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BestGuestDrummer 04-23-2006, 04:42 AM For once I thought up an activity that doesn't have a new post every 5 seconds forcing you to change your post via editing! Sorry if this is in wrong forum mods!
Poems to me are awesome, since you can express feelings in the form of a story, although it's not 10 pages long;same thing with songs.Here's a peom that can be turned into a song and vice versa:
Dreams
It was just a dream, I know that now,
But was it trying to tell me something how?
Was that the way it was supposed to be?
You and me?
It's what all my friends have said,
And so I'm laying here in bed,
Working this out,
Finding a way,
To try and last...Another Day.
Real life; reality,
It's just not a thing that's really cut out for me.
Right is wrong, wrong is right,
Every disagreement turns into a fight.
Can't stand this world, got to get out somehow;
Life is a play and I'm taking my bow,
Decided to take my bow right now.
What's done is done, nothing can be said,
And so as usual I'm lying here in bed,
An escape from the outside world,
My own little fantasy,
But, if this was true,
Why is the thought of you still haunting me?
It was just a dream, I know that now,
But was it trying to tell me something how?
Was that the way it was supposed to be?
You and me?
It's what all my friends have said,
And so I'm laying here in bed,
Working this out,
Finding a way,
To try and last...Another Day.
MickeyForMayor 04-25-2006, 01:34 AM wow that was great i liked it alot i hope u don't mind but i saved it on my computer :) well mine is short but to the point kindof
Bridges are just a short cut from one problem to another………
yeah well idk if it is good :CastMem: :wave2:
TikiRoom 04-25-2006, 02:51 AM I actually took it off, but you can post on my thread of where to rate it.
berogurl 04-25-2006, 03:05 AM ok i think ill post my own so call dumb song post it in a bit( after i find it)
Masterbob 04-25-2006, 03:08 AM Here is this poem I wrote about Sleep...
I loved to sleep
I loved nothing but sleep
I slept through floods,fires, and hurricanes
The only friend I ever had was my mattress
I loved to sleep
But I refused to listen to my conscience telling me "Stop sleeping!"
I abused sleep and sleep was taking its revenge
But I was too naive to listen
I loved to sleep
Finally, when I least expected it
Sleep had its revenge
One day, I never woke up.
The end >.<
Please tell me if you like it :)
TikiRoom 04-25-2006, 03:15 AM Oh I wrote a song about Chimney's! well, not by meslef, I had help from 4 other peeps, it was a thing for PI
Chimney's Blow smoke
my eyes start to water
And I start to choke
when my house gets much hotter
It Kesp me so warm
I feel nice and happy
when i'm in my dorm
hugging my dog yappy
I'll always have a chimney
I'll have it my whole life
I sit w/ my friend Jimeney
And now I'm his wife....
Dun dun dun dun
dun dun dun dun
dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun dun
BadgerHockey 04-25-2006, 03:17 AM I Made Up a Poem! :)
If every tear i cried was how much i loved you, we would have rain storms baby.
And i found these poems..
I wrote your name in the sand, but the waves washed it away. I wrote your name on my hand but I washed it the next day. I wrote your name on a piece of paper but I acciedenatally threw it away... I wrote your name in my heart and forever it will stay!
I asked you if I was pretty, you said no.
I asked you if I was fat, you said yes of course.
I asked you if you wanted to be with me forever, you said no.
I asked you if you would cry if I walked away, you said no.
I had heard too much, and need to leave and
as I walked away..
You grabbed my arm and told me to stay.
You said...
Your not pretty, your beautiful.
The only thing fat, or big, about you is your heart.
I don't want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever.
And, baby, I wouldn't cry if you walked away...
I would die.
Those 2 poems ^ there are my favorite! Hope u enjoy too
berogurl 04-25-2006, 03:19 AM I finally found my song!( after looking in a notebook...) it called
Broken Heart
My love..... is gone
She took it,
But im not gonna throw my fist.......
Love.... was the only i had that was mine,
So im gonna....gonna
Chorus:
Take a stand of my life!
Help myself stand back up
so I can move on......
I have lost control of my life....
Wishing it would be the same.....
But I guess it cant be fix...
Chorus X2
oooohhhh.......
yeah...
My life..... Was perfect until...
