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Danceteamer_15
08-02-2006, 06:17 PM
This story is about ppl who use IMing the wrong way. These are not certain ppl. THIS IS NOT A TRUE STORY!!!!!!!!

Created by Danceteamer_15 & Mokacream

People in this story:
Tiffgrl1151 (Tiffany aka Tiff)
Sparrowslover101 (Phinoex aka fafa)
DudeMan222 (Conner)
Prettyandopoualr000 (Brianana)
Eagleeyeguy205 (unkown name)


Chapter 1: Eagleeyeguy205

Tiffgrl151: omg guess wat?
Sparrowslover101: wat?!?!
Tiffgrl151: i met this really cute guy on aim!!
Sparrowslover101: who?
Tiffgrl151: eagleeyeguy205!
Sparrowslover101: does he go to our school?
Tiffgrl151: i dont know
Sparrowslover101: do u know him in real life?
Tiffgrl151: i dont know
Sparrowslover101: well then why are u talking to him?
Tiffgrl151: bc he started talkng to me
Tiffgrl151: wats the problem with that? :mad:
Sparrowslover101: are u feeling ok?
Tiffgrl151: yea i'm fine are u ok?
Sparrowslover101: wat did i do?
Tiffgrl151: i dont know wats the problem with me?
Sparrowslover101: theres no prob with u…………… ur just acting weird
Sparrowslover101: are u sure this guy’s safe?
Tiffgrl151: of course I know he's safe? Are u crazy. wat u do u think i am, stupid?

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed off~~~


Chapter 2: Conner to the rescue!

Sparrowslover101: Conner, tiff is being stupid
DudeMan222: ?????? Explain???????
Sparrowslover101: Oh sorry forgot
Sparrowslover101: Ok, so we were talking and she's like: OH my gosh i just meet this cute guy on IM! And I was like: do u know anything about this dude??? And she was all: No! but that doesnt matter why are u so weird. And then she signed off
DudeMan222: Yikes, is she crazy or something??
Sparrowslover101: Ur telling me. I just hope this jerk doesnt break up the three musekteers
DudeMan222: Yup -sighs-
Sparrowslover101: Wat do u still like her???
DudeMan222: Well.......... WAIT how did u know i liked her?
Sparrowslover101: Ha! u admit it! Muahaha! Besides the only person that doesnt notice that u like Tiff its Tiff.
DudeMan222: Really? So she doesnt like me back :bawling:
Sparrowslover101: I'll work on it ok? I dont think shes ever really thought about it........
DudeMan222: Well ttyl im going to wait until tiff gets on. maybe i can talk her out of it
Sparrowslover101: Ok give me a re cap i have to do hw. ttyl

~~~Sparrowslover101 has signed off~~~

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed on~~~

Chapter 3: Tiff's freak out

DudeMan222: Hey tiff how r u?
Tiffgrl151: Lowsy u? oh wait fafa probaly already told u everything. shes to afraid that im crushing on a guy that i never met.
DudeMan222: Its still not very good that u dont know his age
Tiffgrl151: why maybe he 16 and im 15 so wat?
DudeMan222: well maybe hes 40 or 6 i mean u never know!
Tiffgrl151: so wats the prob i could still crush on a 40 yr old. Johny Depp is like 43 but fafa still crushes on him?
DudeMan222: wat if he trieds to hurt u? i cant let that happen to u
Tiffgrl151: wat do u mean u? are u suddenly my mom?!?! besides he wont hurt me. i trust him and i thought i trusted u! but ur just not my friend. i dont know wat i ever saw in u as being a friend. :mad: wat is ur prob?
DudeMan222: tiff wait! tiff plz answer me! tiff!
~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed off~~~
DudeMan222: Oh crud, this was not supposed to happen

Chapter 4: brianaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

