wonderfulmapu
08-10-2006, 05:59 PM
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View Full Version : The Royal Scene: A HSM Story wonderfulmapu 08-10-2006, 05:59 PM hhjzhgsjgya CubbyDoggie 08-10-2006, 06:03 PM Your chapters are too short, with barely any detail. I don't mean to be rude. Just, if you fix it, then you can make this better. PrincessTmkttt 08-10-2006, 07:02 PM :( you copied off of my idea!! CubbyDoggie 08-10-2006, 07:15 PM :( you copied off of my idea!! Yeah...I liked yours alot! ariellover4life 08-10-2006, 10:14 PM wow great story cant wait for more Sarahisme 08-10-2006, 10:47 PM The chapters are too short, and their kind of copying tmktt. Otherwise, it's ok. BlueTinkLizzie 08-10-2006, 10:55 PM chapters are WAY too short! I'm sorry but you really need to add details. Or else it isn't excited. That 7 chapters is 1 chapter alone..Maybe 2 and a half. Also tmkttt, was the first one who made a squal. I think you copied her. Other wise it's, eh so-so wonderfulmapu 08-11-2006, 03:53 AM I'll delete this, even though it took me some time. Sorry, for copying you're idea. I'll make a Hannah Montana story!! :) PrincessTmkttt 08-11-2006, 01:17 PM OK Thanks for being so nice about it! I apperiate your kindness ~Tmkttt:princess: Writer and Artist |