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NothingHere
08-20-2006, 05:56 AM
Once there was a Girl who had no friends she felt like she was in the cold rain she was talked alot but it was to her mother Now the story begains
She woke up after the dew had landed on the grass she got dress and tryed to to be happy.Her mother had droped her off at school and whispered in her ear "I know you be great". The time passed by as classes passed It was time for her mother to pick her up when she saw a girl about her age crying she asked the girl "whats wrong"? "you dont want to know" she repliad
she walked on to her car and started to think wat would have happen if I helped the girl? Wat if she was a creep, "wat if she was just like me".the next day at school her mother droped her off and whispered "you can do this with or without me just stay brave" she saw that girl again but this time the girl was not crying she was just staying there and looking at her "your monther isnt coming" she whispered "what why"!! "Just go to the office".
she ran to the office holding back tears that wanted to come out and waited for hours in the office. "Maybe she is just late" she told the princeable so he called her mom on the home phone and then the cell phone but when no one picked up her princeable called the police and they took her to an ofournge and she saw her new room and layed and cired her knew teach told her that her monther had died in a car crash.

Maybe I will post more

Misskayla
08-20-2006, 05:59 AM
Love It!!!!!!

ariellover4life
08-20-2006, 04:12 PM
wow! i love it so far write more

PrincessKala
08-20-2006, 06:46 PM
Wow so far it's great!
A little spelling mistakes but i barely noticed them and everybody makes mistakes!
I love you choice in Words,
WRITE MORE!

~Carrie