeralda: A box is crying?
Esmeralda:- opens box and sees it's a baby -
Baby: - cries -
Esmeralda: What's wrong?
Baby: Me have no mommy or dada because they left me on Main Street in a Box
Esmeralda:Aww :(
Baby: Me so poor, can me have your stuff?
Esmeralda: How could you! I bet all you babies do that - takes out magic wand and turns the baby into a monkey -
Story Teller: All the babies did that, so Esmeralda turned them into monkeys, They ran off to Adventureland.
Esmeralda: Ah! No more boxes.
Chapter 5:Street Party Music Game
Story Teller: After turning the babies into monkeys, Esmeralda wanted to Dance, then she went into the Street Party Music Game. She started danicing to the other people's tunes and wanted to make her own tune. She used the shapes in the Music Mix Machine and played her song. Lets see what some people said.
Esmeralda: Hi everyone
Everyone: Hi Esmeralda! nice song
Esmeralda: Thanks
Everyone: Woot Woot!
Boy: Boo! Boo!
Esmeralda: My My your a mean boy - takes out wand and turns him into a monkey -
Story Teller: Esmeralda played songs for everyone and when some people said boo, they turned into a monkey and ran off to Adventureland
Chapter 6: VMK Central
Story Teller: Esmeralda decided to sit down and relax, so she went into VMK Central. She wanted to learn about Magic Kingdom, so she read the kiosk. She was amazed of all the stuff that she never knew of. She also wanted a camera, so she bought one. Lets see what happened next
Esmeralda: Wow! I love this music, hey mister, can I take a picture of you
Piano Guy: Sure
Esmeralda: - takes picture -
Esmeralda: Hey kids, can I take a picture with you?
Kid: Sure
Esmeralda: - takes picture -
Story Teller: Esmeralda read about 50 hidden mickeys, so she ran all about finding them and when she came back, she got some gold furniture. She was happy anbd told the others about it. The others quickly found all too.
Chapter 7: Central Plaza
Story Teller: Esmeralda wnet to Central Plaza and was sitting on the bench. Then Donald Duck came up to her, lets see what they said
Esmeralda: Hi Donald
Donald: Hi Esmeralda
Esmeralda: How you doing
Donald: Good, hey you want to see my place
Esmeralda: Sure
Story Teller: Donald and Esmeralda went to the building, which was Donald's house and sat down and talked about the Magic Kingdom. Soon they looked out the window and saw some fighting. esmeralda and Donald quickly went outside and asked what happened.
Boy: she's a ### and wont be my ###
Girl: Well he's not ### and wont give me his ###
Esmeralda: My My, You too are both bad - takes out magic wand and turns into monkey -
Esmeralda: There we go
Chapter 8: Castle Forecourt
~To Be Continued~