I wanted to make a thread to share all my poems with you, I just wrote this one less then a minute ago.

You lied
Your broke my heart
You did so much,
it's tearing us apart.
I was there when you cried,
to cry right along.
It's even making me sing a song.
I hate it when you do this to me,
I also hate the reason why.
Now no one will be there,
when i start to cry.

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What I liked about you,
has gone and past.
You don't even remember
when you seen me last.
Your so busy with your life
there's no time for me.
That's all I can see.
You think about yourself,
and that's all you love,
everything that i'd care about for you,
has flown away like a dove.

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Trust is fragile,
so is my heart.
It is easy to tear
right in two parts.
I thought I could trust you
I thought you where there for me
I told a deep dark secret,
and now I really see.
You can't keep a secret,
but really who can.
The fact that i'm writing this now,
should make you understand
my trust is big,
the same as your heart,
but the fact of what you want to do,
it's going to tear us apart.

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I have a secret,
not ready to tell,
because what you say,
will not be so swell.
I've loved you,
right from the start.
As soon as I seen you,
all I could hear was my heart pumping away
addrenillene(ugh) was stirring,
but i'm not ready to say.
Our eyes met,
I smiled and looked away,
I never thought,
our love would stay.

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You want to know why i'm different,
I want to know why you ask.
Remember when
you acted just like me?
I remember you following me,
curious about what I do.
What is up with you?
All you do is cry and moan,
about my hair and mood,
and why my eyes are blue.
It's because the sadness gained up,
and i'm about to go off on you.






I will be updating more later, please tell me what you think.

ooo nice poem isme

Thanks, I wrote that in 1 minute. I counted.

Love is like a rose
How long it last
No one knows...

Lol I had that for awhile

And I like yours alot Brooke

Thanks ShadowScamp!

EDIT: I added another poem!!

I add, yet again another poem. Please don't make me double post! Keep the comments coming!

can we add our own?

I would rather get comments, but as long as you don't add alot you can.

wow they are nice

and? lol he he

and? lol he he

...huh?.. What do you mean cute?

cool.
My heart is dull. My heart is black.
But everytime that I look back
At what I have become to be
I finally take time to see
That what is there, is not true
And in the darkness, here, I sit with you.

Did you really make that poem in 1min.? cause it's really good! ^_^

I wonder if any of these are about someone in VMK......

That would be odd.....

Thanks devitra! I haven't edited these yet, my writing teahcer used to use my poems as examples for the class. It was so embarrassing when they would stand up and clap.

but saraisme that si good! i write mine during math class and people dont know i do so mine are secret.. lol. It is good to be noticed!

Well, I have to submit mine and she always interuppts the class do read MY poems. Then for the rest of the day they stare at me and ask what else i've written.

EDIT: New poem added!!

lol be proud that people like your work.

lol

I just read these to my mom and she kept saying how "talented" her daughter is. LOL

hey poetry is talent.


oh man... those are good.. REALLY GOOD

Someone give me a problem.. I need to write something badly right now.

hmm... your best friend - who is a boy, you are a girl - is complaining. he is complaining about how you are the only one different form everyone else and he wants to know why you are different.

OOoooohhhh... good one. Working on it now.

lol. i used that for one of mine. I like to see how others inturpret(SP?) things.

OK, it's not so good. It's been added.

OMG!!! Mi Mi yous so talented!! those are so cool!!

just remember that im here for you and i want to see you be the best poet ever....no pressure :)

OMG!!! Mi Mi yous so talented!! those are so cool!!

just remember that im here for you and i want to see you be the best opet ever....no pressure :)

Thanks! I guess reading so much got me interested in poetry.

for not having 2 math classes, dats good mon.

sorry about all the wrong words i edited my post :)

I don't like writing silly poems for books >.< Only when i'm bored and i'm just with my friends.

for a poem...... that was awesome heres some advice write a book!

for a poem...... that was awesome heres some advice write a book!

Thanks Verminator!

writing books are fun... but take a long time! my version is here: www.xanga.com/emo_X_poems

Those are really good Devitra!

yeah but now my fingers hurt - shakes hand -. I have two comps and the one with all my poems does not have internet connection. So i had to hand write them all then type them. Ow.

thx

hey look i'm back with ice... yay ice!

omg is me.. i <3 them :)


<3 LoopyLoo


P.S. im gonna copy them into my notebook :)

Thanks Loopy!

awesome! um, i'll try to make 1 up...

ummmmmmm...
(thinking music)

oh i got 1

PIE
I like pie,
it's as soft as the sky,
when i eat it i say oh my,
i just love you pie.

hey give me credit i made it up in like 10 seconds.
ummmm... another...

LILY
My cousin Lily,
she is so silly.
she's not a hillbilly (?)
but she is lily

ok weird...

JACKSON
My cousin Jackson
he's always in action
he's really hyper, too,
and wears no socks when he wears a shoe
its true...

also weird... 0_o

BAILEY
my cousins had a dog,
we called him bails,
but his name was bailey.
he had cancer and tried to stay alive.
he couldnt eat, couldnt drink,
and he had to be dead.
before they put him to sleep,
he gave jackson 2 little licks on his head.

COUSINS
i love my cousins,
i love them so.
but one day,
they had to go.
they moved to ohio,
it's never been the same
everything reminds me of them
even a little board game.
their dog also died,
which is even worse.
for keeping him with them,
at least they tried.


well there they are, not as good as ismes of course (i do better with shorter poems)

LOL I love the jackson one. Thanks copper!

LOL i think my cousin is better than then Jackson stewert lol
WHOAH weird my cousin Lily (like Lilly from Hannah M.) and Jackson (Jackson Stewert) 0_o freakyyyy

Those poems are awesome. I <3 them mucho!

~Crazy

Thanks! I'm also writing poems on subjects people give me, so if you want one just ask!

Our love shall last
Till the dawn avast
Love shall live
Tho not in the past...

LOL I don't know if anyone will understand it but cummon! I was 6 years old give meh a break lol

Those poems got good meanings. ;)

Thanks Pin :)

Beautiful poems =).. I like them very much.

Thanks CSIfangirl! I get bored sometimes and make up a problem, and put myself in a situation with the problem.

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Bumppity bump bumps!!

those are good poems!

Thank ya!!

heh, i wish i was able to write poems...

Here, let's see if I can help you. First I give myself a problem, let's see like..: Your in love but they betray you. It can turn out like this.


I loved you,
right from the start.
I loved you so much,
I devoted my heart.
You ripped it out of my chest,
and our love is ruined.
You must hate me,
or love me the same.
Why must you keep,
playing these games?




Like that! Give yourself a problem and just rhyme until you come to a good ending.

those are beautiful :)

Thank you Goof!

Bumpers!!!!!

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wow those are so awesome :)

Awesome poems! You have so much talent, I really enjoyed reading them! It's such a great way to express how your feeling and what is on your mind in such a creative way! :luxhello:

nice poetry

Thanks you guys!

Bumpitys!!!!!!

Bumps!!!!!!!

Big Bumpity bumps..

Awesome Poems Isme.

Thanks ya. By the way, crying from Chapter 9 of your story. :bawling:

Aww :( My Story Tend To Do That.