View Full Version : The IM (The Sequel)


Danceteamer_15
09-01-2006, 08:21 PM
This is the sequel to my first story The IM here is the link to it: http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=75196

Chapter 1: Brianana's back and bad

Prettyandopoualr000: Hey conner
DudeMan222: oh hey brianana
DudeMan222: so how is ur boy friend?
Prettyandopoualr000: boy friend? oh that he and i never went on a date after he was all stupid to me.
DudeMan222: oh
Prettyandopoualr000: so how is tiff?
DudeMan222: not talking to me
Prettyandopoualr000: :( im sorry
DudeMan222: not your fault
Prettyandopoualr000: so.. are u going to the welcome back to school dance?
DudeMan222: yea i wish i had a someone to go with
Prettyandopoualr000: me too
DudeMan222: hey brianana?
Prettyandopoualr000: yea?
DudeMan222: do u want to go to the dance with me?
Prettyandopoualr000: um... sure! meet u there ok?
DudeMan222: ok see u there

~~~DudeMan222 has signed off~~~

Prettyandopoualr000: my plan is working better than i thought

Chapter 2: Eagle?

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed on~~~

Eagleeyeguy205: hey tiff sorry i wasnt there at starbucks by the time i got there u werent there
Tiffgrl151: so u never came?
Eagleeyeguy205:: yea im sorry
Tiffgrl151: omg
Eagleeyeguy205:: wat?
Tiffgrl151: i just made a big fool of my self infront of this guy
Eagleeyeguy205:: oh
Tiffgrl151: so are u going to the dance?
Eagleeyeguy205:: :huh8:
Tiffgrl151: the back to school dance
Eagleeyeguy205:: oh yea that im going dont have anyone to go with though
Tiffgrl151: will u go with me?
Eagleeyeguy205:: uh.. sure!!
Tiffgrl151: ill wear a bright green dress
Eagleeyeguy205:: ill wear a tux with a dark green bow
Tiffgrl151: ok ttyl see u there

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed off~~~

Chapter 3: The new guy

Sparrowslover101 would u like to accept a message from <3school?
(yes she did)
<3school: hey fafa!
Sparrowslover101: do i know u?
<3school: lol fa u dont remember me?
Sparrowslover101: ?
<3school: its me! don!
Sparrowslover101: don? OMG Don!! How r u? how is the fourth muskecteer who moved away?
<3school: Moving back!!!!
Sparrowslover101: YAY!!! I need ur help major!
<3school: wats up?
Sparrowslover101: con likes braiananaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa now and tiff likes this dude that we never met
<3school: i though con liked tiff?
Sparrowslover101: LIKED not anymore :(
<3school: ok i will call u ASAP for my plan
Sparrowslover101: ty don!

~~~<3school has signed off~~~

Author's Note: Because of votes I will add another chapter, but it will be at a major cliffhanger!!! Also everyone decided to meet at a restraunt first instead and I will just be writing normal.

Chapter 4: De La Finco

Everyone was ready to go to the high class resturant De La Finco, Conner and Brainana were already sitting down and chatting, (while Brainana was bored at of her mind because Conner was talking all geeky) while Tiff came a little late. Finally she got there, in her beatiful dress, and saw a blonde, looking about her age with a tux, and a dark green bow tie. She bravely asked him, "Are you eagleeyeguy205?" He replied, "No, but he is." And eagleeyeguy205 step from behind him......................................


Authors Note: Don't forget Im writing normal still!

Chapter 5: Don't Please!

Now, why don't we go back to con and brianana! (will go back to tiff soon)
(Conner kept rambling on about stuff like from before)
"Conner what are u talking about?"
"Sorry I just am kind of a geek."
"Kind of? you are so annoying! You just keep rambling on and on! Ugh this is not why I ruined tiff!"
"What did u just say?"
"Uh.. nothing never mind lets just go...."
Conner pays the bill and walks off with brianana.

(Now lets go back to tiff)

(Don't forget we are waiting to see who eagleeyeguy205 is)

"Hello im officer Marshall for the police department."
"Huh?"
"You asked who eagleeyeguy205 is right?"
"Oh no...."

Author's Note: Sorry Will get back on when I can!

BMarie521
09-01-2006, 10:31 PM
Brianna is EVIL!!! Good stories. :D

CrazyAlly
09-01-2006, 10:31 PM
That's awesome! I just love IM stories...especially with all the drama. lol. Cant wait for more :D

DizVMK
09-01-2006, 10:52 PM
I love IM Stories, I think TTYL is the best, this is the 2nd best though!!

