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ariellover4life
08-17-2006, 03:54 PM
narriter:well one day there was a girl and her title was bell and she has always wanted to be an actress but everyone told her that she couldn't.She was always sad. But everything changed when she got older.
Bell:Hi mom i am home from high school.
Mom:Hi sweet heart how was school.
Bell:Good oh and mom there is a new play for drama.
Mom:Yea what is it.
Bell:uh?it is called HIgh school musical.
Mom:Wow ok when is the show.
Bell:Two weeks from now.
Mom:Cool oh and my boyfriend is come in over to talk about his two girls
Bell;Yea i know
Narriter:Well ever since her mom has been going out her life has changed her mom's boyfriend knew bell wanted to be an actress and he always told her you will never be an actress.Bell would just cry and cry and her mom would always tell her that he is just playing and she knows he is not playing that it was the truth.So bell would talk to her grand mom and told her everything that her mom's boy friend is doing to her.
Grandma:Well you know that there is nothing you can do.
Bella i know but i just wish he would leave my family alone.
Grandma:I know how you feel but you cant change what as already happened.
Bell:I know but sometimes i wish i could.
Grandma:Well dont let him bring you down ok oh yea and dont forget you can be anything you want to be dont let him tell you that you cant be an actress.
Bell:Thank grand mom you are the best.
Grandma:Anything for my grand baby.
Narrtier:After a good talk with her grandma Bell came out of her room and went into the kitchen to see her mom and her boyfriend talking.
Mom:How hi honey you remember baine dont you,
Bell:Yes i do.
Mom:Well arent you going to say hi.
Bell:Hi.
Baine:Hi Bell oh yea and braina is down stairs playing with your friends.
Bell:Thank but i have homework to do.
Baine:Oh ok i will tell braina that.
Narriter:So bell took her milk and cookies and went back into her room.She put them down and started writing her story for her reading class.After she finished her homework she went out into the living and put her glass and plate away.
Mom:Honey turn off the computer and get ready for dinner.
Bell:Ok mom,Wait were are we going.
Mom:We are going to souplation.
Bell:Ok and is baine coming.
Baine:Yea briana and are are coming why dont you go down stairs and get her.
Bell:Ok i will.
Narriter:So Bell went down stairs and got briana.So after she got her and turned off the computer all 3 of them got in the car and were off to souplation.When they got there they went inside grabbed a plate and got stuff from the salad bar.Bell hated salad and just got eggs,cheese,and noddles.After bell got her food she went to find a table.Bell found a table put her plate down and went up to get mac and cheese,soup,and blueberry muffins.After she got her food she went back to the table and sat down.
Briana:Wow that looks good i think i am going to get that.
Mom:Yea it is 1 of there best things here.
Baine:What does?
Briana:There blueberry muffins.
Baine:OH yea they do.
Narriter:So bell took a bit of her muffin and ate somemore of her mac and cheese,noddles,and eggs.When she was done eatting her mac and cheese baine sits down at the table with his food and starts talking to bell
Baine:So your mom told me you want to be an actress when you grow up.
Bell:-nods -
Baine:Well dont count on being 1.
Narriter:Bell just got tears in her eyes.She put her fork down and ran into the bathroom.She went in sat down in a chair and cried and cried.She hated when people told her that she cant be what she wants to be.So she grabbed a napkin and wipped away all her tears and went back to the table.
Mom:Honey why are your eyes red.
Bell:Nothing.
Mom:Well how was work today Baine.
Baine:Good just it was a long day.
Briana:Yea long and boring.
Mom and Baine: -laugh-
Narriter:Bell thought that what Briana said was a little dumb.So she put her cheese in her chicken noodle soup and started to eat it.After she was done she went and got some ice cream.She put all her favorties on them,chocolate and sprakles.
Baine:Wow that looks good.
Bell:Thank - eats some of the ice cream -
Narrier:After they all ate Bell and her mom went home and Baine followed them home.
Bell:Mom,what do you see in baine he just makes fun of me.
Mom:Well he is sweet and nice.
Bell:NO he is not today at souplatation he told me that i could never ever be an actress and hurt my feelings and he didnt care.
Mom:OH you know he is just playing with you.
Bell:No he is not!
Narriter;After Bell and her mom finished talking her mom parked the car and bell grabbed her keys,ran into the house,and went into her room.Bell locked her bedroom door and didnt come out till baine and briana left.
Mom:sweet come out there gone.
Bell:- wipes away the tears from her eyes - good i hate him he is mean to me.
mom:you know he was just kidding.
bell:that is what you say.but he isnt maybe i am should just let my dream slip away and never become an actress.
mom:Ok sweet you do that.
Bell:So you are saying i should not belivie in my dream!-cries -
Narriter:Bell knew her mom would go with what baine said.So she called her grandma and asked if she can come pick her up.

