View Full Version : The epic of the DC monster


theguitarkid
08-15-2006, 06:31 PM
prolouge


once upon a time in far away land called vmk there lived a monster.this monster was very hungry and he ate little snacks all day until night when he would eat all the people but they always came back the next day but they were still very angry.now in the past few weeks the monster had become increasingly hungry.the people of vmk tried to appease the monster by giving him sacrifcies called "host events" where awesome prizes lured the ppl and then the monster would eat them just as they where about to win.but this did not satisfie the monsters hunger so he hatched a plan to eat all the ppl in vmk and make sure they would never return.but the ppl found out about his plan and they needed to stop him so they asked the only ppl they knew who could help stop the monsters evil plan.Esmerelda the fortune teller,shrunken Ned the salesman,yeti the comedian, and captain blackheart the pirate.the Non Playing Characters(or NPCs)




comments i will put the first chapter up in a little while

theguitarkid
08-15-2006, 07:17 PM
chapter 1-rounding up the gang

"never" blackheart said."i may be a pirate but i am not crazy"."please captain please you are our only hope, we need a ship to sail to the dc monsters island" begged king yavn.yavn was the ruler of vmk but the more vmk grew the more powerful the monster got untill one day yavn could no longer control the monster."a good pirate knows when something is worthwhile and when something is a wild seagull chase."blackheart said as he pulled down his sails."fine then i guess you will miss out on the treasure" said yavn as casually as he could."what treasure?" blackheart asked with a gleam in his eye."well when the dc monster takes away someone in a host game the host needs to give the prize to someone so they give it to the monster.churros,surf pins. maybe a couple extra infernos lying around." said yavn knowing he had the captains interest."tell you what matey,you cut me in for some of that treasure and you have yourself a deal,savvy?"blackheart said with a smile frome ear to ear."very savvy my friend welcome aboard."said yavn shaking the good captains hand."now we just need supplies for the ship.i wonder where we can get those."said blackheart combing his beard."there is only one guy i know for supplies," said yavn."and his name is shrunken Ned."

to be continued...

ariellover4life
08-15-2006, 09:01 PM
wow! that is a cool story

theguitarkid
08-15-2006, 09:09 PM
chapter 2-mercantile man

captain blackheart and yavn stroll into the shop looking for ned and there he is just hanging around."yavn,old chum, what are you doing here?"said Ned in his usual happy disposition."we are here to save the kingdom,ned and we need your help."yavn said."why im just a head old chap why would you need me?"ned said questioningly."let me explan me heartie" said blackheart."yavn is rounding up a crew to defeat the evil dc monster and your the only one with the supplies we need.so will you please join and help us save the kingdom?"begged blackheart."well i guess i will join.FOR THE KINGDOM!"ned shouted."thats the spirit."said yavn."but" ned interjected "no one knows where the dc monster lives how will get to his island if we have no idea where to go?""well,"said yavn."there is one lady that knows all."ESMERELDA!"they all said at once.


to be continued...

theguitarkid
08-15-2006, 09:11 PM
wow! that is a cool story

Thank you very much:)

ariellover4life
08-15-2006, 10:02 PM
wow! i really cant wait may i be in your story

theguitarkid
08-16-2006, 12:44 AM
wow! i really cant wait may i be in your story

i dont know maybe;)

theguitarkid
08-16-2006, 07:45 PM
chapter 3-fortune of sorrow

as yavn, and blackheart walked up to the booth esmerelda was sitting in with ned bouncing behind them they where very worried esmerelda was the only person who knew where the dc monsters island was and without her they where sunk."esmer-"
"stop" esmerelda said " i know why you are here and i will join you under one condition you must let the yeti come.""ok" yavn said."we do need someone strong to lift things.""hi gu- ahhhh" said the yeti as he triped over his own fur."wow, what a crew this is well ok then off to the ship." said blackheart. and so the adventure began.

theguitarkid
08-16-2006, 10:24 PM
chapter 4-the begining


"There she is matey the golden seagull, my ship." said blackheart staring proudly at his ship."ok everyone, blackheart get to the deck and unfurl those sails, ned and yeti pick up the supplies, esmerelda go to the captains quarters and find our heading i will oversee everything."said yavn.and they worked and finally the ship was ready to set sail and yavn called them over before they set sail." now we are going to need to-.""CAPTAIN!" yeti screamed."what is it yeti?""YOUR LEGS!" and before their very eyes he began to disapear."NO NO YOU MUST GO TO THE ISLAND AND DEFEAT THE DC MONSTER BEFORE ITS TOO LA-" and that is all he could say before he vanished."NO YAVN" ned shouted in anguish.just then esmerelda walked out to the deck."it has begun"


to be continued...

theguitarkid
08-26-2006, 03:54 AM
chapter 5-travel time


"we set sail 2 days ago why are we not there yet."esmerelda said."i dont really care and i am bcoming annoyed with you.so if you want to stay here go back into your quaters and know your role."blackheart hissed."you leave her alone!"the yeti shouted."now come down there old chaps."ned said trying to be a peacemaker."we are all sad about yavn dissapering but we ne-""uhh...guys"the yeti said."not now yeti and as i was tryi-"uhh...guys""yeti not now"ned said starting to get angry"as i was say-"uhh...guys""FOR PETES SAKE YETI WHAT CAN POSSIBLY BE SO IMPORTANT!!??"ned shouted"land"yeti said."what"blackheart said dumbfounded.and then as they all looked to the west they saw the island of the dc monster.

Sarahisme
08-26-2006, 04:21 AM
This was my idea..
hmm..

ariellover4life
08-26-2006, 04:35 PM
what how can blackheart come back if he got dc?