Tris-Remix
08-29-2006, 12:12 PM
Hello, it's the one and only me! Cool-Dolphin. I like reading all your stories on the forum, so I decided to make my own. I wrote this story for school and I got a good mark. I kinda changed it because I forgot a bit, but most of it's the same. It's title is Baby Friends. All the people in the story are not real, but they have real names. Hope you enjoy
In a house in a city there were 3 kids and a pet tiger. There names were Tristan, Waqas and Rachel and their tiger name was Ty. They were brothers and sister. Waqas and Tristan like playing Video Games, while Rachel and Ty spend most of the time playing with each other. One day when Waqas and Tristan and Waqas where playing Video games, Waqas felt something under the coushin and when he looked under, he found somekind of ray. They all wondered what it was. Rachel told them not to mess around with it because she was very cauitios. They all looked at it and thought it was some kind of ray. Ty suddenly jumped on Waqas, who was holding the thing and Ty accidently put on the ray thing. All of them saw a bright light! They all screamed. next thing they knew is that they were... Babies! even Ty was a baby tiger! Tristan Quickly crawled over to the ray which was on the ground and there was a stiker that read: Baby Ray. All of them were shocked. Then there mom came in and was shocked because she saw all her kids were babies. The kids started crying, so their mom had to change them and give them their bottle. Soon they stopped crying and played in the living room. They noticed their toys turned into bay be stuff. Waqas was kinda worried because he thought he was a baby forever. Tristan told him that he wouldn't be a baby forever, but he had to wait 15 years until he could drive. Waqas started crying and stopped when Rachel cheered him up. Even Ty was acting like a baby tiger and he made little kittin sounds and started playing with Rachel's hair. Soon, all of them felt tired and crawled up the stairs. There bed s turned into a big crib. They got inside and fell asleep and they had little barney toys. In there dreams, they wondered how the life of a baby would be again. The next morning, they started crying because they needed to change their diapers. There mom quickly rushed in and changed them. then they crawled downstairs and went in the kitchen. They could only eat baby food and Ty had to eat baby veggies because he didn't like meat.. None of them liked it, but they were hungry. Then they went in the living room and played with there baby toys and Ty was a bad little tiger because he messed up alot of things. Rachel wondered if hey would have to wait more longer to grow up, and then she rememebred the ray, but she forgot where it was. Then Waqas and Tristan searched and Tristan found it under the chair.Rachel saw a small piece of writing thta read: Property of the Ray Lab. The place wasn't far, so the babies crawled all the way there. They opened the door and saw a bunch of rays. None of them could reach it because they were babies. So tehy stand up on each other and put it back. Then Rachel saw something on the ground. Tristna picked it up and a sign read: Un-Baby ray. Then Ty quickly jumped on top Rachel again and they saw the same flashing light and then... They were kids again. All of them jumped and we're happy, but then someone came in. They quickly ran out and went home. They lived happily ever after. :D
Hope you enjoyed!
In a house in a city there were 3 kids and a pet tiger. There names were Tristan, Waqas and Rachel and their tiger name was Ty. They were brothers and sister. Waqas and Tristan like playing Video Games, while Rachel and Ty spend most of the time playing with each other. One day when Waqas and Tristan and Waqas where playing Video games, Waqas felt something under the coushin and when he looked under, he found somekind of ray. They all wondered what it was. Rachel told them not to mess around with it because she was very cauitios. They all looked at it and thought it was some kind of ray. Ty suddenly jumped on Waqas, who was holding the thing and Ty accidently put on the ray thing. All of them saw a bright light! They all screamed. next thing they knew is that they were... Babies! even Ty was a baby tiger! Tristan Quickly crawled over to the ray which was on the ground and there was a stiker that read: Baby Ray. All of them were shocked. Then there mom came in and was shocked because she saw all her kids were babies. The kids started crying, so their mom had to change them and give them their bottle. Soon they stopped crying and played in the living room. They noticed their toys turned into bay be stuff. Waqas was kinda worried because he thought he was a baby forever. Tristan told him that he wouldn't be a baby forever, but he had to wait 15 years until he could drive. Waqas started crying and stopped when Rachel cheered him up. Even Ty was acting like a baby tiger and he made little kittin sounds and started playing with Rachel's hair. Soon, all of them felt tired and crawled up the stairs. There bed s turned into a big crib. They got inside and fell asleep and they had little barney toys. In there dreams, they wondered how the life of a baby would be again. The next morning, they started crying because they needed to change their diapers. There mom quickly rushed in and changed them. then they crawled downstairs and went in the kitchen. They could only eat baby food and Ty had to eat baby veggies because he didn't like meat.. None of them liked it, but they were hungry. Then they went in the living room and played with there baby toys and Ty was a bad little tiger because he messed up alot of things. Rachel wondered if hey would have to wait more longer to grow up, and then she rememebred the ray, but she forgot where it was. Then Waqas and Tristan searched and Tristan found it under the chair.Rachel saw a small piece of writing thta read: Property of the Ray Lab. The place wasn't far, so the babies crawled all the way there. They opened the door and saw a bunch of rays. None of them could reach it because they were babies. So tehy stand up on each other and put it back. Then Rachel saw something on the ground. Tristna picked it up and a sign read: Un-Baby ray. Then Ty quickly jumped on top Rachel again and they saw the same flashing light and then... They were kids again. All of them jumped and we're happy, but then someone came in. They quickly ran out and went home. They lived happily ever after. :D
Hope you enjoyed!