~~~ PretttyinPopular000 has just signed on ~~~

PretttyinPopular000: conner wonner i need a favor?
DudeMan222: wat do u want? and stop saying that!
PretttyinPopular000: well its a big favor, fine
DudeMan222: wat?
PretttyinPopular000: i need u to figure out who that guy is that tiff is talking about............
DudeMan222: so wat do i do if i do?
PretttyinPopular000: i'll make her like u
DudeMan222: u cant make her do anything just leave her alone!
PretttyinPopular000: fine so thats a no??

~~~ DudeMan222 has signed off ~~~

Chapter 5: Huh?

~~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed on ~~~

Tiffgrl151: Hey eagle!
Eagleeyeguy205:hey..........
Tiffgrl151: something wrong?
Eagleeyeguy205:nope just tired
Tiffgrl151: ok then....
Tiffgrl151: do u mind if i ask u a ?
Eagleeyeguy205:watever
Tiffgrl151: how old r u?
Eagleeyeguy205:wat do u mean?
Tiffgrl151:i mean wats ur age..................
Eagleeyeguy205:ill tell u if u meet me at stabucks in an hour.
Tiffgrl151:how do i know its u?
Eagleeyeguy205:ill wear a bright orange shirt
Tiffgrl151:ill wear a green shirt pink skirt
Eagleeyeguy205:ok see u there
Tiffgrl151:same

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed off~~

Chapter 6: Wow........

PretttyinPopular000: did u talk to her?
Eagleeyeguy205: to who?
PretttyinPopular000: duh tiff!
Eagleeyeguy205: oh yea i talked to her
PretttyinPopular000: well?
Eagleeyeguy205:im meeting her in about an hour
PretttyinPopular000: so shes falling for it?
Eagleeyeguy205: yup
PretttyinPopular000: perfect, now i can crush her
Eagleeyeguy205: why did u want to crush her again?
PretttyinPopular000: DUH! i like conner, but conner likes tiff, so if i ruin tiff she wont want to even be friends with conner which leaves him, all too me.
Eagleeyeguy205: wat ever ttyl

~~~Eagleeyeguy205 has signed off~~~

Chapter 7: Is it really true?

~~~Sparrowslover101 has signed on~~~

PretttyinPopular000: Oh hey Phinoex
Sparrowslover101: u can title me fafa alright?
PretttyinPopular000: FINE hey fafa
Sparrowslover101: Hey braina
Sparrowslover101: do u like conner?
PretttyinPopular000: why would u get an idea like that?
Sparrowslover101: I have my ways just tell blondie
PretttyinPopular000: ok but wats in it for me?
Sparrowslover101: i wont hurt u? dont forget i've been doing kickboxing for 3 years :th000000508oc:
PretttyinPopular000: ok good enough
PretttyinPopular000: yes i like him
Sparrowslover101: but he likes tiff
Sparrowslover101: and tiff like that dude
PretttyinPopular000: which is why im going to have her hate him
PretttyinPopular000: Oops did i just say that?
Sparrowslover101: u sure did
PretttyinPopular000:uh g2g bye!

~~~PretttyinPopular000 has signed off~

Sparrowslover101: I cant wait to tell conner and tiff. wait........... how will she hurt tiff????????????

Chapter 8: Tiff?!?!?!

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed on~~~

Sparrowslover101: hey tiff i got a ? for u if u dont get mad at me
Tiffgrl15:fine, i accept ur forgiveness, now wat was the ?
Sparrowslover101: ok, wat ever lets not get into a fight again, did u ever do anything to briana?
Tiffgrl15: hmm let me think...................... nope
Sparrowslover101: ok nvm then
Tiffgrl15: why?
Sparrowslover101: tell u later
Tiffgrl15: g2g going out
Sparrowslover101: where?
Tiffgrl15: none of ur bussiness!! :mad:

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed off~~~

Author's Note: For this next chapter Im going
to have it be Tiff writing everything that happened,
on her cell phone, so ppl can know wat happened.

