Coopergirl
07-18-2006, 02:45 AM
OK, I'm writing a story on my computer so might as well show you. Don't even THINK about stealing my idea or my story!!!
LIFE AFTER DEATH
CHAPTER 1
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
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---BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!--
Sandra slammed her hands down on her alarm clock and pulled the covers over her head.
"COME ON SANDRA, GET UP!!!" shouted Sandra's mom, Stacey, and clicked on the light.
"NO!" Sandra shouted back.
"Sandra Styners, don't make me get your father."
"NOOOOOOOOO!!!" Sandra screamed. She crawled to the end of her bed under the covers.
"Oh Jimmy!" Sanra's mom called. Sandra screamed.
"Yes, Stacey?"
"Get Sandra up." Sandra screamed again as she heard footsteps. She knew her father was right there when she felt the fiercest tickle of all, one that makes you scream and shout and cry, but not laugh the least bit.
"OK, I'm up, I'm up!" Sandra quickly jumped out of bed and got her outfit out.
"Works every time..." Jimmy mumbled as he walked downstairs to finish his eggs.
Sandra opened the door and ate.
"I WANT MY BANKY!!!" Sandra heard the screams of her 2 year old brother Joey. He walked over to my 15 year old sister Jessica and screamed (or spit) at her. "GIVE IT TO ME!!!"
"I don't have your blanket!" Jessica said back. Jessica is only 3 years older than me, but she seems a lot worse with little kids.
"GIMME!"
"Joey, you're holding your blankey." Sandra said. Joey looked down.
"Oh. OK." Joey took his blanket and wiped off some of the spit on Jessica's face.
"Thank you." Jessica said.
Well, meet the Styners family. And yes, this is a typical day for them.
CHAPTER 2
We picked you, Sandra...
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Sandra went through her school day as usual, reading, writing, lunch, recess, friends, social studies. When she got home she did her math homework. It was finding the square root of stuff.
"Uggg..." Sandra groaned. She finally got through it and went on the computer for a little while. She played VMK and did a few quests on there. Then she watched TV.
"And now back to, Phil of the Future." said the person that announces stuff. Sandra wondered what those were called while she watched her favorite episode, where Keely tries to get a boy and a girl together. She watched as Mr. Hackette, the vice-principal at their school, danced through the halls. Sandra giggled. That always made her laugh.
"Quack..." he quacked.
Commercials came on. A Cheetah Girls 2 music video came on.
"Oh i love this one!" Joey ran in the room and started dancing on the couch. The song ended.
"I want Sesame Street." Joey said.
"No Joey, I'm watching Phil of the futu-"
"SESAME STREET!"
"Fine, fine." Sandra put Sesame Street on the TV and went upstairs.
Time passed and Sandra got tired. She went to bed and had a dream that she was a famous actor, but then fell into a pie and everyone laughed at her.
"Sandra..." she heard in her dream.
"Sandra..."
Sandra suddenly felt a great jolt and woke up. She kept her eyes closed as she rolled on her back. SHe sat up and slowly opened them.
There sat a man with a short white beard wearing a fancy robe that looked chinese-like.
"AAAAAAAAAAH--" Sandra tried to scream, but the man sealed her lips shut with a flick of his finger.
"MMMMMMMMMMMM!!!" Sandra screamed in her mouth.
"Sandra, hush."
"Mmm mm mm?!!!" Sandra mmmed. The man flicked his finger again and Sandra felt her lips unsealing like a food bag.
"Who are you?!!!" Sandra said.
"I am the one that keeps track of the magically gifted people in this world, and there are very few. But you are one of them."
Sandra felt like she was going to faint. "What?! No I'm not, I'm no Harry Potter! Although, you do look a bit like Dumbledoor..."
"Hush. Dumbledoor is living as Timmy Smith, a month old baby in Canada."
"Uh...???" Sandra wondered what this man was talknig about.
"Sandra, every 100 years someone is picked to have a great power. Yours is feeling the life after death. No one dies, exactly."
"Then how would it be life after-"
"Hush."
"You say hush a lot-"
"HUSH! Or if you prefer something different, QUIET! Anyway, after someone has died, their soul gets returned to a new body and they start over again. But their memory gets erased, so they think they're starting all over. You Sandra, have the special power and can see the life after death. Once you're dead, you will be returned to a new body, not as a baby though, and will watch over the people that go back to life after their death. You will be like a ghost."
Sandra just stared.
"Here, let me show you how it works." He waved his hand and a large green circle appeared in the middle of the room. Sandra stepped inside.
CHAPTER 3
FAMILY?!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Suddenly Sandra was flying through colorful swirls, memories flashing on the sides of her. She watched them. There was one which had a little baby and a very white person in it. And suddenly the baby started talking.
"Wha-what- is this Heaven? Why am I a baby?!"
"This is not heaven. You are re-starting your life."
"What?! I'm Frank Meyern, a jazz player and fan! I'm 87 years old, what do you mean i'm restarting?!"
"Every time someone's body dies, their soul finds a new body to live in, and so on forever."
"That's impossible! I've never heard of that-"
"Because everyone that hears it has their mind erased. You will now be sent to live with Steve and Sally Styners."
Sandra was awed. Was that her dad?! Or her grandfather, even?! It could be anyone in the chain.
The man touched the babies forehead and dissappeared.
"Ga-ga."
Sandra was suddenly pulled backwards and felt a great pain in her back as she flew backwards into her bed.
"OW!" Sandra yelled.
"That's how it works." Said the man.
"Yeah, just a question," Sandra said while rubbing her back, "whats your name?"
