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SuperSnowCutie
05-07-2006, 01:26 PM
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That is Princess Raema
She is an Ethiopian Princess...

And Now It's Up To You!

Write A Story About Princess Raema and you might be lucky enough to win something on vmk!




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Cookielover
05-07-2006, 04:21 PM
Raema lived in a big castle in Etheopia along with the quenn and king. One day she was taking a walk in the city and met a guy named Ramand. He looked poor but she didn't care. They talked for a while and then they soon fell in love. Although Ramond didn't ask her what her name was so he searched everyday where they met. But there was no sign of her. Ramand made poster's of what she kind of looked like. But no one payed any attention. One lucky day Ramand was walking in the city and saw Raema's long black hair. So Ramand rushed over to her and hugged her. Raema was startled and releived. Then out of nowhere he asked Raema to marie him. Raema wasn't sure if her father and mother would allow it. So Raema took Ramand to the castle. They walked down the long halls of the castle. Ramand was amazed. Raema's heart was pounding wondering if her Father would let her cary on. When they got to the gigantic room of her father's she told him about how they met. Raema's father was not pleased. He quickly said " Get that poor thing out of my castle!" Raema made a mad face at him and disapeared into the dark hallway with Ramand. That night Raema snuck out and met Ramand outside where they first met. They went to the church nearby and got maried.

The End

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SuperSnowCutie
05-09-2006, 08:01 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!

- Claps -

SuperSnowCutie
06-10-2006, 02:14 PM
Anyone else?

xxChevelleAddict
06-12-2006, 06:19 PM
They eloped! How specially cute! :D

OK, I'll do a story. In my story, she falls in love, but not with who you would expect.

Part 1!!

One day, Princess Raema was walking through town. Soon, she went down a dark alley. She then fell upon a mystical land filled with snow. She didn't know whether to check it out, or to send her guards in. She decided to check it out. When she stepped in, a chill breeze swept across her. She was now very cold. She went back out to town, to find something warm for her to wear. But of course, it was summer in Ethopia, so there was no warm clothes on the market. She had to run all the way back to the castle, to get her warm garments. But she was scared she might lose the mystical land forever if she leaved it. So she decided to buy lots of red ribbon, to find her way back to the alley. She left the alley and went to the castle.

When she returned, she had warm garments. She couldn't wait. She had also brought her horse, knowing it would be nice to not have to walk everywhere in this snowy land. She and her horse, Carasol, stepped in. That same cold breeze swept over them. She and Carasol wandered around, mindlessly. They soon came upon fresh water. She was thirsty, and decided to have a drink. It was refreshing and cold. While drinking, she heard a splash. She looked up, bewildered. She then saw one of the cutest animals on the planet, a penguin.
TO BE CONTINUED.....

I'll do the rest in a little bit. But tell me what you think. :)

Alrighty then, no time for you all to think I suppose....
Anyways, here's Part 2.

Princess Raema walked up to this extraoridinary creature, and held out her hand, seeing that it was a very skinny penguin. The penguin soon came to her, knowing Raema had food. She gave him some food, wondering if she could bring this little guy back with her. She decided she would bring ice chests (Yes, this is the 21st century!) back here on her next visit. She told the penguin to stay put, and oddly, the penguin seemed to understand. He immediately sat down. Raema couldn't help but fall in love with this little creatures.

When Raema and Carasol came back, she had plenty of ice chests, to put the penguin and snow in. She would bring him back to their 21st century castle, and would ask her father to build a BIG ice chest world for her new friend. Raema was hoping he'd say yes. She put handfuls of snow in the ice chests, and then put the penguin in the biggest one. She, the penguin, and Carasol then went home to father.

While Raema and friends were walking home, Raema just couldn't decide what to name the penguin. She then decided, he would be named after her favorite food in the world, Waffles. When she got home, her father wanted to know what was in the chests. She showed him and told him the best explaination she could, but he was still very angry, what with her going into an uncharted land, how she could've been eaten alive! Raema told her father she was very sorry, but he wouldn't have it. She begged and begged, but he said NO. She was then punished and put to her room. Her father had told her that "Waffles" would be put back where he belongs. She couldn't bear this. She decided she would sneak out later in the week, and find him. But before she would sneak out, she would make an ice world for him, so he would not perish in the summer heat.

For days she built that ice capped room. Finally, on a Friday, she was finished. How did she finish in such a short time? I have no idea. I'm only the person that writes the story. Anyways, she sneaked out that very night, and brought Waffles back. He seemed very happy with his new home. She fed him and went to sleep, hoping her father would understand.

After many hours of explaining to her father how she needed Waffles, and how she loved him very much, her father gave in. Waffles was to be kept in that room for always though, and she was never to enter that snowy world again, or she could say good-bye to waffles. She agreed to this, planning her next explaination on how Waffles should be allowed to leave his room.

THE END!

SuperSnowCutie
09-10-2006, 08:07 PM
nice story!