Chapter 9: Starbucks

I rushed over to Starbucks so fast I forgot that I wasnt wearing wat I was supposed to.
Oh well. I thought hopefully I can just find him.
Lucky there was only one girl in starbucks wear wat I was supposed to wear.
Wait wat... thats Brianana? No that cant be... it is!! Wat is she doing here?
Hmmm well at least there are only 2 ppl here with orange shirts.
One really really cute guy and some other person...... wait the other guy left
Why is that cute guy going to Brianana? Does he think im her?
Oh know.......... I better just go talk to him......
"Hi" i said. "Do I know u?" he said.
"Umm kind of"
"From?"
"IM"
"I dont have a computer"
"Yes you do your eagleeyeguy205"
"I told u I dont have a computer!"
"Then why are u talking to her," (as i point to brianana)
"Bc she is my new girl friend"
"What?"
"Yea she super nice, and her outfit is so cool"
"I cant belive this!!" Then I went got my drink and ran home crying.
I told my mom that I needed some alone time, and i came out for food and the bathroom.
Lucky it was spring break so i just stayed home, in my room sitting and crying.

Chapter 10: Conner

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed on~~~

DudeMan222:Hey tiff
Tiffgrl151:hi
DudeMan222: u ok?
Tiffgrl151: no
DudeMan222: wats wrong?
Tiffgrl151: i dont want to talk about it.
DudeMan222: ok
DudeMan222: so how was starbucks?
Tiffgrl151: eagle is brianana boyfriend! i hate him! i hate guys!
DudeMan222: wat about me?
Tiffgrl151: i hate u 2! i never want to speak to u again!!!
DudeMan222: wat did i do?
Tiffgrl151: everything!! -yells-

~~~Tiffgrl151 has signed off~~~

DudeMan222: Now she'll never like me

