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Lilly
04-28-2006, 11:01 AM
Hi there this is my Second Story Hope You Like it:wave2:

The Characters:Rani,Vidia,Ned,Tinkerbell,bess,Fira,pri lla
~*~at the Fairy Shop~*~

Shopkeeper:Welcome to the shop as a new member you can buy anything Free what will u Like?

Blue Dress:50$
Yellow Dress 50$
Pink Dress 50$
Princess Tira 500$
Pink Chair 20$
Purple Chair 20$
Blue Chair 20$
red Table 60$
Purple table 60$
Green Gate 100$
Purple Gate 100$
Flower bed 30$
Heart bed 30$
~*~Magic Books Shop~*~
Shopkeeper:Hello I see Your New Around did You Go to the Fairy Shop?
Vidia:Yes it has great stuff
Shopkeeper:I see here are some books
Dark Magic Book 30$
Fire magic Book 30$
Light Magic Book 30$
Earth Magic Book 30$
ShopKeeper:We will sell others Later want any?
Vidia:yes Fire magic Book Please
ShopKeeper:Here You Go

The next part is Job center anyone likes it please say

Lilly
04-28-2006, 02:03 PM
hey i am back with new parts
~*~Job Center~*~
Ned:Hello Need a Job?
Vidia:No
Ned:Then What Brings u here?
Vidia:I am New here can u tell me more about the city
Ned:Sure Thing,it a a very beautifull Village with No Stealers
Vidia:Oh, any way thx for the info
Ned:No Problem Can u do Me a Favor??
Vidia: Ok What is it
Ned:Can You Get Me a Light magic Book
Vidia:yeah but i dont have money
Ned:i will give you buy u get it
Vidia: Okay
~*~at the Room Center...~*~
bess:Hello
Vidia:Can i buy a room free
bess:are u new?
Vidia:yes
Bess:oh,I see you are going to the Magic shop?
Vidia:How did you Know??
Bess:Just Knowing
Vidia:so Can You Give me What i need?
Bess:I wanted to keep it but u can have it
Vidia:thx
Bess Np Yw
At the Job Center....
Vidia: Hey Ned!!!!!!!!
Ned:what? Oh Hi again
vidia: I have the Light magic book
Ned:Ty
Vidia:Your welcomed
ned:Do You have a room
Vidia:yes
Ned:here take this gate
Vidia:How did u Get so rich?
Ned:i work
Vidia:Oh
Home...
Vidia:wow i thought it was empty
Knock Knock!
Vidia:Who's There!
Ned: Its Me Ned!
Vidia:Come in Ned
Ned:thank u *Sits*
Vidia:need anything to drink
ned:Anything
Vidia:ok
*Vidia making tea*
Vidia:Here
Ned:thanks *Drinks*
Ned:MMMMMMMMM Nice!
Ned:okay vidia g2g
Vidia:Ok Bye!
ned: Bye!


The Next part is the Spell room till now no 1 asked me to complete Please Say what do say about my Thread
sorry for double post!