CubbyDoggie
09-01-2006, 10:57 PM
I must read more...

Tris-Remix
09-01-2006, 10:59 PM
Yay! A sequel! Everyone likes your story. Aww... i'm not good at stories, but I'll keep on writing!

Danceteamer_15
09-01-2006, 11:28 PM
Cool I love your stories the are great! Im still thinking about the next chapter. All i know is the end. LOL im still thinking.................... I will add one more chapter for today then maybe like three tomorrow

TwistedPink
09-01-2006, 11:43 PM
Brianna! Gosh, She's Evil like a Squirrel -_-
Lol :D More, More, More, More! Hehe..

PrincessWall
09-02-2006, 12:06 AM
YAY!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! WRITE MORE, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:):):)
~~~~Wall~~~~

OstrichSam
09-02-2006, 12:17 AM
Whoopee! A sequel!
When this is over, you should write a prequel! LOL jk.
Unless you want to. :P

Danceteamer_15
09-02-2006, 03:33 AM
Well this will be the last story, but I found a story that I started and it was pretty good so i'm going to do that.

Im writing a new story that just came to me. It titled We Have History. Check it out!!

KenzieIsLove
09-02-2006, 05:45 PM
are you going to finish this story?

liljesi
09-04-2006, 02:09 AM
ok.. i will definitely check out your new story.. but promise me you won't me leave hanging with this one, ok?
haha =)
its awesome by the way...


-liljesi

Danceteamer_15
09-07-2006, 01:37 AM
O, Im sorry everyone that haven't been working on any stories! School is giving me much much homework! I will write when I can!

Ok, I have decided to change the end totally. An email that I got totally inspired me.

SherrytheFairy
09-09-2006, 07:44 PM
AH!! FINISH...NOW!! ;_; Or at least another chapter. ^^

Danceteamer_15
09-09-2006, 08:00 PM
I'll work on it soon!

CubbyDoggie
09-10-2006, 01:23 AM
Are we ever gonna add anything else?

Danceteamer_15
09-12-2006, 02:05 AM
Ok, I will add one more but later

I know its lame the new chapter, but ppl keep bugging me!

bestroyal
09-12-2006, 11:37 AM
dance can i tel you the truth the chaptor is boring if you need any help with your stories you can ask me
or tmkttt

Danceteamer_15
09-16-2006, 03:48 PM
Author's Note: I have decided to not finish this story right now. I will come back to it later, bc i dont want to end it with anger.

niclk
09-19-2006, 12:49 AM
? i think you should let bestroyal help you with your story ?

VMKJen
09-19-2006, 01:07 AM
i read all your stories!!

Danceteamer_15
09-20-2006, 03:31 AM
Its not that I need help (which I kind of do) its just that ive got school, homework, trying to stay in orchestra, and trying to have a social life. i just dont really have alot of time right now. also plz EVERYONE dont send me stuff on how bad my work is. plz just send me nice stuff i dont like fellign down. thats another reason why im not writing atm. sorry all, will send a message to all the ppl that post nice things when i finish the story

BMarie521
09-20-2006, 03:41 AM
It's still good. And I can wait until you write more, even if it might be in a year lol

Danceteamer_15
09-20-2006, 03:43 AM
Dont worry everyone! I know this doesnt sound good now, but I promise it will be done by Christmas! now i have to get to work, its really doesnt help being sick for two days on my work load!

jessicafanbeauty
09-22-2006, 10:09 PM
PLEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSEEEEE write more :D

VMKJen
09-22-2006, 11:54 PM
by christmas :(

Danceteamer_15
09-28-2006, 01:47 AM
First Im going to write we have History then the sequel to that, then I will finish this. I will not be doing anything this weekend.

jessicafanbeauty
09-28-2006, 01:52 AM
lol have fun! :) and i cant wait to see what happens in the story

Danceteamer_15
09-30-2006, 01:44 AM
Ok.. I want everyone's opinion. Should I either.... 1. Add one chapter, but leave it compelety at an absolute cliff hanger or 2. Wait longer and finish it all up. Please post soon!

jessicafanbeauty
09-30-2006, 01:58 AM