~~~DudeMan222 has signed off~~~

~~~The next day~~~

~~~DudeMan222 has signed on~~~

Sparrowslover101: hey conn how r u?
DudeMan222: lowsy
Sparrowslover101: wat happened?
DudeMan222: tiff never wants to see me again :(
Sparrowslover101: why?
DudeMan222: Eagle
Sparrowslover101: when she meets this guy im so hurting him
DudeMan222: she said she already meet the guy and he liked brianana, so she said she hates guys now
Sparrowslover101: :oh im sorry :(
DudeMan222: me too and i was going to take her to the welcome back to school dance................ oh well
Sparrowslover101: dont say that conn

~~~DudeMan222 has signed off~~~

Here is the link to my sequel: http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=80324

kakafisher13
08-18-2006, 05:57 PM
Thats good

ariellover4life
08-18-2006, 06:01 PM
wow awesome story

SmileyLOLkid
08-18-2006, 07:49 PM
oh come on pls finish it! I want to no more!

PrincessKala
08-19-2006, 05:26 AM
Great story! I Want to know about the dude and Tiff! Please wrtie more! Keep up the great work!

~Carrie

CrazyAlly
08-19-2006, 05:33 AM
I read some IM boks before :) TTYL and TTFN
They were awesome.
Anyways, can't wait to read the rest of your story :D

-Crazy

rjromero3
08-19-2006, 05:34 AM
omg i wanna kno the rest! write more! write more!

kittenofthenight
08-22-2006, 01:48 PM
write more the story is good lol

Oranges
08-22-2006, 08:54 PM
Good story, but keep it G-rated, and don't suggest inappropriate situations that could go on with this "Tiffany" character.

~Oranges

WDWLinny
08-22-2006, 09:04 PM
wow i would def. buy it if it were a book!!! :- ) come on i want to know more

liljesi
08-22-2006, 09:25 PM
haha nice.. keep the story going!

this reminds me of a couple of other stories i read set up in IMs... =)


-liljesi

CubbyDoggie
08-23-2006, 12:04 AM
That's awesome! Please add more! It's great!

ppockets
08-23-2006, 12:10 AM
aww... i can never just read a few chapters!! hurry up plz!!!!!!!!!! it awesome, but i need to find out were it leads! yeah i a total book critic (aka book worm/nerd)

jab1235
08-23-2006, 12:15 AM
cmon im waiting

iamamoodygirl
08-23-2006, 12:18 AM
wow it is a story i am actually interestred in LOL write more i cant wait (pm me if you write more soi can read it) and like cl_florida oranges said keep it G-rated ( i also like the comment about jonnhy depp lol)

SmileyLOLkid
08-24-2006, 06:16 PM
I really want to read more, but like oranges and moody said, be carefull. like instead of getting into detail make the end of the story like she went to go meet the guy but didn't come back when she was supposed to and then to be continued... or something

Danceteamer_15
08-25-2006, 04:22 AM
Sorry everyone that I haven't added more, I havent been on vmk of vmkf since last sunday will write ASAP!

Yasmin818
08-25-2006, 04:38 AM
that is awesome!! I've wrotes like 18 pages of stories but i end up having too much Romance and volance any way good story!

Danceteamer_15
08-25-2006, 04:50 AM
Ok, to tell everyone it will be G-rated, the ending will be not wat u extpected.

Yasmin818
08-25-2006, 04:52 AM
it's killing me inside you must continue

CubbyDoggie
08-25-2006, 07:43 PM
I must read more! It's great!

FrozenPeach
08-25-2006, 09:17 PM
good, but this sounds a lot like the book TTYL and TTFN... but I don't suggest those books, 'cause the're not G-rated..... but the exact same story....

bestroyal
08-25-2006, 09:34 PM
more more more! awseome story

PrincessWall
08-26-2006, 02:54 PM
Yay! Will you add another chapter soon?

matzb
08-26-2006, 03:38 PM
i just read the story so far its good and i cant wait for more chapters

jab1235
08-27-2006, 09:52 PM
i wonder what happens

Danceteamer_15
08-27-2006, 11:08 PM
The IM, is NOT based or given and idea, from ttyl and ttfn. I have read a couple pages of ttyl, but this is not where i got this story from. ttyl is about girls who only get to see each other at camp. bc they live arcoss the world from each other. and how they talk to each other, is from iming each other. this is totally different. the only reson why ppl might think it is alike is bc i write it like an im bubble, instead of writing it normal.

BasketballFarrah
08-27-2006, 11:15 PM
Dude write more! Here comes the juicy part! :D

Danceteamer_15
08-27-2006, 11:22 PM
I will add more later everyone!!

JpopChick<3
08-27-2006, 11:22 PM
Omg the last chapter is like...evil..

Bad prettyinpopular000 lol

BasketballFarrah
08-27-2006, 11:49 PM
Im not a dude



I will add more later everyone!!

Dude is an expression lol ok dudette (sp?)

liljesi
08-28-2006, 02:05 AM
wow.. very nice so far! imma continue to read as you write more.. its great! =)


-liljesi

Danceteamer_15
