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~twinklebyte~
08-10-2006, 07:30 AM
What happens when a geek and the populars become best friends?
What happens when 5 girls fight over a guy? Read on "When Worlds Collide"


Chapter 1

Hello. My name is Jamie McDoddel. Im a 15 year old. I just moved from Northern Florida to eastern california. At my old school i was popular. When I moved to California, i was a geek. I only made one friend, Cassie Malanian. As i entered the school doors, I was in a slight daze as Riley Kilehouser entered the doors. The quarterback on the football team. "Hey Jamie." he said. I stared and said nothing. I was completely..in love. In math we had a quiz. I failed. After school, me and Cassie went back to my house. At 12:00, Cassie went home and i went to sleep, after a hard and exhausting day, I WAS TIRED!

Chapter 2

The next day, the populars arrived. Everybody cleared the hall way for them. We looked at Amanda, Kendra, and Alexis. They were called the A.K.A. "Aww, look. Its the geek gang!" said Amanda. "Leave us alone, Amanda" said Cassie. "Why should she?" said Kendra and Alexis. We walked to class. All of a sudden, we tuned our head to see Amanda and Riley take a quick kiss. I Quickly ran into the girls bathroom in tears. Amanda knows I like Riley. What was her plan? To sabatoge me and Cassie? To ruin my life? To have no future between me and Riley?

ariellover4life
08-10-2006, 10:10 PM
wow great story would make your chapters a little longer but great story

theastroA
08-10-2006, 10:18 PM
I like it so far. I like how everything (to me at least) seems to be a blur (not in a bad way). Kinda the way Jamie is experiencing it. Keep it up, its really cool.