View Full Version : Ghost Story Help(please)!


MissySW
08-21-2006, 02:23 PM
Hi all:)
Ok, so i am creating a room later today, it will be a room where ghost stories will be told....
Im not going to give that much away yet.
But I have a problem..... I dont know many....:(
Would you guys be able to post some that aren't too long please?

These stories(most of them) will be used in vmk:)
This is so appreciated,
Thank you very much
~miss

PezDude
08-21-2006, 07:51 PM
Ill try but all the story i know are long

MissySW
08-21-2006, 08:01 PM
well, i need any, but not REALLY long ones, that go on forever...

anyone have some?

MissySW
08-22-2006, 02:32 PM
daily BUMP!!!!
anyone stories??:(

AwesomeTom
08-22-2006, 02:42 PM
I have a story I told in vmk if you want it. It is pretty short. I saved it to a document, let me find it :)

MissySW
08-23-2006, 01:20 PM
cool..
still waiting for it;) lol

anyone have any please? i really need some

AwesomeTom
08-23-2006, 02:46 PM
Ok, it is sort of lame, but here it is: (And yes, the main character is tom)

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Tom took a step and waved goodbye to his lady, and jumped in his red car.
He drove down the longest way in town, it went for hours and hours.
With only a few minutes left until he arrived, a person pulled up beside.
She told him to get out of the car, or else he will pay the price.
He say "no" to her offer, and she lost her cool.
She took tom out of the car, and took him to her place.
She took the car, and ran away, and tom never saw the light of day.
He would get food, he would get water, but nothing more, nothing less.
A day, Tom tried to escape.
He ran out and away, away from that lady.
Tom always wondered why though.
On the day he got pulled over, she had a mask on.
Who or maybe what was she?
She found him running down the street, and took him again.
She pulled off her mask, and to his surprise.
It was his lady, the one he waved goodbye to.
And now his life had ended, and lady moved on to yet another boy.
She continued and continued until she had to stop.
Her time had come, and she never told her secret.
Tom was the first to go, but trust me, he was not the last.

_________

It is sort of lame :)

MissySW
08-23-2006, 02:48 PM
:oh! thats creepy:)
its something ty:)

anymore anyone?

Devitra
08-23-2006, 02:54 PM
I have one
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On a dark nite, a boy and a girl were driving home in a car.
It was quiet so the boy turned on the radio and heard:
' a boy had broke out of the jail and is going down the hi way out of
the city. he has a hook on his hand so please keep a look out '
the girl shook the boy, ' were on the hi way from the city! '
as soon as she said that, they heard a noise like metal hitting metal.
right after that, the boy drove off, never looking back
When he dropped off the girl at her house, he went back to
the car and found a hook hanging on the back of the car..

MissySW
08-23-2006, 02:56 PM
:oh! also creepy!

thank you:)
anymore anyone?

Devitra
08-23-2006, 02:59 PM
i would give more but we cant say that stuff on VMK ;)

LilDisLeia
08-23-2006, 03:06 PM
i got it from a book it is short
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There once was a girl baby sitting he cosions
The phone rang and someone said "I am comming to get you!!" and hung up
Her cosion asked who it was
She replyed " I do not know."
An hour later the phone rang and the man said again " I am so close i am comming!!"
She says " Stop it if you call 1 more time i am calling the police!!"
He hung up
A half an hour had passed The phone rang.
She picked it up. The man had called again this time he said
" I am only 10 minuetes away so i am going to get you!!"
She hung up and called the police and they came over and tracked the call and what they find was a crazy man with a phone in his hands. They arrested him and took him away.

Devitra
08-23-2006, 03:08 PM
i know a really funny version of that

MissySW
08-23-2006, 03:08 PM
LOL! that was a weird 1!

anymore?

LilDisLeia
08-23-2006, 03:09 PM
i know a really funny version of that

me to
are you thinking of the one where it is the gramdpa comming to get his teeth and he is up stairs

Bellezza
08-23-2006, 03:16 PM
i have on but i g2g but will do when i come back

Devitra
08-23-2006, 03:34 PM
no with the window washer

Tink's Fireworks
08-23-2006, 03:50 PM
Once there was a kid who went grave tipping.

the next night he heard a voice in the night... It said put back my grave stone.............
then his bed started to shake he saw what appeared to be a ghostly shape with no head then his radion flew at his head he dodged it. every thinkin his room started to fly at him finally it was morning. and it all stopped. that day he went and up-tipped all the grave stones and then the next night he awoke to see the spirit of the headless guy and it siad thenk you.............. then dissappeared. but the next morning the kid awoke and had 10 marks on his hand . the one he used to tip the grave stones and he only tipped 10.........................................