08-28-2006, 05:56 PM
lol Im adding more as we speak! (well in my mind i still figuring out how to put it)

Im sorry for getting so mad about ttyl stuff i have too pictures. I was thinking of ttyl camp confdentical not ttyl here is wat i was confused with. Again to everyone I got angry with I am SO Sorry!

CrazyAlly
08-28-2006, 06:37 PM
yup :) I read ttyl. Great book. ttfn is cool too :D

-Crazy

PrincessWall
08-28-2006, 06:45 PM
Yay! I hope you add more soon............ Even though you added a chapter already today....

CubbyDoggie
08-28-2006, 07:22 PM
I must read more!!!!!!!!

jab1235
08-28-2006, 08:52 PM
getting just a little confusing

Danceteamer_15
08-29-2006, 03:14 AM
Confusing? Explain? Im going to try to finish it ASAP, bc i might do i sequel if ppl want me too. But I found a story that I was working on and I love it! So, im going to try to finish before Sept. 5 (school), So I will really try to finish!!

OstrichSam
08-29-2006, 03:26 AM
Confusing? Explain? Im going to try to finish it ASAP, bc i might do i sequel if ppl want me too. But I found a story that I was working on and I love it! So, im going to try to finish before Sept. 5 (school), So I will really try to finish!!
A sequel? Cool!
Btw, i also start on sept. 5th. n_n
Not like it matters...

Mokacream
08-29-2006, 03:26 AM
Great Work Danceteamer_15 Cant Wait For More! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh h!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE Jack Sparrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

liljesi
08-30-2006, 01:14 AM
nice work!
its really good.. keep it going! =)
haha


-liljesi

OstrichSam
08-30-2006, 01:18 AM
I was afraid of what was going to happen next.
Woosh at least he isn't some crazed inasane...well er killer...person....
Can't wait for more!
Keep it up!

Danceteamer_15
08-30-2006, 01:39 AM
Hey can someone post a link to the VMKF Rules please? I want to make sure I keep everything G-Rated.

PrincessTmkttt
08-30-2006, 12:36 PM
more please more i want to see what happens when she meets him PLEASE!

AvastKrazy
08-30-2006, 12:57 PM
i am so putting it on my blog or maybe userpage

PrincessTmkttt
08-30-2006, 01:18 PM
You should as premission first

Danceteamer_15
08-30-2006, 10:45 PM
U can put it! I dont mind!! :) Im not going to add any more until I get a link to the VMKF Rules (i cant find it) I dont want to add new chapters if I have to get them deleted. So if someone can post the link or pm me it. I will keep writing!!

KenzieIsLove
08-30-2006, 10:47 PM
this may be the rules

http://www.disneysonlineworlds.com/index.php/Policies_and_Disclaimers

Danceteamer_15
08-30-2006, 11:00 PM
Ok yes I made sure by a mod, that is the rules so I will be adding a new chapter yay!!

KenzieIsLove
08-30-2006, 11:01 PM
yea it shows it on the home page

vmkstar99
08-30-2006, 11:15 PM
I think that he will be older than she expected.

SmileyLOLkid
08-30-2006, 11:18 PM
I Just Gotta No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CubbyDoggie
08-30-2006, 11:21 PM
Please add more!

Danceteamer_15
08-30-2006, 11:33 PM
Before I can add anymore I have to wait until my poll comes up so I can post a link to it, to see if I should do a sequel. Please dont post your answer here!

bestroyal
08-30-2006, 11:41 PM
please add more please please

Tris-Remix
08-31-2006, 12:49 AM
I <3 stories! I think the most place I posted is here because of your excellence stories!

CloetheGreat
08-31-2006, 12:52 AM
Awesome Awesome! More More!

liljesi
08-31-2006, 01:02 AM
its great! the added chapters only make it better! =)
haha can't wait until you update it again.. its so good! ;)


-liljesi

Danceteamer_15
08-31-2006, 01:29 AM
Ok before I can add more I need to know if a should make a sequel. Here is the link to my poll:
http://www.vmkforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=80075

Im going to add one more chapter, but it wont be about tiff, eagle, or brianana. it will be about conner.

Alright its even bugging me, I will finish this chapter and add one about conner, but then im going to do my school stuff.

Alright I finished this chapter and added a short one!

SBlais
08-31-2006, 01:54 AM
lol i need to know the rest of the story!! great first part! it keeps you on the edge of your seat for sureeeeee!!

CubbyDoggie
08-31-2006, 01:57 AM
Awww....I MUST SEE MORE! IT'S SO GOOD!

Tris-Remix
08-31-2006, 12:22 PM
Nice chapter you added! I like it! More More

Danceteamer_15
09-01-2006, 08:04 PM
Im going to add one more chapter then I will make the sequel.

CubbyDoggie
09-01-2006, 08:07 PM
Yay!!!!!!!!

Danceteamer_15
09-01-2006, 08:14 PM
Alright im going to make the new thread and add one chapter.