make a poem abotu
disney
disneyland
or a ride at disneyland

not vmk or anything else the winner will get invisible magic this will end bye tonight.so lets start

Inside Disneyland,
Near an awesome ride,
On the hot steaming bench,
A Mickey Mouse take a break.

what .....

Disney Land is a wonderful place

Were Magic dreams come true

Take my hand give a cheer

Let your Wildest Imaginations run wild

Even if ur Old you too can join the fun

But dont Forget the most important rule at Disney Land

Dreams Do Come True!

I love diseny!
dont you?
Its for all ages,old or new.
I will watch you on TV.
And maybe see Sleeping Beauty.
Oh i love you Disney...i do
I do


i know its bad >_<

lookincool is winning

lookincool is winning

if it ends at 12:00 just pm me if i win or not

P.S when is it ending

Disneyland is a place for you and me,

Come along and you can see.

All the adventures we can seek,

and All the magic... take a peek!

We can meet Mikey, Donald, Goofy too! :goofy: :donald: :mickeymo:

Daisey, Minnie , Pluto, and Pooh! :minniemo:

SO many rides to go on in just one day,

But it's okay we can do lot's today!

The day is ending, do not fear...

Come another time you hear.

All the Amazing fireworks beautiful with dazzle,

Upon the Wonderful Disneyland Castle.

Keep trying and reach for dreams,

It may come true as it seems.

Just remember someone cares, :)

Keep that in mind is one of my dares.

Forever more you may think,

Disneyland is there for you.....

Hook a trip at the following link! www.disneyland.com ;)

And remember...

" ♪ It was all started by a mouse. ♪ "

:) Hopes You like It! :)


Twï§+êl)-Pïnk

wow thats great looks like a tie

i love disney so nice and great i lile to play it all day when i go outside all i want to do is play disney for me and u

Maybe peoples should vote?

( If nobody else wants to give it a try at another poem )

ok thats a great idea

can i make another??? I guess a prepdition phase didnt interest you.......

The tune of Its a Small WorldDisneyLand Song
Its a big place, after all,
No matter if you're big or small,
Its a big place after all
its a big, big place.
Candies, popcorn and icecream
Food for all ages, and picky-eater menu's
Eat with a character, and much much more
Its a big big place
Rides with all fun games, in all
Innovations fun for all
Inventions, and cool new games
Its a big, big place
Quests for VMK, and much more
Stuff for you, and more galore
Do the quests, and gain some knowledge
Its a big, big place.
Roller Coasters all so fun
Mission Space, faster than some
Rides so fast, and some in space
Its a big big place
Its a big--, big--- Place!
-------------------------------Hope mine wins

yeah u can make another.,u have a limit of 3

kk...... uh let see * look at long list* ah maybe this 1:


Disney can be fun,

With all the rides and stuff.

But you never know who you will meet,

Maybe Mickey , Minnie, Goofy and much, much more,

Just believe in your dream and your wish will came true!

hmm u are winning now.

p.s i like it more if it gives u a magical feeling.

I EDIT mine ;)

Disneyland is the place to be. It can make you happy so bring your family! Ride the amazing rides like Matterhorn and such cause you know this is where you are too much.. That's not bad,Disney is fun, it will fill u with laughter and not just you but everyone! Do u know what's next..? Just guess! of course it's the fireworks going crazy like VMK going flaweless. If it weren't for Walt making this park, our lives would be dark as if we are missing something like a dog without a bark.Be Thankful that Walt was here, he saved our lives and gave us good cheer. Hope U LIke It!! :) - Goofyono

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ok look i got this in a pm and this is magical to me

My First Time

we drive.drive,continue to drive
cars speed past us
we wait egerly in the car
people say the place it great
pirates,ghosts,talking animals
princesses,castles,space ships
you can ride a taboggon
explore the the furture
venture through a temple
lands of fantasy,tomorrow,and adventure
we are here
we are here at disneyland

Wow, feels like we're all trying to make a poem for some WDW or DLR park deal commercial lol

Theres a world a laughter & a world of joy

It is disneyland after all it is disneyland after all

We could go on rides or see bugs fly in the air as they flair

It is disneyland after it is disneyland!

There is splash splash fun with out brer friend.

Where we can laugh all day in a log.

It is disneyland after all it is disneyland after all.

Disneyland is where dreams come true
Kids can play and ride rides too
The parents, well, they are already tired
But with Disney spirit, they wait for a while

The rides there are great
The food there, I ate
When you get all wet
You are sort of screaming, but you are all set!

Now as you see
Disney fills you with glee
So take some time off
And remember, don't cough!

Oh no :(. I have to redo mine now ;P. I have to poems, slightly similar. One:

When in crawls the night,
Out come the stars,
You feel a tingling,
Coming from afar.

All things Mickey,
All Things walt,
Doesnt it just,
Make you come to a halt?

Where the fairies Dance,
Where the young elves Dwell,
Somewhere deep down,
Where exactly,Nobody Can tell.

Disney is in you,
Part of your heart,
If you remember that, my friends,
Your off to a good start.

For the evening star,
The morning Rose,
Theres a magical place,
Of Which Nobody knows.

Remember, my friends,
Remember, my foes,
Theres always A place,
Where you can warm your toes.

Singing 'Tiddly Pom' With Pooh,
So much fun,
Disney Brings Us,
Laughter by the Ton.

So, Dont you go off,
Forgetting What I've Said,
Just Clear your mind,
And rest your head.

And try as you might,
As hard as can be,
Then, maybe one day...
You can find in your heart, A place called Disney.

~ Straw

I love disney you do too

its so fun that u can come too

disney is great for me and you

you will love it cause walt is there too

I look and see a fast ride u see

Its tall and the color orange

It takes place back in the old west times

Of course its Big thunder Mountian you see!

I just made this up right now enjoy, I will post another 1 later.

Making up words every day, thats my life in vmk.
Playing pirates every day, that's my life in vmk.
But it is sad that every day is not your life on vmk.