cliff hanger

Danceteamer_15
09-30-2006, 01:59 AM
Here is the score:

Cliffhanger: 3
Wait and End: 1

BMarie521
09-30-2006, 01:26 PM
Cliff hanger

bestroyal
09-30-2006, 01:39 PM
wait i want to hear the end :) cliff hanger i will just be dieing for more :)

VMKJen
09-30-2006, 02:05 PM
add a chapter

Danceteamer_15
10-06-2006, 01:23 AM
Ok added the cliffhanger!

bestroyal
10-08-2006, 05:33 PM
WHO IS HE! WHOIS HE!@ THIS CLIFF AHNGER S AWESOME when you sadi you where doing a cliff hanger i never expected this!


~ this is also on my things to do list to re read your story ~

TwistedPink
10-08-2006, 05:37 PM
Is it Conner....................? @_@
.-. Gah! More...More... Like bestroyal said,
WHO IS HE?!

jessicafanbeauty
10-08-2006, 05:39 PM
Omg When is it gonna be finished??! :)

Danceteamer_15
10-10-2006, 02:34 PM
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought I did a bad cliffhanger LOL. I don't know when ending coming to telll you the truth..............

VMKJen
10-12-2006, 08:13 PM
omg keep adding chapters!!

Danceteamer_15
10-13-2006, 01:52 AM
Like i said its a cliffhanger! Sadly i will have to keep you on the edge of your seat for awhile, then I will end it!

BMarie521
10-13-2006, 02:38 PM
Awww.....that'll take FOREVER! Oh...well...I can wait...

Danceteamer_15
10-26-2006, 03:45 AM
Ok, changed my mind again. Im going to end it soon. How about before Thanksgiving? Maybe before Novemeber 15th? It better than Christmas?

MickeyForMayor
10-27-2006, 08:27 PM
great story!! i need to know more!!!!

Danceteamer_15
11-02-2006, 03:21 PM
Hmm Im still thinking when to end this. Well first I will write it on word then paste it, but I promise it will be in this month and soon!

pixiebuttercup
11-04-2006, 08:05 PM
ADD PLZ ! ! i absolutly love this story !!!!!!!

Danceteamer_15
11-14-2006, 04:26 AM
oK, I have decided on the final date for the end! It willl be on........... November 24, 2006! Next Friday!


EDIT: LOL I put barvely. I changed to bravely. LOL

acefalloutgirl
11-14-2006, 04:34 AM
[/QUOTE]She barvely asked him, "Are you eagleeyeguy205?" He replied, "No, but he is." And eagleeyeguy205 step from behind him......................................[/QUOTE]

Ah! I must know the rest...AHHH!! P.S - I <3 your stories!

Danceteamer_15
11-19-2006, 10:54 PM
Sorry I know I said by the 15th! Sorry! I PROMISE it will be a thanksgiving present to everyone! Because Im Thankful that people like my story.

Fairy
11-22-2006, 01:30 AM
Its awosme! well write more when your inspired! :) Because the best stories come when your ready! No Person has the same imaganation as You!
Your down too earth, A great story teller about real life.
I Usaly right fantasy stories. AWSOME!

Danceteamer_15
11-25-2006, 10:16 PM
Im sorry that I didn't finish everyone! Turns out two days before Thanksgiving and I caught a version of the stomach flu! And, Thanksgiving I woke up sat for a little while, and basically left. Will right as soon as I can! (Maybe even today) Again, SORRY!!!

PrincessWall
11-26-2006, 10:32 PM
Please write :) I still check back, even though it was two months ago when you started this sequel...
♥Wall

bestroyal
11-26-2006, 10:35 PM
Yea i still look back too :) it feel like a year >_<

AlphaKoolDude
11-30-2006, 05:25 AM
OMG OMG OMG Finish it! OMG OMG OMG
:luxhello: :luxhello:

Danceteamer_15
12-10-2006, 08:09 PM
Ok Im going to try to finish it today, but first Im just going to add the name off the chapter muahahaha!

Added some more!

BasketballFarrah
12-22-2006, 02:19 AM
I don't get the last chapter...?

Danceteamer_15
12-22-2006, 02:25 AM
btw the last chapter isnt done yet will add asap

(i addded a little bit more to clear some stuff up)

SmileyLOLkid
12-22-2006, 03:20 AM
thank you so much for finally posting this! I have been wanting to find out what all happened!

TwistedPink
01-02-2007, 06:02 AM
..
Never saw that coming. xD
She lied?!

:clover8: Twisted

Danceteamer_15
01-06-2007, 09:10 PM
Who lied huh what???