Sketched In Love
A. Cass

Aledishia Jones was almost perfect until the love her life passed away. Her performance suffered at work, she was never happy, and she was so depressed she moved to the place she first met Jayke. She bought the house nearest to the ocean, every morning she would look out and sketch a picture of her and Jayke out in a boat gazing into each others eyes. One morning she went to the window and looked on the water and saw a figure that looked like Jayke waving to a girl on shore. When she looked hard enough she realized it was the exact same as her first date and one of her pictures. The next morning she went to her mailbox there was a note addressed from Jayke Jones To Aledishia Jones, she opened the message and read it with the same handwriting it said, “Aledishia, death can not stop me from our love, it is only a minor set back and we will be together again soon.” Aledishia starter to cry as she held the note in her hand, then when she set it down it flew out the window. Aledishia ran over to the window and saw the letter floating in the water next to a boat with to people gazing into each others eyes when she realized that she was the girl in the boat and Jayke was sitting with her.


-A. Cass

That's pretty good, can't wait for more. I love the plot.

Wow this is very interesting!
Is this more of scary or love story?

You...Must....Make...More @_@!!!!

thank you more is coming

You...Must....Make...More @_@!!!!

What she said. :)

it's good can't wait to read more :)


~Loops

Aledishia looked out to the boat everyday of the week, till finally she went out to the shores one early morning to wait for Jayke. She was out for hours until she realized he wasn’t going to show up, so she headed home. Aledishia ran to her sketch pad and it was empty. Her mind started racing and so did her pencil, it was a scene of her and Jayke in the market holding hands. The next morning she decided to go to the market and see if the drawing had come true, and it did there was the same couple holding each others hand. That’s when she realized that Jayke never died in her heart. She ran home and checked her mail box there was more notes from him. She took a note in her hands that said, “Aledishia, I can tell you figured out about you and me still in love even though we live with death I knew you could.” Aledishia smiled at this note she started to draw more and more pictures of the lake, market, and eventually in the house. One morning she went out to make breakfast and she saw her and Jayke sitting at the window Aledishia leaning against him just staring out she screamed and dropped the pan. But the two did not even turn. She walked to put her hand on Jayke’s shoulder and her hand fell through, she fell to her feet crying.
-A.Cass

Ooooh, make more!!!!!!!

OMG This is a nice story.. im going to print it out when its all done and when in school they tell me to take a novel out.. i will read this! Make more for Eviie :D

wow! awesome story i cant wait till more

Aledishia grew tired of the loneliness so she went to the market where she met Brendon. They fell in love immediately, because they were exactly like each other in many ways, his wife, Arenda, had also died. They were married before you knew it and had a beautiful child. But Aledishia was still upset she drew a new picture of her old husband on the lake, then she got up and went to bed. Brendon in the middle of night creped out of there room and added his old wife to the picture. That morning they all woke early and went to the beach on the way Aledishia grabbed the mail, there was another letter from Jayke it said, “Thank you for helping me meet Arenda, she makes my afterlife complete.” Aledishia looked up from the shore and there was Jayke and Arenda waving at them, and then all of a sudden Brendon dives into the water to get to the boat. As Aledishia screams to him, “Its not real! Come Back!”

Oh, I cannot WAIT until the fourth chapter comes out!

Aledishia had to run after Brendon but she couldn’t leave Lindsay alone. She watched and one thing she remembered was he couldn’t swim. She screamed out to come back but then she was to late. Lindsay screamed as she saw her father fall under the dark water flailing around. Aledishia jumped in the water leaving Lindsay screaming on the beach. Aledishia shredded through the water to get to her husband but she was to late he was already crushed in the black oblivion of Davey Jone’s Locker. She swam back on shore and started to cry in her hands and held her daughter. Lindsay was young but knew what just happened. The two girls walked up to the house again knowing it wouldn’t be that same again.