Ok i know this is so so not scary and dumb but it's the best i could do

~Tink :hmghost:

MissySW
08-23-2006, 03:56 PM
creepy!
LOL

tyvm:)
~miss

anymore?

Bellezza
08-23-2006, 11:12 PM
here is a pretty freaky on!

On day a long long time ago there was a man on a donkey walking slowly under a big bridge! the donkey foot steps went clack clack clackity clack.
then all of a sudden the donkey slipped on a rock. After that both of them were never seen again,and every year on that day you can hear the clack clack clackity clack.

MissySW
08-24-2006, 02:29 PM
coolies! thats weird@_@

anymore?

DarknessGirl
08-24-2006, 02:42 PM
I have a ghost in my house. Want me to say some expriences? I even have pictures of a skull, that appeared on my poster.

NOTE~ THE POSTER DID NOT HAVE SKULLS ANYWHERE ON IT. WHEN I TOOK THE PIC, IT SHOWED UP. IT WILL ONLY SHOW UP ON FILM.

MissySW
08-24-2006, 02:47 PM
ok....@_@

anyone have stories?

FantasyBlueBoy
08-24-2006, 02:50 PM
This is my favorite one:

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There once was a little town.
Late at night,
A boy was driving and then see's a car trying to follow him fast.
The boy tries to hide in a little cafe.
The police found this car chase, so they follow the car chasing
after the boy.
The car parks at the cafe, the police say open up, and nothing is in there besides a little mouse.
The Boy was never found ever again.

MissySW
08-24-2006, 02:53 PM
@_@! scary!!!!!!

btw all, these stories are for my new room:
http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78963

OstrichSam
08-24-2006, 03:04 PM
i know a really funny version of that
LOL, the grandpa one or "vindow vasher" one?

MissySW
08-25-2006, 01:58 PM
bump!
anyone else have some scary stories?
The room is going great so far;)

MinniesDream
08-25-2006, 02:14 PM
Here is one, it is kinda like the one before me, but it is scarier.Alright.


A baby sitter was baby sitting 2 kids. She put them to bed, and turned on the TV. Then the phone rang.
"Did you check the kids?"
and she hung up. She thought that it was her X Boyfriend, playing a trick on her. 30 minutes later, the phone rang.
"Did you check the kids?"
She got scared, and called the police.
"Get out of the house. Get out of the house! He is calling from inside your house!" the police screamed.
Then a scream boke the silence of the night..

MissySW
08-25-2006, 02:16 PM
:oh!!!
scary!

thank you:)
anymore?

*please be sure to stop by my new room when you see the room thread bumped;)*

MinniesDream
08-25-2006, 02:18 PM
I will try to come to your room, and wecan finally be friends. Yea, It is super scary. I am a master os scary. LOL

bohemiaLOVE
08-25-2006, 02:52 PM
One night..
A boy decided to drive home, in a deep storm.
He saw a lady at the bus stop, with a big hat and a basket.
"Hello, Ma'am. Would you like a ride?" He asked politely.

The lady smiled and came into the car.

After a few hours of driving, they arrived at what the lady said, was her house.
He opened the door for her, and stood with her at the house door-step.

"Would you like to hold my basket while I open the door?" She asked him.

He nodded, and grabbed the basket.

Out of interest, he opened the basket, just for a tiny peek. Suddenly, He saw a man's head.
He screamed, threw the basket in the air, and started running, as the woman chased after him yelling. "I'll get your head next!"

OstrichSam
08-25-2006, 04:08 PM
One night..
A boy decided to drive home, in a deep storm.
He saw a lady at the bus stop, with a big hat and a basket.
"Hello, Ma'am. Would you like a ride?" He asked politely.

The lady smiled and came into the car.

After a few hours of driving, they arrived at what the lady said, was her house.
He opened the door for her, and stood with her at the house door-step.

"Would you like to hold my basket while I open the door?" She asked him.

He nodded, and grabbed the basket.

Out of interest, he opened the basket, just for a tiny peek. Suddenly, He saw a man's head.
He screamed, threw the basket in the air, and started running, as the woman chased after him yelling. "I'll get your head next!"




o_o
Scary.

MissySW
08-25-2006, 04:19 PM
very
ty all:)
my room will open soon!
hope you can stop by!

Tink's Fireworks
08-25-2006, 04:24 PM
once there was a kid on the haunted mansion he threw a big rock at madame loeta's grave and when he got on and went into the madame leota room he had a curse put on him that he would stay in the haunted mansion to haunt the guests for 100 years after he died.

MissySW
08-25-2006, 07:02 PM
O_o scary!

anymore?!