She took it....away from me
So now.....
My heart all black and hurt....
Butwith the light guiding me...
I will survive.......
ChorusX1
I guess....A Heart......can be......fix......
Ooohhh Ooohh, yeah......Broken heart
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Just a song made by me i know it stinks
BadgerHockey 04-25-2006, 03:33 AM LOL it is good, im not a song writing more of a poet! :) if u want more of my poems just ask i only gave u 1 short poem.
berogurl 04-25-2006, 03:36 AM I like that poem you wrote but it sounded like a poem from somebody elsea long time ago
BadgerHockey 04-25-2006, 03:40 AM A FEW MORE POEMS!! LOL
DREAMS ARE LIKE WISHES
I wish dreams were like wishes, and wishes came true, cause in my dreams I'm always with you.
HEADS IN CLOUDS
My head is in the clouds...
My heart is in the sky...
My mind is in a dreamboat...
And you're the reason why.
CHANCE
I saw you everday, by your locker
I saw you everyday by your desk
I saw you everyday by your friends talking
And today I saw you break up w/your GirlFriend
That Is why i have a chance...
To see you more.....
To know you better...
To have someone to love in my life....
But now i know i have that chance!
<3PrettyInPink<3 04-25-2006, 03:52 AM One and Only Hero
Dedicated to All, men and women who serve in the armies, or even all people, who serve others, as in doctors(etc.)
As you walked..
in that rainy day..
You knew that,
I wouldn't go away
And I sat, by your side,
and sang song,
That stayed true,
Everyone, is a hero..
No one, can tell me no
I've seen branches and flowers
That grow into wonderful heros, like you,
So you said, sing my message
To my family, and ALl my loved ones,
And I said, that its only one
One, of that age
And as I stand here, singing your message
I remember the words you said
Don't cry, stand up tall
And do what's right
For your country, and for your life, to grow stronger
Even if that means, letting go
And so, You can be a hero
Don't say you cant no matter what you can
And dreams, can come true,
For you..
And for, me-
MickeyForMayor 04-25-2006, 10:30 PM HEADS IN CLOUDS
My head is in the clouds...
My heart is in the sky...
My mind is in a dreamboat...
And you're the reason why.
good one i like it:CastMem: :wave2:
Chaelle 04-25-2006, 11:47 PM These are some of my poems.
Like me as a friend for who I am.
Not what I can do
Why do you hate me?
Maybe because I’m different?
I don’t look like you?
I can’t change the way I was made.
I can’t change me like a rabbit out of a hat, no way I won’t do that.
Fine.
You have your friends, I‘ll have mine, but when your friends leave you remember me.
I tried to tell you, but you never did see.
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If I had a perfect friend it would be you,
There are so many things that we can do
Like reading books and skating too
I know that we will always be together,
Because we are best friends
Always and forever.
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Roses are red Violets are blue
The candy was sweet and you are too
But the chocolates are gone, the flowers are dead,
The bottle of soda is empty
And so is your head
I don’t want to break it to you,
But I have to
I should
I knew you wanted to leave,
I knew you would.
Maybe this is not the best time to say this
Maybe it is not the best place
But,
Leave my house
Get out of my face. :D
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We calmly say hi
But we are screaming inside
Are we friends forever?
Or just sisters together?
Will it be hard for you if I move away?
Or will happiness come to save the day?
It’s so difficult to think of white when all you see is black.
I’ve tried to search for good friendship
But I have not found any track
When we saw each other after 10 years
It was like living in a dream
Like sunshine on grass green
I know that we are a team
It’s time to say goodbye now
I don’t know when to say it
Or how
If life never had an ending
Then
We would never have a beginning
~Chaelle
<3PrettyInPink<3 04-26-2006, 11:31 PM My Poem
The Living Sign
Looking around
Trying to find that simple sign
But, nothing happening
Looking up
Finding, all the colors of the sunset
Tears roll down
Continuing to look
You see what you couldn't see before
"Momma.. Don't go"
You heard yourself say
And now, they left
left you, as you disbelieved
And, you never behaved
But, never will you find yourself
if you act the way you weren't taught
You, fight and curse
And yell and screech
Never caring about others
Until, the others leave
And, you're all.. alone
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