chapter 2:the run away
Bell on her cell phone:grandma - still crying - can you pick me up please.
Grandma on the phone:Sure sweet heart,but what is wrong.
Bell:Nothing just i want to leave here and maybe not come back.
Grandma:Well first tell me what happened.
Narriter:So then Bell tells her grandma about what happened at dinner with baine and what happened at home.Her grandma was no so happy cause she got tired of everyone crushing her grandkids dream.
Grandma:do i need a talk to baine.
Bell:I dont know just i really hate him he doesnt like me or anything.
Grandma:Ok i will come pick you up go get some clothes,socks,shoes,and things you want and wait for me by your steps.
Bell:- wips away tears - ok grandma bye
Grandma:Bye sweet heart see you soon.
Narriter:So then bell grabbed her suitcase from her closet and put a month worth of clothes and socks in her suitcase.When she was done packing she grabbed her shoes and bag with her ipod,ds,and more she went down stairs to the bottom of her apartment steps and waited for her grandma.As soon as her grandma got there she got in the car and off she went to her grandmas house.
chapter 3:moving in with her grandparents

CecilyCecliy
08-17-2006, 04:52 PM
You posted it yay LOL :D

ariellover4life
08-18-2006, 03:41 PM
anyone else like my story oh and thank liking my story

Misskayla
08-18-2006, 06:57 PM
Nice its cool!! :)

ariellover4life
08-18-2006, 06:58 PM
thank i put a new story up called the mystery box

ariellover4life
08-24-2006, 06:48 PM
anyone like my story?

bestroyal
08-28-2006, 11:05 PM
MORE MORE MORE I NEED TO KNOW MORE! great story i love this 1

ariellover4life
08-28-2006, 11:34 PM
thank and this is a true story it is based on me

bestroyal
08-28-2006, 11:37 PM
cool i dont mean to be rude but just a sugestion i think liek the titttle should be more exciting more eye grabing

exsample : The Actress
Can she be a Actresss
there are many diffrent types of tittles you can use then just actress bc some people who just read actress just wont read your story

but i cant wait for the next part when it comes can you pm me thanks

ps. more was added to my story

ariellover4life
08-28-2006, 11:40 PM
thank i know just i can write stories i just cant think of titles that is my reason sorry i added a little more to it not alot

bestroyal
08-28-2006, 11:44 PM
the run away souds good what happenes and if you want i can think of tittles for it i am sure if i though of a good tittle and you fixed it alot more people would read it and enjoy iy

ariellover4life
08-29-2006, 12:03 AM
but i dont know how to change it

bestroyal
08-29-2006, 12:07 AM
do you see a edit button at the bottom of all your post click that then when you see that click advance it will tkae you to a big papper just liek advance then at the top it says tittle you can change it there

ariellover4life
08-29-2006, 12:57 AM
ok but what do i change it to?

bestroyal
08-29-2006, 01:03 AM
Dont crush my dreams


souds like a great tittle1 bc the boy friend is trying to crish her dreams as a actress


make sure you mkae the D with a upper case

Tris-Remix
08-29-2006, 01:09 AM
My Turn: I like it alot! Great Story and kinda sad :) :( Please do more! I want to know what happens!

ariellover4life
08-29-2006, 01:13 AM
thank alot everyone more coming soon

bestroyal
08-29-2006, 01:14 AM
is more comming TODAY or just Soon!

ariellover4life
08-29-2006, 01:15 AM
soon maybe tomorrow cause i have a play practice i am going to soo be on the look out for tomorrow

Tris-Remix
08-29-2006, 01:15 AM
I hope today! I want to learn about it more! All these stories should be books I would read em all!

ariellover4life
08-29-2006, 01:18 AM
lol thank but i have to go soon so i will write more tomorrow i also wrote a story and it is called sarah the lady pirate

bestroyal
08-29-2006, 09:29 PM
love the new chaptor :) i wish it was longer :)

ariellover4life
08-29-2006, 10:21 PM
lol i know i might make it longer i might not