View Full Version : Puppy Dog Madness


CountryGirlWannaBe
06-23-2006, 04:29 PM
this may be a short story but it is cute.



Chapter One
Once upon a time their lived a family and they had two puppies named angel and snow. They thought this wouldnt be a problem bc they thought they were a girl and a girl. but little did they know that they were a boy and a girl. So one day the family went out and were not comeing back until later that evening so the puppies dicided to have a few babies, 30 to be exact and half of them were boys and the other half was girls. so they called all the girl gabriela and the boys troy. So when the family came home all they saw was a masive clump of hair. they thought the dogs were just sheading, so they tried to pick up what they thought was fur and got biten.

Chapter Two
the dad got so mad that he just wanted to yell. but the little girl wanted to keep all the puppies but the mom disagreed and said they had to sell all the puppies. Except one. the little girl got to pick one and she called it spot. and they lived happily ever after.

PrincessKala
06-24-2006, 05:48 AM
Very Nice! But A couple speeling errors that's all! It's a begginging to a great story! Keep up the good work!

Sarahisme
06-26-2006, 03:56 AM
Constructive Criticism: It went into the problem a little to fast, and we haven't learned the names yet. But the plot/problem is great.