Wow im about to cry >_<......YOU MUST MAKE
MORE @_@

The next morning Aledishia and Lindsay made breakfast trying to move along with there lives. Lindsay was turning three soon and was a young artist at heart and her mother could not be more proud. One normal day Aledishia drew a picture of a storm with crashing waves hitting the house. The day got later and the next morning they woke to a most terrible storm waves were crushing against the house in a distance there was grey skies with lighting piercing threw. Lindsay ran in her room and hid under her covers Aledishia ran to her room grabbed her wrist and said, “We have to get out of here, its not safe just grab bed covers and clothes we’ll find a safer place to live!” Both of them grabbed there stuff and ran out to the car and drove away from the dark memories as they pulled up to a beautiful house with a garden



-A. Cass

OMG im almost crying! This is a really good story! Make it a book.. publish it! Im dead serious! LOL

Omg that is such a good story as Eviie said you should Publish it!

Aledishia became in love with the garden and Lindsay became in love with the library that had empty notebooks to color in. There life was happier although there still was an emptiness. One night after they went to sleep a burglar broke in the house. Aledishia grabbed Lindsay and her clothes and covers told to run in her room and only let in her mother. Aledishia ran to get the phone and ducked past the burglar and ran up stairs. She said, “Lindsay its me open up.” Aledishia ran in the room and locked the door. She picked up the phone and called the police. The police were on there way to the house they surrounded the house and all Lindsay’s mother could think of was “Why us again?”

-A.Cass

I really like how this story is going.
Your a very good writter.
And have a wonderful imagination! Im really into this story, how many chapters is there gonna be?

that information is not realeased yet

You shouldn't post your picture on your userpage.. But I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY love your your story :-)

It's a great story!!!

I agree with walnutfudge. lol

Go waltisflt! I love your stories. I'm not into love stories but this one isn't all romance it's mostly mystery, which I like. I can't wait to read the next chapter. You seriously need to publish this. Poor girl (can't remember name, too hard to type) and Lindsay.Oh wait, poor girl, her name is Aledishia.

After the burglary once again Aledishia didn’t feel safe, she wanted to move but she didn’t. Things would change, for sure Lindsay was starting preschool soon and her mother didn’t know how to support her. They had to sell there new house and move to a cheap house to pay for her education. She supported her daughter as much as she could but the thought education was not for her so she pulled her out of school. They decided to move back to the old house and start over. Aledishia found the “right” man for her his name was Pete. He loved her and he loved to play with Lindsay which is why they got married. But Aledishia still had an empty spot.

Wow that girl has alot of true loves lol.

I love the story, crying... But love me i'm awesome is right, that is number three. *Holds up two fingers*

More More! Me Like Story - Gets Addcited Already -

what a story!

wow how beauitiful you have to write more

The next day when Aledishia went to wake up Lindsay. She was not in her room. Her mother ran around the house trying find her then she heard something fall in the front yard. She ran outside to see the garbage can had been knocked over. There was a muffled scream as she opened it up and with her mouth taped was Lindsay. She grabbed her and ran inside. She pulled the tape off and asked, “Who did this?” Lindsay just shook her head and shivered.

Wow... just.. wow.. your an amazing writer.

thank you very much for all the love ppl!:)

Omg, this is the most interesting storie in the world.

There are so many good writers on this site.

Love your story :)

Best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bump!

who! I would like to know what happened to her daughter

Aledishia was scared for her daughter and there family. She was trying to find out who would do that to her daughter. Aledishia dint have time to try to really think for she was visiting the cemetery to see her dead father. She went to her car and drove to the cemetery. She sat next to his grave and said, “Is this karma, do I really deserve this anymore, my life has been terrible. Why me?” Aledishia heard a voice singing, she turned around and saw a bright flash of light.

Omg I totally love your story here... you should really think about publishing it when it's done! =)

Aledishia opened her eyes. She was sitting in a hospital with her family standing over her. Her family sighed with relief, tears were filled in there eyes. She asked, “Where am I, how did I get here.” Aledishia’s family explained that she was at the cemetery and she got hit by a car. Lindsay ran up t her and said, “It was him. He’s after us.” Aledishia thought back about everything that happened and remembered one person in all of her memories. That’s when she realized those weren’t accidents they were meant to happen from one person.

Dude, thats like totally the coolest ever. Keep writing more!! Love your stories!

-CC

taking a break to catch up on the story more soon

bump for those who havent read it new chapters coming soon to the public!!