Hey Y'all!
Below the Lines will be my Essay for CL! Plz Post stuff to make it better! plz Post!

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Hi my Name is CuteHaliey, and with your Help I’ll be CL_CuteHaliey! All my friends are Community leader's as well! Like CL_SonofShine, CL_Nedakh, CL_Supergirl, CL_MrGenie, CL_LeanaSpin, CL_Flythenfall, CL_Enderz, CL_ChrisR, CL_Jones and more! They all had a great influence on me! They also encourage me to sign up for Community Leader! So without further ado let me give u examples of why *I* CuteHaliey should Be Community Leader!

~~Examples~~

1. I’ll Never hack into the system or into Anyone’s Account!
2. I’ll Never describe ****** acts to other Players! That is Gross! If I ever heard ‘ U want to be my Girl/boy’ I said ‘Gross!’ I’m Against the Boy friend Girl friend!
3. I’ll never ask other Players for their passwords, e-mail addresses, telephone numbers or other personal information. Say No I’m not telling u!
4. I’ll never give away, trade or sell my VMK Character! I mean how stupid is that! I saw a Girl Saying do u want my kid! If u do what would u give? The other girl said ok I’ll give Furniture! The did do that! I reported them Both!
5. I always have fun! It so much fun! I’ll play 15/7/365! (because that how long VMK is open!)
6. do my best to help people around me in the Kingdom, whether it be warning some one they are doing something wrong before a cast member does! Or telling people how to get through the
cave in the Hide 'n Seek Forest or even telling people what is wrong with things in there rooms that are caused by bugs!
7.I have never been warned or banned by a Cast Member! Which is a Good thing!
8. I am hardworking and determined!
9. I have over 300 posts on the fan site!
10. I am on VMK constantly!

I hope u accept this application! This Position really me a lot to me! If I don’t get it, I would still be happy to play VMK!:)
Your friend,
CuteHaliey (or CL_CuteHaliey in the future ;) )

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Thx for listening!

Wait, aren't you JulietaJulieta on VMK?

Wait, aren't you JulietaJulieta on VMK?
Let me tell Y'all a Secert! - whisper - I only wantd to be JulietaJulieta Cause i didn't know Cutehaliey's B-day i knew JulietaJulieta B-day! And i Really wanted to be a CL! And Know that DuckWucky(AKA Allstar) Gave me the Address for me to know my B-day i'm Sign Cutehaliey as CL!

nice essay.
better than mine. :lol:
if I become a CL then you are probably a CL.
even if i don't you still are going to be one.

Its very nice. :) But lots of the stuff you posted you would not do as a CL is things nobody should do. I would think they want to know more of what you WOULD do.

Its very nice. :) But lots of the stuff you posted you would not do as a CL is things nobody should do. I would think they want to know more of what you WOULD do.
Good
Idea

Good luck on your application! The only thing I might change is that you ended every sentence but one with an exclamation point! I know you are trying to convey a sense of enthusiasm! Still, you might sound more professional if you replace some of the exclamation points with periods! :D

Why do we have to help her?

Azure why is your text so big please SHRINK IT!!!Big text is really annoying!

Good luck on your application! The only thing I might change is that you ended every sentence but one with an exclamation point! I know you are trying to convey a sense of enthusiasm! Still, you might sound more professional if you replace some of the exclamation points with periods! :D
Alright Genie thx!

Why do we have to help her?
WHat did I do to u!?

Nothing... All I was just saying is that nobody helped out other people with their applications!!

Good luck on your application! The only thing I might change is that you ended every sentence but one with an exclamation point! I know you are trying to convey a sense of enthusiasm! Still, you might sound more professional if you replace some of the exclamation points with periods! :D
Funny how you did the same thing (on purpose I assume). :Tongue:

I'm sorry as soon as I get glasses

I'm sorry as soon as I get glasses

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It is a great essay! CuteHaliey is going to be CL_CuteHaliey for sure. But i agree with (i forgot who said it) that you need to include that you will help others and know how to get your way around VMK.

Good Luck

Paris

-I, Paris, am also seeking to become a community leader... I don't know If I should post my essay here but...
Just tell me if it is ok Disney..

That seems like a very good essay!

That's very good reasoning and a good app. Hope they like it too!