"My name is Dan Styners. Hello, grand-daughter."
CHAPTER 4 COMING SOON
LIFE AFTER DEATH
CHAPTER 1
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
---BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!--
Sandra slammed her hands down on her alarm clock and pulled the covers over her head.
"COME ON SANDRA, GET UP!!!" shouted Sandra's mom, Stacey, and clicked on the light.
"NO!" Sandra shouted back.
"Sandra Styners, don't make me get your father."
"NOOOOOOOOO!!!" Sandra screamed. She crawled to the end of her bed under the covers.
"Oh Jimmy!" Sanra's mom called. Sandra screamed.
"Yes, Stacey?"
"Get Sandra up." Sandra screamed again as she heard footsteps. She knew her father was right there when she felt the fiercest tickle of all, one that makes you scream and shout and cry, but not laugh the least bit.
"OK, I'm up, I'm up!" Sandra quickly jumped out of bed and got her outfit out.
"Works every time..." Jimmy mumbled as he walked downstairs to finish his eggs.
Sandra opened the door and ate.
"I WANT MY BANKY!!!" Sandra heard the screams of her 2 year old brother Joey. He walked over to my 15 year old sister Jessica and screamed (or spit) at her. "GIVE IT TO ME!!!"
"I don't have your blanket!" Jessica said back. Jessica is only 3 years older than me, but she seems a lot worse with little kids.
"GIMME!"
"Joey, you're holding your blankey." Sandra said. Joey looked down.
"Oh. OK." Joey took his blanket and wiped off some of the spit on Jessica's face.
"Thank you." Jessica said.
Well, meet the Styners family. And yes, this is a typical day for them.
CHAPTER 2
We picked you, Sandra...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sandra went through her school day as usual, reading, writing, lunch, recess, friends, social studies. When she got home she did her math homework. It was finding the square root of stuff.
"Uggg..." Sandra groaned. She finally got through it and went on the computer for a little while. She played VMK and did a few quests on there. Then she watched TV.
"And now back to, Phil of the Future." said the person that announces stuff. Sandra wondered what those were called while she watched her favorite episode, where Keely tries to get a boy and a girl together. She watched as Mr. Hackette, the vice-principal at their school, danced through the halls. Sandra giggled. That always made her laugh.
"Quack..." he quacked.
Commercials came on. A Cheetah Girls 2 music video came on.
"Oh i love this one!" Joey ran in the room and started dancing on the couch. The song ended.
"I want Sesame Street." Joey said.
"No Joey, I'm watching Phil of the futu-"
"SESAME STREET!"
"Fine, fine." Sandra put Sesame Street on the TV and went upstairs.
Time passed and Sandra got tired. She went to bed and had a dream that she was a famous actor, but then fell into a pie and everyone laughed at her.
"Sandra..." she heard in her dream.
"Sandra..."
Sandra suddenly felt a great jolt and woke up. She kept her eyes closed as she rolled on her back. SHe sat up and slowly opened them.
There sat a man with a short white beard wearing a fancy robe that looked chinese-like.
"AAAAAAAAAAH--" Sandra tried to scream, but the man sealed her lips shut with a flick of his finger.
"MMMMMMMMMMMM!!!" Sandra screamed in her mouth.
"Sandra, hush."
"Mmm mm mm?!!!" Sandra mmmed. The man flicked his finger again and Sandra felt her lips unsealing like a food bag.
"Who are you?!!!" Sandra said.
"I am the one that keeps track of the magically gifted people in this world, and there are very few. But you are one of them."
Sandra felt like she was going to faint. "What?! No I'm not, I'm no Harry Potter! Although, you do look a bit like Dumbledoor..."
"Hush. Dumbledoor is living as Timmy Smith, a month old baby in Canada."
"Uh...???" Sandra wondered what this man was talknig about.
"Sandra, every 100 years someone is picked to have a great power. Yours is feeling the life after death. No one dies, exactly."
"Then how would it be life after-"
"Hush."
"You say hush a lot-"
"HUSH! Or if you prefer something different, QUIET! Anyway, after someone has died, their soul gets returned to a new body and they start over again. But their memory gets erased, so they think they're starting all over. You Sandra, have the special power and can see the life after death. Once you're dead, you will be returned to a new body, not as a baby though, and will watch over the people that go back to life after their death. You will be like a ghost."
Sandra just stared.
"Here, let me show you how it works." He waved his hand and a large green circle appeared in the middle of the room. Sandra stepped inside.
CHAPTER 3
FAMILY?!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Suddenly Sandra was flying through colorful swirls, memories flashing on the sides of her. She watched them. There was one which had a little baby and a very white person in it. And suddenly the baby started talking.
"Wha-what- is this Heaven? Why am I a baby?!"
"This is not heaven. You are re-starting your life."
"What?! I'm Frank Meyern, a jazz player and fan! I'm 87 years old, what do you mean i'm restarting?!"
"Every time someone's body dies, their soul finds a new body to live in, and so on forever."
"That's impossible! I've never heard of that-"
"Because everyone that hears it has their mind erased. You will now be sent to live with Steve and Sally Styners."
Sandra was awed. Was that her dad?! Or her grandfather, even?! It could be anyone in the chain.
The man touched the babies forehead and dissappeared.
"Ga-ga."
Sandra was suddenly pulled backwards and felt a great pain in her back as she flew backwards into her bed.
"OW!" Sandra yelled.
"That's how it works." Said the man.
"Yeah, just a question," Sandra said while rubbing her back, "whats your name?"
"My name is Dan Styners. Hello, grand-daughter."
CHAPTER 4 COMING SOON